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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文Suddenly I felt my face turn red with embarrassment..How couldI havenever noticedEveryChristmas my mother enjoyedcreating specialmemories andtraditions for herfamily.Mom lovedChristmas-the shopping,cooking,decorating,music,gifts eventhehustle andbustle(拥挤喧器)the seasonbrings.Her enthusiasmencouraged mybrother,sister,and meto experiencethe joyand wonderof the season.Although wecould receivevariousgifts,we weretaught thatthe realreason for theseasonwas tocelebrate thegettingtogether of the wholefamily.Many yearshave passedsince Iwas achild.Yet Ican stillsmell thearoma(香味)ofMoms sugar cookies as she prepared a specialtreat forher family.These sweetswere asuresign thatChristmas Daywas near.On ChristmasEve my mother laidall our stockings under the beautifullydecoratedpine treemy fatherhad pickedout andcut downin theforest.Later,in themiddle of thenight,she secretlyfilled the stockings.The nextmorning weexcitedly openedour gifts,leaving ourChristmas stockingsfor last.Our stockingswere alwaysfull oftiny toys,trinkets,nuts,oranges,apples,and colorfulhard candiesin variousshapes andsizesIn mytwenties,I wentChristmas shoppingwith afriend.She beganlooking forasmall giftto placein her mothers stocking.“You fixa Christmas stocking fbryourmother」asked.“Yes,she replied.Every yearI filla stockingwith littletreats andhaveit waitingforheron Christmas morning.I couldntbear fbrmy motherto nothave aChristmas stocking,especially sinceshe preparesone foreveryone else.Thats whenIfeltmyfaceturnredwithembarrassment.I realizedmymotherhad nothada Christmasstocking foras longas Iremembered.And,even worse,no onehad noticedherstocking wasmissing.注意
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答My sisterand Iwere determinedto start a traditionof ourown thatyear.Looking atthe stocking,mymothers eyes filled with tears.续写中需要回答的问题
1.What didthe author and her sister doto startthe new traditionThe author and her sister secretlypreparedaChristmasstocking for their mother,filling itwith varioussmall giftsand treats.
2.How didthey getthe items for the stockingThey wentshopping together,carefully choosingtiny toys,trinkets,nuts,fruits,andcolorful candiesJust like theirmotherused to do forthem.
3.When didthey presentthe stockingto theirmotherThey presentedthe stockingto theirmother on Christmasmorning,after she hadopened othergifts.
4.What didthe mothersay ordo when she saw the stockingThemother wasspeechless atfirst,then hereyes filled with tears of joy.Shehugged the author and her sistertightly,expressing hergratitude.
5.What didthe experienceteach theauthorThe experiencetaught theauthor theimportance ofreciprocating love andthoughtfulness,and thatsmall gesturescan bringgreat happiness.故事主旨The storyemphasizes thesignificance offamily traditions,the selflesslove ofa mother,and the realization of the needto reciprocatethat lovethrough simpleyet meaningfulactions.It showshow along-overlooked detailcan becomea turningpoint fora newandcherished familytradition.故事山•Beginning:The authorrecalls thewonderful Christmastraditions createdby hermother,including makingsugarcookies,decorating the tree,and fillingstockingsfor the family.•Middle:The author,in hertwenties,is surprisedto learnthat herfriend fillsastocking forhermother.She realizesthat herown motherhas neverhad aChristmasstocking.•End:The authorand hersister starta newtradition bypreparing astocking fortheirmother,which deeplytouches her.故事发展线索Childhood Christmasmemories—Adult realizationof mothersmissing stocking一Decision to startanewtradition—Preparation ofthe stocking—Mothers reaction情感线索Joy andnostalgia forchildhood ChristmasEmbarrassment attherealization—一Determination to make achange Anticipationwhile preparingthe stockingHappiness一一and emotionalconnection whenmother receivesthe stocking续写布局与框架Paragraph1:•Start with the determinationoftheauthorandhersister.•Describe theirshopping process,choosing itemssimilar tothose in their ownchildhoodstockings.•End withthem secretlyplacing the stocking under the treeonChristmasEve.Paragraph2:•Begin withthe mothersinitial reactionwhenshesees the stocking.•Include heremotional response,such ascrying andhugging thesisters.•End withtheauthorreflecting onthe newtradition andits significance.续写注意事项•承接原文Continuously referback to the motherspast Christmaspreparations forthe family,like thetypes ofitems in the stockingsand theoverall festiveatmosphere.Use phraseslike just likethe stockings Momfilled fbr us orthesame kindof candieswe usedto find”.•整体设计Keep thetone warmand family-centered.Ensure thatthe actionsof theauthorandhersister arein linewiththefamily-oriented Christmasspiritestablished inthe originalstory.•巧妙设计Add somesmall details,such asa specificmemory associatedwith oneofthe itemsinthe stocking ora uniqueway thesisters decoratedthe stockingtomake itmore personal.高分语句•呼应原文“Just asMom hadalways filledourstockingswith love,we now filledhers withtokens of our appreciation,emulating thetraditions shehad solovinglycreated fbrus.”•高级句型“It wasnot untilthat moment,when wesawthetearsofjoy inMomseyes,that wetruly understoodthe profoundimpact ofthis simpleyet meaningfulgesture.”(强调句)主题表达意义延伸•直接引语点明主旨“This isfor you,Mom Jwe said.Youve alwaysmadeChristmas specialfbrus.Now itsour turntomakeit specialfor you.”•促成转变,引发感悟The experiencenot onlybrought joyto themother but alsomade theauthorandhersistermore awareoftheimportance ofshowing gratitude.It taughtthem thattraditions arenot justabout repetitionbut also about evolvingand adapting toexpress love.•借象征物点明主旨:The stocking,nowfilledwith loveforthemother,became asymbolofthecycle oflove inthefamily,passing fromone generationtothenext.学生写作示范学生写作示范一My sisterand Iwere determinedto starta traditionof ourown thatyear.We wentshoppingtogether,carefully selectinga beautifulstocking for Mom.We pickedout tinytoys thatremindedus of our childhood,trinkets thatwe thoughtshe wouldlike,and avariety ofnuts,oranges,and apples.Just likeMom usedtodo,we alsobought colorfulhard candiesindifferent shapes.On ChristmasEve,after Momhad goneto bed,we quietlyplaced thestockingunderthetree,filledwithour carefullychosen gifts.Looking atthestocking,my motherseyes filledwith tears.She wasspeechless foramoment,overcome withemotion.Then she pulled us into a tight hug,saying,I neverexpectedthis.It meansthe worldto me.We spentthe morningtogether,laughing andsharingstories aswe watchedMom exploreeach item in herstocking.This newtraditionnot onlybrought joyto Mombutalsomade ourbond asa familyeven stronger.It taughtusthe importanceof givingback thelove thatwe hadreceived allthese years.学生写作示范二My sisterand Iwere determinedto starta traditionof ourown thatyear.We plannedeverythingin secret.We visitedseveral stores,searching forthe perfectitemsfor Momsstocking.We founda small,hand-carved woodenornament thatwe knewshe wouldlove.We alsobought someof herfavorite nutsand abox ofhigh-quality chocolates.Afterfilling thestocking,we carefullyhung itnext tothe onesshehadprepared forus.Looking atthestocking,my motherseyes filledwith tears.She lookedup atus,her facebeamingwith happiness.You girlsare sothoughtful Jshe said,her voicechoked withemotion.We sataround thetree,chatting andenjoying themoment asMom tookout eachitemone byone.This simpleact oflove hadtransformed ourChristmas.It madeus realizethatthe trueessence ofChristmas liesinthesmall,unexpected gesturesof kindnessandlove withinthefamily.学生写作示范三My sisterand Iwere determinedto starta traditionofourown thatyear.We pooledourmoney andwent ona missionto createthe mostspecial stockingforMom.We foundavintage-style stockingwith beautifulembroidery.Then wewent toa localmarket forfreshfruits andnuts.We alsobought somescented candlesand acute keychain.On ChristmasEve,we placedthestockingin aprominent placeunderthetree.Looking atthestocking,my motherseyes filledwith tears.She wasvisibly moved.Shewalked overto us,hugging ustightly.This isthe mostwonderful Christmasgift ever,“shesaid.As wesat together,Moms excitementasshediscovered eachiteminthestockingwaspalpable.This newtradition hadadded anew layerof warmthto ourChristmas.It taughtusthat familytraditions arenot justabout thepast butalsoaboutcreating newmemories andshowinglove inevery possibleway.参考答案续写第一段My sisterand Iwere determinedtostarta traditionofourown thatyear.We immediatelysetout tobuy astockingforMom.We founda beautifulred stockingwith whitefur trim,justlikethe oneswe usedto have.Then,we brainstormedabout whatto putinside.Webought herfavorite chocolates,a smallscented candle,andacute littlebook ofChristmasstories.On ChristmasEve,after Momhad goneto bed,we quietlyfilled thestocking andplacedit underthetree,right nextto ours.We couldhardly sleepthat night,filled withanticipationforMomsreaction.续写第二段Looking atthestocking,my motherseyesfilledwithtears.She wasspeechless fora fewmoments,overcome withemotion.Then,shepulledusintoatightembrace.nThis isthemost wonderfulgift Iveever received/she said,her voicetrembling.As sheopened thestockingand tookout eachitem,she smiledand laughed,reminiscing aboutour childhoodChristmases.From thatday on,filling Mom!sstockingbecame acherished partof ourChristmastradition.It wasa smallway forus toshow ourloveandgratitude forall thewonderfulChristmases shehad givenus overthe years.。
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