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读后续写阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文Grace andEllen,both promisingin theirschooPs dancecompetition,were fierce competitors.They bothhad greatpassion fordancing anddreamed forbigger stages.They wereboth friendsandcompetitors.They hadsimilar tastein music,and hadsimilar dressingstyles.They hadboth devotedthemselvesto preparingfor theupcoming contest.Graces journeyto the competition wasmarked bycountless hoursof practiceand determination.She wouldrise beforethe sun,and the studio lightswere heronly company.Every movementwasperfected withdetermined mind.She knewthat this competition wasntjust aboutpersonal success;it(维护)was alsoabout upholdingher schoofshonor.Grace,youre incredible!”Graces danceinstructor,Mrs.Anderson,often praisedher.Your hard work willpay off.”Ellen hadbeen practicinghard forthiscompetitionas well.Her lovefor dancewas herdrivingforce.After school,she wouldhead straightto thedance studio,tirelessly perfectingevery step.Herdance shoeshad becomea partof herfeet,and herheart burnedwith astrong desirefor victory.Ellen,youre anatural/9her fellowdancers wouldoften say.Youve gotthis!”The dayof thecompetition finallyarrived,and therewere fivecompetitors fightingfor thechampionshiptitle.Ellen wasscheduled toperform beforeGrace.(旋As Ellenstood backstage,the butterflies in her stomach seemedto haveturned intoa whirlwind风).She practicedevery moveonce againbut suddenlybroke her dress with a sharpmovement.Panic(恐慌)set inas hermind racedfor asolution.“Ellen,you,re upnext!,,the stage manager announced.(无意听至)In thedimly litbackstage area,Grace overheardU Ellenswhispers toher friend,Sarah.“I brokemy dancingdress,Sarah,“Ellens voicetrembled.What amI goingto do”Graces heartsank as she overheardthe conversation.注意续写词数应为左右;
1.150请按如卜格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but shehesitated.Tears ofthanks welledup inEllens eyesas she put on Graces dress.文本主旨本文讲述了两位在舞蹈比赛中既是朋友又是竞争对手的女生和的故事两人Grace Ellen对舞蹈充满热情,都梦想着在更大的舞台上展示自己在比赛当天,意外弄坏了她的舞蹈Ellen服,而选择将自己的舞蹈服借给展现了友谊和团队精神的重要性故事强调了在Grace Ellen,竞争中保持善良和互助的价值观五要素分析人物Characters对舞蹈充满热情,勤奋练习,有很强的团队精神Grace同样热爱舞蹈,努力练习,比赛前遇到突发状况Ellen的舞蹈老师,经常鼓励她Mrs.Anderson Grace的朋友,她在遇到问题时提供支持Sarah EllenEllen地点Setting舞蹈工作室和练习舞蹈的地方,充满努力和汗水Grace Ellen比赛现场紧张的氛围,五位选手竞争冠军时间Time比赛当天故事主要围绕比赛当天的情节展开事件Events准备比赛和都为比赛付出了大量努力Grace Ellen的舞蹈服意外损坏比赛前的突发状况,增加了故事的紧张感Ellen借出舞蹈服展现了的善良和友谊Grace Grace主题()Theme友谊与竞争在竞争中保持友谊和团队精神的重要性善良与互助即使在竞争中,也要关心他人,帮助他人词汇积累(有前途的)promising(激烈的竞争对手)fiercecompetitors(热情)passion(投入)devoted(维护)upholding(难以置信的)incredible(努力工作)hardwork(得到回报)pay off(马区动力)driving force(心里七上八下)butterfliesin herstomach(旋风)whirlwind(恐慌)panic(舞台经理)stagemanager(光线昏暗的)dimly lit(无意听到)overheard(颤抖)trembled(结结巴巴地说)stammered(安慰地)reassuringly(证明)testament(爆发出掌声)erupted inapplause续写分析衔接句第一段使用作为开头,直“Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but shehesitated.”接延续上文的情节,引出内心的矛盾Grace第二段使用作为开头,“Tears ofthanks welledup inEllens eyesas sheput onGraces dress.”自然过渡到对的帮助的感激之情Ellen Grace情节合理性第一段描述内心的矛盾和最终的选择,符合人物性格和情节发展的逻辑Grace第二段描写穿上的舞蹈服后的反应,以及她在比赛中的表现,符合情感和Ellen Grace情节的合理性情感铺垫第一段通过描写的矛盾心理,如Grace“Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but she,增强了故事的紧张感hesitated.”第二段通过描写的感激之情,如展现了Ellen“Tears ofthanks welledup inEllens eyes.”,友谊的力量情感走向第一段情感走向是矛盾和挣扎,在个人利益和友谊之间做出选择Grace第二段情感走向是感激和感动,对的帮助感到感激,观众对的表现报Ellen Grace Ellen以热烈的掌声主题深化友谊与竞争通过的选择,展现了即使在激烈的竞争中,友谊和团队精神的重要性Grace善良与互助的善良和的感激之情,强调了在困难时刻帮助他人的价值GraceEllen下水文一Paragraph1:Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but shehesitated.The thoughtofwinning thecompetition had always beenher dream,and now,with Ellenfacing thisunexpected setback,it seemedlike anopportunity.But as she lookedat Ellens trembling figure,Graces heartsoftened.Sheremembered the countless hours they had spent together in thestudio,their sharedpassion fordance,andthe respect they hadfbr eachother.“Ellen,“Grace calledout softly,stepping forward.Ellen turned,hereyes wide with surprise.Here,you canuse my dress,“Grace said,holding outher dress.“I havean extraone in my bag.Ellens eyesfilled withgratitude anddisbelief.But whatabout you,Grace^^shestammered.Grace smiledreassuringly.“Dont worryabout me.Just go out there and doyour best.”Paragraph2:Tears ofthanks welledup inEllens eyesas sheput onGraces dress.She couldfeelthe weightof Gracesgenerosity andthe bondof theirfriendship.As shestepped ontothe stage,she feltarenewed sense of confidenceand determination.Her performancewas flawless,every movementatestament toher hardwork andthe supportshe hadreceived.When shefinished,the audienceerupted inapplause.Ellen knewthat nomatter theoutcome,she hadalready wonsomething farmore valuablethana trophy.下水文二Paragraph1:Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but shehesitated.The ideaof winningthecompetition hadalways beena drivingforce forher,and now,with Ellenin sucha predicament,itseemed likea chanceto gainan advantage.Yet,asshesaw Ellen9stremblingfigure andheard thedesperationinhervoice,Graces competitivespirit wasovershadowed bya deepersenseofempathy.She recalledthecountlesshourstheyhadspenttogetherinthestudio,their sharedpassion fordance,andthe mutualrespecttheyhadalwaysshown eachother.Ellen,“Grace calledout softly,stepping forward.Ellen turned,her eyeswidewithsurprise.Here,you canuse mydress,“Grace said,holding outherdress.I havean extraoneinmybag.Ellens eyesfilled withgratitude anddisbelief.But whataboutyou,Grace”she stammered.Grace smiledreassuringly.6CDon,t worryabout me.Just goout thereanddo yourbest.”Paragraph2:Tears ofthanks welledup inEllens eyesassheput onGraces dress.She couldfeelthe weightof Gracesgenerosity andthe bondof theirfriendship.As shestepped ontothe stage,she feltarenewed senseof confidenceand determination.Her performancewas flawless,every movementatestament toher hardwork andthe supportshe hadreceived.When shefinished,the audienceerupted inapplause.Ellen knewthat nomatter theoutcome,she hadalready wonsomething farmore valuablethana trophy.参考答案Grace knewher dresswould fitEllen perfectly,but shehesitated.After all,it wasEllens ownfaultfor breakingherdress.However,Grace alsounderstood thatsometimes incompetition,we shouldputaside ourdifferences andhelp eachother.She tooka deepbreath andapproached Ellen.“Ellen,I heardyourproblem,“Grace saidwithasoft voice,“mydresscan fityou perfectly.You canwear mydress onstage.Ellens eyeswidened insurprise.Grace,you woulddo thatfor meshe asked,her voicetrembling.Of course,Ellen,Grace replied,a gentlesmile onher face.“Now,gooutthereandshowthem whatyouve got.”Tears ofthcmks welledup inEllens assheputonGracesdress.She knewthat shehad letherselfdown andalmost gaveup,but Gracesact ofkindness restoredher faithin herself.She vowedto herselfthatshe wouldnot letGrace downand woulddo herbest inthecompetition.Finally,Ellen wonthecompetition withher outstandingperformance.But whatmade herhappiest washaving sucha goodfriend.。
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