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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文Returning toRootsAs theeconomic downturncast ashadow,my lifealso tookan unexpectedturn.Thecompany Ihad workedfor overa decadelaid me off,leaving mefrustrated with the highcostof urbanliving.It wastime toleave andreturn to my roots-a ruralfarmhouse Ihadinherited from my grandfather.Driving backto the countryside recalleda floodof memories-thecountryroad,thewooden cottage,the back yard garden...Yes!The garden!As achild,that gardenwas a（绿洲）magical placefor me,an oasisbursting withcolors andlife.The brightsunflowers,elegant liliesand awooden swinghad beenmy playground,where myimagination ran（飞舞的）wild amongthe flutteringbutterflies.I canwell rememberthe gardeningtimespent withmy grandfather.I wouldfollow himaround with a smallwatering can,oftenmore waterlanding onmy shoesthan on the thirstyplants.Those weremoments ofpure（水花）joy andlaughter,echoed bythe splashand mygrandfather^gentle laugh.（伊甸园）However,as weapproached myheart sank.The house,once theEden ofruralcharm,stood neglected.Windows brokenand fadedpaint fallingoff thewalls,allfilled with the unpleasantsmell.I hesitatedto takea stepfurther.What wouldmy lovedoasisbe likeI darednot imagine.In contrast,my children,Emma andJack,were immediatelyattracted.With delight,they dashedinto thehouse,exploring andplaying justas Ihad attheir age.When theyopenedthe doorof thebackyard,something amazinghappened.Through itlay the garden,untended andwild,yet undeniablybeautiful.Overgrown withwildflowers andtall grasses,it hada purelynatural beautythat seemedto befull oflife Thesight sparkedan immediatereactionfrommykids.They dashedinto the garden,with infectiouslaughter echoingthroughthe air.Just then,my wifecame up,tapping myshoulder.Nature alwaysfinds away to startover,doesnt itshe saidwith asmile thatwarmed myheart.Her words,filled with（沙沙声）wisdom andoptimism,echoed aroundus,mixed withthe chorusof rustlingleavesand birdsong.注意续写词数应为左右；
1.150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
2.The daysthat followedwere filled with repairing and gardening.In thisunexpected returnto my roots,I founda newstrength andjoy.续写中需要回答的个问题5在修复房屋和打理花园的过程中，作者和家人具体做了哪些事情？遇到了什
1.么困难，又是如何克服的？.“我找到了新的力量和快乐”，这种新力量和快乐具体体现在哪些方面？是2如何在日常生活中展现出来的？经历这次回归乡村，作者对自己、对生活有了怎样全新的认识？这些认识对
3.他未来的生活规划产生了什么影响？孩子们在修复和打理过程中发挥了怎样的作用？他们的表现对整个家庭氛
4.围有何影响？妻子在整个过程中给予了作者怎样的支持？她的言行对作者的转变起到了
5.什么关键作用？附答案
1.The authorfixed broken windows.The wifeplanted seedsin thevegetable patch.The kidscleared weeds.They facedshortages ofmaterials.They overcamethis byvisitinglocal storesand beingresourceful,using whateverthey couldfind around.
2.The newstrength camefrom masteringrepair and gardening skills.The joywas insimplepleasures likefamily time,watching plantsgrow.It showedin dailylife,like enjoyingsunsets andsharing mealsin therejuvenated garden.
3.The authorrealized thevalue offamily andnature.City lifeseemed emptyincomparison.He decidedto startan onlinegardening business,aiming tostay in thecountryside,embracing thissimple life.
4.The kidscleared weedsand discoveredthe oldswing.Their enthusiasmand energylightenedthe mood.Their laughterand eagernessturned thetough workinto afunfamily activity,making theatmosphere lively.
5.The wiferevived thevegetable patch,guiding thefamily in planting.Her wordsofwisdom inspiredthe author.Her positiveactions andattitude helpedthe authorshiftfrom despairto seeingthe beauty of rurallife.故事山•开端作者因经济下滑被裁员，决定回到从祖父那里继承的乡村农舍回忆起童年在农舍花园的美好时光•发展到达农舍后，看到房子破败，心生犹豫但孩子们对房子和花园充满热情，妻子的话也带来启发•高潮（续写部分）一家人投入到房屋修复和花园打理工作中，在这个过程中遇到各种情况，最终完成劳作并收获感悟•结局作者从这次回归乡村的经历中获得新的力量和快乐，对生活有了全新的认知和规划故事发展线索作者从城市失业回到乡村，面对破败的农舍，从犹豫到在家人的带动下开始修复房屋和打理花园，在劳作过程中经历各种事情，最后收获成长和感悟，这构成了故事发展的主要线索情感线索作者起初因失业和看到农舍破败而沮丧、犹豫，在家人的积极态度影响下，逐渐投入到修复和打理工作中，情感从消极转变为积极，最终收获新的力量和快乐，实现了情感上的成长续写布局与框架•第一段详细描述一家人在修复房屋和打理花园过程中的具体行动、遇到的困难及解决办法，突出家人的参与和相互协作，展现家庭的凝聚力以及对乡村生活的积极投入•第二段着重阐述作者在这一过程中获得的新力量和快乐，通过描述日常生活中的点滴，如与家人相处、欣赏乡村景色等，体现对生活的全新认识,升华主题续写注意事项•承接原文承接上文提到的修复和花园，在第一段开头就明确指出“我卷起袖子开始工作”等，延续前文情节和氛围，让读者自然地融入到后续发展中O•整体设计整体围绕回归乡村后的生活转变设计，从面对破败的无奈到积极改造，再到收获感悟，形成一个完整的情感和情节发展闭环•巧妙设计可以设计在修复过程中发现祖父留下的一些旧物，引发回忆，巧妙地将过去与现在联系起来，丰富故事内涵高分语句•呼应原文“The garden,which onceheld somany preciouschildhood memories,now becamethe canvasfor ournew familyadventure,just likeit wasfor my呼应了原文中作者对童年花园的乎好回忆，强grandfather andme longago.”调了花园在不同时期对家庭的重要意义•高级句型”Not onlydid werepair thephysical structureof thehouse,but wealsorebuilt thebonds withinour family,strengthening ourconnection inthis rural使用…倒装结构，突出修复房屋和重建家庭关系的haven.”not only…but also双重意义，提升语言的丰富度和表现力主题表达意义延伸•直接引语点明主旨可以让作者在结尾处说“Returning to myroots,I finallyunderstandthat truewealth liesnot inmaterial possessionsbut in the loveand直接点明回归togetherness offamily,and thebeautyofnature thatsurrounds us.”乡村带来的对生活和幸福的全新理解这一主旨•促成转变，引发感悟通过描述作者从最初的沮丧到后来的快乐，以及对生活规划的改变，引发读者对生活意义、家庭价值和人生转折的思考，促成读者内心的感悟和转变•借象征物点明主旨将花园象征为生活的希望和新的开始，它从荒废到重新焕发生机，就如同作者的生活经历，点明无论生活处于何种困境，都有重新开始和收获美好的可能这一主题学生写作示范第一段The daysthat followedwere filledwith repairingand gardening.I rolledup mysleeves andgotto workonthe brokenwindowsand peelingwalls.My children,full ofenergy,joinedme inthe repairs,handing metools witheager hands.We facedchallenges likefinding therightreplacement parts,but witha bitof resourcefulnessand tripsto thelocal hardwarestore,we overcamethem.In the garden,we carefullycleared theovergrown weeds,beingcareful notto damagethe wildflowersthat addedcharm.My wife,with hergreen thumb,guided usinplantingnew flowersand vegetables.Together,we builta smallwooden fencearoundthe garden,and aswe worked,the laughterand chatterfilled the air,making the oldfarmhouse comealive again.第二段In thisunexpected returnto myroots,I founda newstrength andjoy.Every morning,waking upto thesound ofbirdsong and the freshscent ofthegardenfilled mewitha senseof peace.I realizedthat thesimple lifeinthecountryside offereda richnessthat citylifecouldnt match.I spentmore qualitytime withmy family,playing gamesintheyard andsharingstories bythe fireplace.The newskills Ilearned inrepairingandgardening gavemeasenseof accomplishment.I decidedtostarta smallonline businessrelated togardening,sharing myexperiences andknowledge.This returntomyroots wasnot asetbackbut a new beginning,filledwithhope andpossibilities.【答案】The daysthat followedwere filledwith repairingandgardening.Emma andJackhelped clear weeds while I fixed thebrokenwindows.My wiferevived thevegetable patch,planting seedswiththe children.Though ourhands grewcalloused,laughter filledtheair.Gradually,thegardenregained itsmagic—sunflower sproutsemerged wherewildflowersonce ruled.One afternoon,Jack discoveredthe oldwooden swingburied undervines.As Irepaired it,Emmas excitedchatter aboutbutterflies remindedme ofmy childhoodwonder.By harvestseason,the cottageglowed withfresh paint,andthegarden buzzedwith beesvisitingnew blossoms.In thisunexpected returntomyroots,I foundanewstrength andjoy.Watchingfireflies dance above the restored garden at dusk,I realized urban life had blinded me tonatureshealing rhythm.The childrensmuddy smilesproved happinessneeds noexpensivetoys.My unemployment,once adisaster,became adoorway torediscoverfamily bondsand lifessimple abundance.Now whencity friendsask aboutour“escapeJ Ismile,remembering Grandfather^wisdom:Sometimes losingyour wayhelps youfindhome.”分析对原文的呼应回忆呼应文中提到
1.“Emmas excitedchatter aboutbutterflies reminded，与原文中作者回忆童年在花园里与蝴蝶相meofmy childhoodwonder伴、想象力肆意驰骋的美好时光相呼应，强化了花园在不同代人心中唤起的奇妙感受，也体现了家族记忆的传承人物活动呼应
2.“Emma andJack helpedclear weedswhileIfixed thebrokenwindows.My wiferevived thevegetable patch,planting seedswith与前文对家人的介绍以及他们对农舍和花园的积极态度thechildren.相呼应，孩子们的探索热情和妻子的智慧乐观在此处通过具体行动得以延续，展现了一家人共同为家园努力的场景，延续了家庭氛围的描述环境口乎应
3.Gradually,thegardenregained itsmagic—sunflower sprouts呼应了作者记忆中花园曾经的emerged wherewildflowers onceruled.”生机与美好，以及刚回到农舍时看到花园虽荒芜但充满自然美的状态，表明花园在一家人的努力下正逐渐恢复往昔魅力，使故事中的花园环境发展脉络清晰动作描写修复与劳作动作
1.“Emma andJack helpedclearweedsfixedthebrokenwindowsMy wiferevived thevegetable patch,planting seedswiththe等一系列动作描写，详细展现了一家人在修复房屋和打理花children园过程中的分工与协作，生动呈现出劳作场景，让读者能直观感受到他们的积极投入发现与修复动作
2.“Jack discoveredtheoldwooden swingburied under和这两个动作先后出现，vines.As Irepairedit”,discovered repaired”描绘出发现旧物并进行修复的过程，增加了故事的趣味性和生活气息心理描写对比感悟
1.“Watching firefliesdanceabovetherestoredgardenatdusk,I通过作者realizedurbanlifehadblindedmeto natureshealing rhythm.”的心理描写，将乡村生活与之前的城市生活进行对比，深刻表达出作者在回归乡村后对生活本质的重新认识，突出了乡村生活对其心灵的治愈和启发转变感悟
2.My unemployment,once adisaster,became adoorway torediscoverfamily bondsand lifessimple abundance9止匕句直接点明作者心理的转变，从将失业视为灾难到认识到这是重新发现家庭纽带和生活简单富足的契机，使文章主题得到升华，展现了作者在经历中的成长和感悟。
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