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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文My husband and Iwandered thetropical gardensof SanDiegos BahiaResort HoteLWecame toa largepool.A wetnose appearedout of the waterandaseal(海豹)climbed uponto arock togreet us.nLook!nI cried,delighted.」“Her nameis Graciemy husbandsaid,reading asign bythe fencethat enclosedthe pool.A momentlater,another sealswam past.And thatmust beBilly,“he added.Gracie doveback intothe waterand chasedafter Billy.We watchedin wonderas theyraced aroundthepool happily.The nextday Ifound myselfback atthe sealspool.Gracie andBilly wereenjoying themorning sunshine(失明的)on alarge rock.I wassurprised tolearn thatGracie andBilly wereblind.They werethoughtto havesuffered ahead injuryin stormyAlaska waters,which causedthem tolose theirsight.Theyneeded to be taughtto survivein aworld ofdarkness.I feltsorry forthem,as they could nolonger returntothe sea.At thesame time,I wasamazed howthey hadadjusted their new environment.They movedeasily and(缺乏)beautifully,their lackof sightseeming to be no problem at all.1spent hourswatching them(用鼻子顶)playing happilyin the pool,nosing largered andblue balls.Three yearslater,in spring2020,a serious illness damagedmy eyes,making mealmost blind.My eyeshadto beprotected fromsunlight,so I couldnt gooutside.I satin mybedroom with the.shades drawn,unable toread oreven watchtelevision.I wasterrified.What ifI lostmy sightcompletely Howwould I注意续写词数应为字左右;possibly manageI feltso depressedthat I began tolose hope.
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120.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2Then Iremembered somethingthat gaveme thehope Ineeded.So1decided tolive likethose two seals.文本主旨本文通过讲述作者在圣地亚哥巴哈度假酒店观赏两只失明海豹的故事,以及后来自己因病几乎失明的经历,探讨了面对困境时的希望与勇气故事强调了即使在逆境中,也要保持积极的心态,学会适应并找到生活的乐趣五要素分析人物Characters作者经历了失明的困境,从海豹的故事中获得希望作者的丈夫陪伴作者观赏海豹,提供支持和两只失明的海豹,尽管失去视力,但依然快乐地生活Gracie Billy地点Setting圣地亚哥巴哈度假酒店作者和丈夫观赏海豹的地方作者的家作者因病失明后的生活场景时间Time故事发生的时间作者在度假酒店观赏海豹的时间未明确,但提到三年后年作者生病2020事件Events观赏海豹作者和丈夫在度假酒店观赏两只失明的海豹作者生病三年后,作者因病几乎失明,生活陷入困境获得希望作者从海豹的故事中获得希望,决定积极面对生活主题Theme希望与勇气即使在逆境中,也要保持积极的心态,找到生活的乐趣适应与成长学会适应新的环境,克服困难词汇积累热带花园tropical gardens失明的blind头部受伤head injury黑暗darkness(适应)adjust(用鼻子顶)nosing(严重疾病)seriousillness(保护)protect(阳光)sunlight(沮丧的)depressed(希望)hope(勇气)courage(适应)adapt(灵感)inspiration(积极的)positive(克月艮)overcome(支持)support(韧性)resilience续写分析衔接句第一段使用“Then Iremembered somethingthat gaveme thehope I丁作为开头,自然过渡到作者回忆起海豹的故事,引出希望的来源needed第二段使用“So Idecided tolive likethose two丁作为开头,直接引出作者的决定,展现其积极面对生活的态度seals情节合理性第一段描述作者在困境中回忆起海豹的故事,符合情感逻辑,展现了作者的心理变化第二段描写作者决定像海豹一样积极面对生活,符合情节发展,展现了作者的成长和转变情感铺垫第一段通过描写作者的恐惧和沮丧,如和,增强故事的情感张力terrified”“depressed”第二段通过描写作者的决定和行动,如“decided tolive likethose two,展现希望和勇气seals”情感走向第一段情感走向是恐惧和沮丧,作者因失明而感到绝望第二段情感走向是希望和勇气,作者从海豹的故事中获得力量,决定积极面对生活主题深化希望与勇气通过作者的经历,强调即使在逆境中,也要保持积极的心态,找到生活的乐趣适应与成长作者从海豹的故事中获得灵感,学会适应新的环境,克服困难下水文一Paragraph1:Then Iremembered somethingthat gaveme thehope Ineeded.I thoughtabout Gracie andBilly,the twoblind sealsI hadseen atthe resort.Despite theirblindness,they hadadjusted sowell totheir new environmentand seemed tobehappy.They playedand swamwith such joy,as iftheir lackofsight wasnoproblem atall.I realizedthat ifthey couldfind happinessand adaptto theirsituation,socould I.Paragraph2:So Tdecided tolive likethose twoseals.I beganto focuson whatIcould still do,ratherthan whatI hadlost.I startedlistening toaudiobooks andpodcasts,exploring newhobbies thatdidntrequire sight.I alsoreached outto supportgroups forpeople withvisual impairments,finding comfortandinspiration intheir stories.Gradually,I feltmy hopereturn andmy depressionlift.Gracie andBilly下水文二had shownme thateven indarkness,there isalways away tofind light.Paragraph1:Then Iremembered somethingthat gaveme thehope Ineeded.I recalledthe imageofGracie andBilly,the blindseals atthe resort,playing andswimming withsuchjoy.They hadlost theirsightbut hadadapted sowell totheirnewenvironment.Their lackof sightseemedtobe noproblematallas theymoved gracefullyand happily.I realizedthat iftheycouldfind happinessand adaptto theirsituation,so couldI.Their storybecame abeacon ofhope forme inmy darkestmoments.Paragraph2:So Idecided tolive likethose twoseals.Ibeganto focuson thethings Icouldstilldo,ratherthan dwellingon mylimitations.I startedlistening toaudiobooks andexploring newhobbies thatdidntrequire sight.I alsoreached outto supportgroups fbrpeople withvisual impairments,finding comfortandinspiration intheir stories.Gradually,I feltmy hopereturn andmy depressionlift.GracieandBillyhad shownme thateven indarkness,there isalways away tofind lightand joy.【答案】Then Iremembered somethingthat gaveme thehope Ineeded.Yes,I thoughtofthetwoseals.They gotused totheirnewlife inthepoolregardless ofthe greatchanges whenthey wereunable togoback tothe seawhere theywere supposedtobe.Whats more,they managedto enjoya happylife thoughtheylived indarkness asa resultof theirblindness.Now Iwas facedwiththesame situation.Luckily,thetwo sealshad seta goodexample forme.So Idecided tolive likethose twoseals.Though Iwas keptfrom theoutside world,I didfindpleasure inmy smallworld,enjoying chattingwith friends,singing withmy family,listening tomusic,and eatingdelicious food.The sealsdiving andswimming aroundtheir poolreminded meof exercise.So Iclimbed upand downthe stairsevery morningto keepfit.Eventually Ibecame confidentagainabout myself.Thanks tomy twoinspiring friends.I learnedhow toenjoy lifewhen goingthrough adifficulttime.。
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