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阅读下面材•料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文When Igave a gift to my momfor thefirst time,she toldme acustom”.There was a countrywhere ifyou visiteda（有义务的）house andpraised somesmall items,the ownerswould feelobligated togive itto youasa gift.I didntrememberthe nameof thecountry;However,what Idid rememberwas that the onlyother placeI witnesseda similarpracticewas inmy ownmothers home.Recently Ihad beenworrying forweeks about a Mothers Day giftfbr my mom,as therewas always the danger that agiftgiven tomom wouldquickly comeback tome.If Ibought hersomething wearable,she immediatelyfound itfit meperfectly.If Igave hera plant,she cutoff thetop forme totake home and rootedin aglass ofwater.If Igave hersome food,she wantedme tostay forlunch andeat it.My dad,a manof greatwisdom,had givenup ontraditional shoppingfor mymom longago.Instead,he haddevelopeda beautifultradition ofwriting shortpoems.On everyimportant occasionhe wrotea shortpoem inwhich hetoldof theirmeeting,wedding,and latermarriage life.After nearly30years ofpoems,Dad beganto worrythat his poeticinspiration haddried up.When Icame into the room,he wastroubled aboutwriting apoem asa gift.Our eyesmet,and thenwe decidedto asksomeonefor help,preparing a gift together.So wereached out to mygrandmaWe finallyprepared anideal gifton Mothers Day,waiting for my momsreturning.注意（）续写词数应为个左右；1150（）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2续写需要回答的问题Who helpedthem preparethe giftMygrandma helpedthem preparethe giftby suggestingusing theold photo albums in the attic.What was the giftthey finallypreparedThey prepareda special photo bookwith selectedphotos fromold albumsand handwritten notes besideeach photo.How didmom reactto the giftMom wasdeeply touched.Her eyeswidened,a tear rolled down her cheek,and she said it was the most wonderful giftshe hadever received.What didthe authorlearn fromthis experienceThe author learnedthat the best gifts are not about material things but about the love and thought we put into them.Why wasthe photo book agood giftThe photo bookwas agood giftbecause itcontained preciousmemories of moms childhoodand familygatherings,and thehandwritten notesadded personalfeelings,making ita heartfeltpresent.故事主旨The storyshows that the mostvaluable gifts are thosefilled withlove,thought,and cherishedmemories ratherthanexpensive orfancy items.It emphasizesthe importanceof understandingwhat trulymatters toour lovedones andusingthat knowledgeto createmeaningful gifts.故事山Beginning Theauthor hastrouble finding a suitableMothers Day gift formom dueto hercustom ofgiving backgifts.Dad alsofaces aproblem withhispoeticinspiration fora gift.Rising ActionTheauthorand daddecide toask someonefor helpand reachoutto grandma.Climax Theycreate aspecialphoto book asagift,filled withcarefully selectedphotos andhandwrittennotes.Falling ActionMom returnsand receives the gift.End Momis deeplymoved bythe gift,and the author realizesthe truemeaning ofgiving gifts.故事发展线索The storystarts with the difficultyof choosinga MothersDaygiftThen,the fatherand theauthor seekhelp fromgrandma.After gettingthe idea,they createa photobook.Finally,mom receivesthe giftand istouched.情感线索At first,there isanxiety andworry aboutfindingagift.After gettingthe ideafrom grandma,there isexcitement andanticipationwhile creatingthe gift.When momreceivesthe gift,there isdeep emotionand asense ofrealization for theauthor.续写布局与框架The firstparagraph focuseson howthey gotthe ideaforthegift fromgrandma andwhat theydid tocreate it.Thesecond paragraphdescribes momsreaction tothegiftand theauthors realization.续写注意事项承接原文续写The startswith theaction ofreaching outtograndma,which directlyfollows theprevious paragraph.The elementsof thegift-giving problemand thesearch fora solutionare carriedforward.整体设计The overallstory isdesigned tolead toa meaningfulgift-giving moment.The choiceof aphotobookasa giftties inwiththe family-centered themeof the story.工妙设计5The useof grandmassuggestion isa cleverway tosolve thegift-giving problem.The handwrittennotesin the photobookadd a personal touch.高分语句呼应原文“There wasalwaysthedangerthat agiftgiven tomom wouldquickly comeback tome.,,This lineat thebeginningsets upthe problem,and thesolution of creating anon-material,memory-filled giftlater inthestoryrespondsto thisinitial issue.高级句型When she opened thedoor,we presentedthephotobook to her withexcitement.,,The useof the“when”clause atthe beginningof thesentence makesthe descriptionmore vivid.“Her eyeswidened asshe flippedthrough thepages,and atearrolleddownhercheek.The useof as”to showthe simultaneousactions andthe parallelstructure ofthetwo clausesadd complexitytothesentence.主题表达意义延伸直接弓I语点明主旨“This isthemostwonderfulgiftIve everreceived/9mom said,emphasizing thevalue ofthegift notin itsmaterial worthbut inthe sentimentbehind it.促成转变，弓发感吾I TThe processofcreatingthegiftand momsreaction causetheauthorto realizethat thebest giftsarenotaboutmaterialthingsbutaboutthe love andthoughtweputintothemJ showingapersonalgrowth andadeeper understandingof gift-giving.借象征物，点明主旨Thephotobook,filled withmemories,symbolizes theintangible yetprecious thingsin life.It representstheloveand connectionwithin thefamily,highlighting thetheme thatmeaningful giftsare thosethat touchtheheart.学生写作示范第一段So wereached outto mygrandma.She satus downand listenedpatiently aswe pouredout ourconcerns.Yourmother hasalways hada softspot forthefamilyrecipes passeddown throughgenerations/9grandma saidwith atwinkle inhereye.“Why notcompile thoserecipes into a beautifulbook Addsome photosof her cooking orfamily meals.My dadandI lookedat eachother,excitement building.We immediatelygot towork.We gatheredall therecipes wecould find,some scribbledon oldpieces ofpaper,others typedneatly.We scannedold photosofmominthekitchen,her facebeamingas sheprepared deliciousmeals.We arrangedeverything in a binder,decorated thecover with a drawingof acooking pot,and addedlittle notesabout ourfavorite memoriesrelated toeach dish.第二段We finallyprepared anideal gifton MothersDay,waiting formy momsreturning.When momwalked throughthedoor,we rushedtoher,presenting therecipe book.Her handstrembled assheopenedit,her eyesscanning thepages filledwithmemories.“Oh,my dearsJ shesaid,her voicecracking.This ismore thanI couldhave everdreamed of.In thatinstant,I understoodthatthemost preciousgiftsarethe onesthat arecrafted withloveandmemories.This MothersDaywas notjust aboutgiving apresent;itwasabout showingmom howmuch wevalued thetraditions andlove shehad sharedwithus throughhercooking.It wasa daythat wouldbe etchedin ourhearts forever,teaching methe trueessence ofgift-giving.【答案】范文So wereached outto mygrandma.Having beenasked howto chooseagiftformymom,grandma letoutasoftchuckle,withaknowing gaze,and revealedthatthecustom”my motherhad toldme wasimaginary.She firmlybelievesyou deserveall the wonderful things.This isher wayof expressinglove foryou withoutasking foranything inreturn.shesaid tome meaningfully.Tears brokefree whenI recalledcountless sacrificesmom hadmade formeandmy father.Apicture isworth athousand words.We realizedthataphoto albumwasthebestgiftto evokethewonderfulmemories.Itwas thephotos thatwere likeprecious memorycapsules whichDad selected,and wecompiled themintoabeautiful photoalbumwith tendercare.We finallyprepared anideal gifton MothersDay,waiting fbrmy momsreturning.With thearrival of mymom,myheart waspounding nervously.Father andI said,“Happy Mother9sDay!”inaloud voice,handing thephotoalbumwe hadprepared.Waves ofhappiness andexcitement welledup inher eyes.This isthebestIve evergot,“shesaidtremulouslyand tookme inher arms.From thenon,our bondgrew stronger.Seeing thegift alwaysreminded herofmylove.Motheroften mentionedthe memorableMothersDaytomydad,beaming withpride.For me,seeing mymothers happinessmademe realizethe powerof love.It wasa preciousmemory inmy heartforever.。
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