读后续写+神秘老屋的惊险探秘+讲义 高一下学期3月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文One sunnySaturday afternoon,16-year-old Jack,along withhis bestfriend Tom,decided toexplorethe oldabandoned houseat theend of their street.The househad beenempty foryears,its（用木板封住）windows boarded up andthe frontyard overgrownwith grass.There wereall sortsof（闹鬼的）,rumors aboutthe place,some sayingit washaunted whileothers claimedit wasfilled withhiddentreasures fromits formerowner.Jack andTom wereboth adventurousboys andthe mystery of the old housedrew themin.As theycarefullypushed open the oldfront door,a cloudof dustrose up,making themcough.Inside,the airwasmusty andthe furniturewas coveredin thicklayers ofdust.Sunlight shonethrough thenarrow gapsinthe boardedwindows.They walkedslowly,their eyeswide withcuriosity asthey examinedthe old,broken items.（绊脚）Suddenly,Tom stumbled upon asmall,locked wooden box hiddenunder apile ofoldnewspapers inthe comerof theliving room.Look atthis,Jack!^^Tom shouted,holding upthe box.Jacks eyeslit up.“I wonderwhats insideJ he said,trying to openthebox butfailed.Just then,they hearda strangenoise comingfrom upstairs.It soundedlike footsteps,slow and（嘎吱作响）heavy.Jack andTom froze,their facesturning pale.The floorboardsabove creakedunderthe weightof somethingunseen.A spider web brushedToms faceas hesuddenly steppedbackward,（轻微的划痕）cold sweatsoaking throughhis collar.Through the dusty air,they noticedfaint scratchesonthe stairs.What wasthat”Tom whispered.I dontknow,“Jack replied,his heart pounding in hischest.Maybe itsjust thewind or something.But thenoise cameagain,louder thistime,and theyweresure itwasnt thewind.注意续写词数应为字左右

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150.请按如下格式在相应位置作答2Paragraph1:Jack andTom lookedat eachother,fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes.Paragraph2:After awhile they managed to calm down a bit.文本主旨本文讲述了两个岁男孩杰克和汤姆，出于好奇去探索街尾一座废弃多年且充满神秘传16说的老房子的故事他们在房子里发现了一个上锁的小木盒，正当他们试图打开时，却听到楼上发出奇怪的声响，仿佛有人在走动，这让他们感到极度害怕故事围绕着冒险、好奇心以及面对未知时的恐惧展开五要素分析人物（）Characters杰克（）岁，好奇心强，勇敢但也会害怕，是故事的主角之一Jack16汤姆（）杰克的好朋友，同样充满冒险精神，但在面对恐惧时也会感到不安Tom地点（）Setting废弃老房子位于街尾，空置多年，窗户被木板封住，院子里杂草丛生，充满了神秘和恐怖的氛围时间（）Time一个阳光明媚的周六下午时间的选择增加了故事的对比感，阳光明媚的下午与阴森恐怖的老房子形成鲜明对比事件（）Events探索老房子出于对神秘传说的好奇，杰克和汤姆决定进入老房子探险发现小木盒在客厅角落的旧报纸下发现了一个上锁的小木盒，增加了故事的悬念听到奇怪声响楼上突然传来奇怪的声响，仿佛有人在走动，让两人感到极度恐惧主题（）Theme冒险与恐惧故事通过两个男孩的冒险经历，展现了好奇心驱使下的冒险精神以及面对未知时的恐惧心理友谊与勇气尽管害怕，但两个男孩始终在一起，互相支持，体现了友谊的力量词汇积累（废弃的）abandoned（用木板封住）boardedup（发霉的）musty（好奇心）curiosity（偶然发现）stumbledupon（上锁的小木盒）locked wooden box（嘎吱作响）creaked（蜘蛛网）spiderweb（轻微的划痕）faint scratches（脸色苍白）pale（心跳力口速）heartpounding（喘不过气来）gasping forbreath（震惊的）shaken（负担）burden（让他们的思想平静下来）put theirminds atease续写分析衔接句第一段使用作为开头，“Jack andTom lookedat eachother,fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes.”直接延续上文的紧张氛围第二段使用“After awhile theymanaged tocalm downa作为开头，自然过渡到两人情绪的缓和，为后续的情节发展做铺垫bit.”情节合理性第一段描述两人在恐惧中的反应，包括试图逃离房子和对未知的猜测，符合人在恐惧时的本能反应第二段描写两人在安全环境下的情绪恢复和对下一步行动的思考，符合情节发展的逻辑情感铺垫第一段通过描写两人恐惧的表情和动作，如、“fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes“their hearts等，增强了故事的紧张感pounding”第二段通过描写两人在安全环境下的情绪恢复，、^managed tocalm downa bit“gasping for等，为后续的情节发展提供了情感基础breath”情感走向第一段情感走向是恐惧和紧张，两人在听到奇怪声响后感到极度害怕，试图逃离房子第二段情感走向是逐渐平静和理性思考，两人在安全的环境中逐渐恢复平静，开始思考如何处理发现的小木盒主题深化冒险与恐惧通过续写进一步展现了两个男孩在面对未知和恐惧时的心理变化，深化了冒险与恐惧的主题友谊与勇气两人在恐惧中互相支持，最终决定一起面对未知，体现了友谊的力量和勇气的重要性下水文一Paragraph1:Jack andTom lookedat eachother,fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes.Without aword,they bothknew theyhad to get out of there.Jack reachedfor the locked woodenbox,clutching ittightlyas ifit weretheir onlyhope.They backedaway slowly,their heartspounding intheir chests.The noisefrom upstairs grew louder,and theycould feelthe coldair on their necks.Suddenly,a shadowmovedacross theceiling,and theyboth letout agasp.Jacks mindraced withthoughts ofghosts andhiddendangers.We needtogetoutofhere,“Tom whisperedurgently,his voicetrembling.Jack nodded,andthey turnedto run,their footstepsechoing throughthedustyhallways.Paragraph2:After awhile theymanaged tocalm downa bit.They foundthemselves outsidethehouse,gasping forbreath and trying tomake senseof whathad happened.The sunlightfelt warmandcomforting ontheir faces,and theyrealized howfoolish theyhad beento ventureinto sucha place.Jacklooked at the lockedwoodenbox inhishands,now feelingmore likea burdenthan atreasure.What doyouthink wasup there^^Tom asked,still shaken.Jack shrugged,his curiosityfading intofear.Maybeit wasjust anold animalorsomething,he suggested,though hedidnt reallybelieve it.They decidedtotake thebox toJacks house andtrytoopenit there,hoping tofind someanswers andput theirminds atease.下水文二Paragraph1:Jack andTom lookedat eachother,fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes.The strangenoisesfromupstairsseemed togrow louderwith eachpassing second,making theirhearts raceevenfaster.Jacks handtightened aroundthe smallwoodenbox,as ifholding ontoit couldsomehow protectthem.We shouldleave/5Tom said,his voicebarely abovea whisper.Jack nodded,feeling acold sweattricklingdown hisback.They turnedand ran,their footstepspounding onthe oldfloorboards.As theyreachedthe frontdoor,they hearda loudthud fromabove,followed bya chillingsilence.They burstoutof thehouse,slamming the door behindthem.Paragraph2:After awhile theymanaged tocalm downa bit.Standing inthe brightsunlight,theytried tosteady theirbreathing andmake senseoftheterrifying experience.Jack heldthe lockedwoodenbox closeto hischest,feeling amix offear andcuriosity.What iftheres somethingdangerous insidethatbox”Tom asked,his eyeswide withconcern.Jack shookhis head,trying toreassure hisfriend.WeUl neverknow unlesswe openit J hesaid,determination inhis voice.They decidedto takethe boxtoJacks houseand finda wayto unlockit.As theywalked downthe street,the sunfelt likea comfortingblanket,but themysteryoftheoldhouseandthelockedbox stillweighed heavilyontheirminds.【答案】范文Jack andTom lookedat eachother;fear clearlyvisible intheir eyes.The creakinggrewlouder,accompanied byfaint whispersechoing throughthe decayingwalls.Jack tightenedhis gripon thewoodenbox,his palmssweating.6tWe needto leavenow!”Tom urged,backing towardthedoor.But一before theycould move,a shadowyfigure appearedatthetop ofthe stairs.The boysgasped anoldman witha walkingstick stoodthere,his faceweathered butkind.You shouldntbe hereJherasped.Relieved yetconfused,Jack stammered,W-who areyou”The mansighed,Tve beenguarding thishousesince...His voicetrailed offas henoticed theboxinJacks hands.After awhile,theymanagedtocalmdownahit.The oldman invitedthem tosit ona dustycouchand explained.He wasMr.Wilson,the formergardener,who hadpromised thedeceased ownertoprotect thehouse untilher lostheirloom wasfound.Jack handedhim thebox.With tremblinghands,Mr.Wilson unlockedit usinga keyfrom hispocket.Inside laya fadedphotograph anda letter.Tears filledhiseyes ashe readaloud:“To whoeverfinds this—please returnthese memoriesto myfamily.Theboys realizedthe realtreasure wasntgold buta promisekept acrossdecades.。