读后续写 Jordan家的静谧清明 讲义 高一下学期期中模拟测试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段英文，使之构成一篇的短文A QuietQingming in the JordanHouseholdThe Jordans9living roomfelt likea museumof unfinishedmoments.Rain tappedsoftlyagainst the windows,casting asilvery gloomover thecramped space.Ten-year-old Lily lay sprawled onthe carpet,her crayons screeching acrosspaper asshe drewjagged kitesand lopsided tombstones.Besideher,six-year-old Max shredded sheets of printer paper into confetti,tossing thefragments into the airlikeceremonial ghostmoney.Their parents,Mr.and Mrs.Jordan,sat atopposite endsof thesagging sofa,their facesilluminated by the cold glow of their phones.A forgottenspeaker playeda generic spring一renewal soundtrack-birdsong andtrickling waterthat onlydeepened thesense ofartificiality.Qingming Festivalhad alwaysbeen aday ofcrisp ritualsfor theJordans.In yearspast,theywould wakeearly,pack chrysanthemums and orangesinto wovenbaskets,and drivetothehillsidecemetery whereMrs.Jordans grandparentsrested.The childrenwould chaseeach otheramong theheadstones,their laughtermingling with the scent of burning incense.After tidying the graves,theydpicnic under cherry blossom trees,their fingerssticky withQingtuan,the emerald-green ricedumplingsfilled withsweet bean paste.But thisyear,the forecasthad warnedof thunderstorms,and Mrs.Jordan,citing“practicality,“canceled thetrip.“Well lightvirtual candleson the family appJ shedsaid,thoughno one had bothered to login.Now,the absenceof traditionhung heavierthan the rain clouds.Lily glancedat hermother,who wasengrossed in a live stream ofa Kyotocherry blossomfestival.“Mom,she ventured,holding upher drawing-a stick-figure familystanding besidea tombstoneshed colored neon pink.“DoesGreat-Grandma likepink”“Hmm Sure,sweetie,Mrs.Jordan replied,her thumbflicking upwardin areflexive like.Mr.Jordan,meanwhile,scrolled throughan articletitled TheDigitization ofGrief:HowModem FamiliesHonor Ancestors.^^He pausedat aphoto ofa high-tech columbariumin Singapore,where QR codes replacedheadstones.A notificationbuzzed——a reminderfrom hisfitness app:1,000steps todaily goal!He stoodabruptly.Maybe weshould...take awalk”Max lobbeda paperball at the ceiling.tcBoring.^^The roomlapsed backinto silence,broken onlyby thecrinkle ofpaper and the tinnylaughterfrom Mrs.Jordans video.Outside,therainthickened,blurring theworld into a watercolorwash.Lilys crayonsnapped.This isthe worstQingming ever,“she announced,hurling thebrokenstub acrossthe room.It struckthefamily photo on the mantel—a snapshotfrom lastyearsgrave visit,their smilesbright againstthe mistyhills.The clatterjolted Mrs.Jordan.She staredat thephoto,then ather children-Lily scowling,Max nowdismantling asofa cushion.Guilt prickledher throat.Closing herphone,she kneltbeside Lily.注意续写词数应为个左右；1150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2Paragraph1:What if...we makeQingtuan LikeGreat-Grandma taughtme”Paragraph2:As dusksettled,the imperfectsteamed Qingtuanemerged.

一、文本主旨本文讲述了一家在清明节这一天，由于天气原因无法按照传统方式去墓地祭扫，Jordan导致家庭氛围压抑、成员之间缺乏互动在这样的背景下，Mrs.提议制作青团，试图通过这一传统活动来弥补缺失的仪式感，重新找回家庭的温暖和节Jordan日的意义

二、五要素分析.人物1Characters岁在地毯上画画，对传统节日有期待Lily10（岁）把打印纸撕成纸屑，觉得无聊Max6原本计划取消传统活动，后来提议做青团Mrs.Jordan浏览关于现代祭扫方式的文章，试图提出新的活动建议Mr.Jordan.时间（）2Time时间背景清明节这一天.地点（）3Place主要地点家的客厅Jordan.事件（）4Event主要事件由于天气原因，一家取消了清明节的传统祭扫活动，导致家庭氛围Jordan压抑提议制作青团，试图恢复节日的氛围Mrs.Jordan.原因（）5Reason原因天气预报有雷暴，Mrs.出于“实际”考虑取消了传统的墓地祭扫活动，导致家庭成员感到无聊和失落Jordan

三、词汇积累短语（清明节）Qingming Festival（菊花和橙子）chrysanthemumsandoranges（山坡墓地）hillside cemetery（燃烧的香）burning incense（清理墓地）tidyingthe graves（在樱花树下野餐）picnic undercherry blossomtrees（青团）Qingtuan（虚拟蜡烛）virtual candles（家庭应用程序）family app（直播）livestream（二维码）QRcodes（骨灰堂）columbarium（健身应用程序）fitness app（水彩画般的模糊）watercolor wash（壁炉架）mantel（蜡笔划过纸面）crayonsscreeching（撕碎的纸张）shredded sheets（春天的更新）spring renewal佳句The Jordansliving roomfelt likea museumof unfinishedmoments.Rain tappedsoftly againstthewindows,casting asilvery gloomover thecramped space.Lilylaysprawledonthe carpet,her crayonsscreeching acrosspaper asshe drewjagged kitesandlopsidedtombstones.Maxshreddedsheetsofprinterpaperintoconfetti,tossing thefragments intothe airlikeceremonial ghostmoney.Their parents,Mr.and Mrs.Jordan,sat atopposite endsof thesagging sofa,their facesilluminatedbythecoldglowof theirphones.A forgottenspeaker playeda generic“spring renewaF9soundtrack—birdsong andtricklingwater-that onlydeepened thesense ofartificiality.Qingming Festivalhad alwaysbeen aday ofcrisp ritualsfor theJordans.The childrenwould chaseeach otheramong theheadstones,their laughtermingling withthescent ofburningincense.After tidyingthegraves,theyd picnicundercherryblossomtrees,their fingerssticky withQingtuan.But thisyear,the forecasthad warnedof thunderstorms,and Mrs.Jordan,citing“practicality,“canceled thetrip.“Well lightvirtual candlesonthefamily appJ shedsaid,though noonehadbotheredtologin.The absenceof traditionhung heavierthan therain clouds.“Mom Jshe ventured,holding upherdrawing-a stick-figure familystanding besideatombstone shedcoloredneonpink.“Does Great-Grandma likepink“Hmm Sure,sweetie/9Mrs.Jordan replied,her thumbflicking upwardinareflexive like.

四、续写分析

（一）衔接句“What if...we makeQingtuan LikeGreat-Grandma taught（“要是……我们做青团呢？就像曾祖母教我的那样？）me”这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的行动方向，Mrs.提议通过制作青团来恢复节日的氛围Jordan（夜幕降临，那些蒸得不太完美As dusksettled,the imperfectsteamed Qingtuanemerged.的青团终于出炉了）这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的结果，家庭成员通过共同制作青团，重新找回了节日的意义和家庭的温暖

（二）情节合理性家庭互动Mrs.提议制作青团后，家庭成员开始积极参与，这种互动符合家庭在节日氛围中的行为模式Jordan情感转变通过共同制作青团，家庭成员从最初的无聊和失落转变为积极和温暖,这种情感转变合理且自然

（三）情感铺垫失落与无聊家庭成员在取消传统活动后感到失落和无聊，这种情感在续写中需要体现温暖与团结通过制作青团，家庭成员重新找回了节日的意义和家庭的温暖，这种情感转变需要通过续写来合理展开

五、情感走向失落与无聊家庭成员在取消传统活动后感到失落和无聊温暖与团结通过制作青团，家庭成员重新找回了节日的意义和家庭的温暖恢复传统家庭成员通过共同制作青团，恢复了传统节日的仪式感

六、主题深化传统与现代的融合通过提议制作青团，展示了传统与现代的融合Mrs.Jordan家庭的温暖通过共同制作青团，家庭成员重新找回了节日的意义和家庭的温暖O恢复传统通过制作青团，家庭成员恢复了传统节日的仪式感，增强了家庭凝聚力

七、下水文

（一）版本一Paragraph1:What if...we makeQingtuan LikeGreat-Grandma taughtme^^Mrs.Jordansuggested,her voicesoft buthopeful.Lilys eyeslit up.Can Ihelp”she askedeagerly.Max,who hadbeensulking,perked upat theidea.I wantto makepink ones!”he declared.Mr.Jordan putdown hisphoneand joined them.Together,they gatheredingredients andstarted preparingthe dough.The kitchenfilled withthearoma ofglutinous riceand sweet bean paste.As theyworked,stories ofpast Qingmingfestivalsflowed,and the room buzzedwith laughterand chatter.Paragraph2:As dusksettled,the imperfectsteamed Qingtuanemerged.They werenot perfect,but theywere madewith love.The familygathered aroundthe table,each holdinga Qingtuan.These arethe best Qingtuan ever,“Max said,taking abig bite.Lily noddedin agreement.“Even thepink onesMrs.Jordan askedwith asmile.Especially thepink ones!”Max replied.The rainoutside hadstopped,and thesky wasclearing.The familyfelt asense ofwarmth andunity thathad beenmissing earlier.ThisQingming,though different,had broughtthem closertogether.

（二）版本二Paragraph1:What if...we makeQingtuan LikeGreat-Grandma taughtme Mrs.Jordansvoice brokethe silence.Lily lookedup,her facebrightening.Can wereally dothat”she asked.Max,who had been tearingapart thesofa cushion,stopped andlooked interested.Mr.Jordan,who hadbeenscrolling throughhis phone,put itdown andjoinedthem.They gatheredinthekitchen,rolling uptheirsleeves.Mrs.Jordan showedthem howto mixthe doughand fillit withsweetbeanpaste.The kitchensoonfilledwiththe sweetscentofglutinous riceand thesound oflaughter.Even Max,who hadinitiallybeen bored,was nowexcitedly tryingto makehis ownpink Qingtuan.Paragraph2:As dusksettled,the imperfectsteamed Qingtuanemerged.They werelumpy anduneven,but theywere madewith love.The familysat aroundthe table,sharing storiesand laughter.These arethebestQingtuanever,Max said,taking abig bite.Lily nodded,her faceglowing.Even thepink ones,,Mrs.Jordan askedwith asmile.Especially thepinkones!”Max replied.The rainhadstopped,and thesky wasclearing.The familyfelt asense ofwarmth andunity thathadbeenmissingearlier.This Qingming,though different,had broughtthem closertogether.【答案】Paragraph1:What if...we makeQingtuan LikeGreat-Grandma taughtme Mrs.Jordansvoice trembledslightly,her eyessoftening asmemories ofher grandmotherskitchen surfaced.Thefamily scrambledto theirfeet,gathering flour,mugwort,and sweetbeanpastefrom thepantry.Mrs.Jordan guidedtheir clumsyhands,laughing asLilys doughended upneon greenand Maxsdumplingsresembled misshapenrocks.The livingroom transformedintoachaotic workshop,flour dustingthe airlikesnow,and thegenericspringsoundtrack gaveway totheir chatterandtherhythmic thudof rollingpins.Paragraph2:As dusksettled,the imperfectsteamed Qingtuanemerged.The aromaof mugwortandwarmth filledtheroom,chasing awaythe earliergloom.The familygathered aroundthe coffeetable,each takinga bite-Lily wrinklingher noseatthebitter edgeofthemugwort.Max declaringhis the“bestever,“and Mr.and Mrs.Jordan sharinga quiet,knowing smile.Mrs.Jordan placeda Qingtuanon aplatebeside thefamilyphoto,whispering,For you,Grandma.The Jordansrealized traditiondidnt needgrandgestures—just sharedhands andheartfelt intentions.。