2025届金华十校高三二模读后续写解析：旧物修新情 讲义

届金华十校高三二模读后续写解析旧物修新情讲义2025读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文In theneighborhood,my dad,Mr.Duane,is alwaysreferred toas CollectorDuane.He isan enthusiasticcollector,who isalways onthe huntfor olditems torepurpose,believing thatwith abit ofcreativity,these forgottenobjects canbe transformedintosomething usefuland new.Recently,he came across an old bicyclewheel,anold-fashionedmetal milk box,an antiquelamp,a dirtyvase andsome oldclothes ata fleamarket,imaginingall thepossibilities theyheld.（寡妇）.；My parentshave aneighbor:Helen Fox.She isa91-year-old widowMy parentsalongwith severalother neighbors,look afterHelen,ensuring shefeels lovedand supported.Helen hadlong sufferedfrom aproble（m陡:h峭er的m）ailbox.For somereason,the mailboxwasplaced insecurelydown asomewhat steepdriveway offa busyhighway,making itadaily dangerfor herto fetchher mail.Besides,it wasold andrusty,as ifit hadsufferedmultiple violent（im嘎p吱ac作ts.响It）s once-bright redpaint had faded toa dullpink.The doorhungloosely,creaking withevery gustof wind.The letterson ithadfadedover theyears.The Fwas nolonger clear,the Ohad lostits shape,and theX wasalmost gone.Helen wantedtoreplace itwith a new oneand moveit toanewlocation,but she had noidea whereto start.The minutemy dadheard aboutit,he madeit hismission tosettle theproblem.He beganbycontacting thelocal ruralmail service,arranging torelocate Helensmailbox.He alsotalkedwith Yancey,their sharedrural postman,explaining theupcoming change.A relativelysafeplace waseasy tofind.But thereal challengewas findinga perfectmailbox.注意.续写词数应为左右；

1.请按如下格式在15答0题卡的相应位置作答2第一段Then heremembered the old objectshe hadrecently collected.第二段The nextday,he showedup atHelens housewith ashiny newmailbox.解题思路详解段落内容设计写作任务第一段内容设计体现他的用心与创意过程感动，邻居赞叹，温暖情感升华，凸显“社区温情”与第一段H氛e围le升n华主题“旧物新生”注意三点情节要有动手细节•・要有他人互动回应・要体现主题“善意、改造、连接人心结构框架Paragraph

11.情感描写（定句）Then heremembered theold objectshe hadrecently collected.A wa2v.细eo节f p描u写rp（os非ea固nd定e句xc）itement surgedthrough himas heglanced atthe scatteredpieces.He placedthe antiquelamp,milk box,and bikewheel ontothe table,tapping each

3.动作链推进（定句）thoughtfully.Upon sketchinga quickblueprint,he rolledup hissleeves,polished themetal,and beganasse4m,b冲li突ng铺.垫（非固定句）His h5a.n情d节s t转re折m（ble固d定w句ith）the effort,and twicehe hadto restart,but hepressed on.No soonerhad hescrewed in the final bolt than he realized the junk had becomesomethingtruly beautiful.Paragraph

26.情感转变（定句）The nextday,he showedup atHelens housewith ashiny newmailbox.Seei7ng环H境el渲en染s（st非un固ne定d句ex）pression,Duane felta warmthrise fromhis chest.•Bird8s,c行hi动rp/e对d话as（m非or固ni定ng句li）ght shimmeredacross the red-painted surface.

9.结局升华（定句）1Helen gentlytouched theside andsaid softly,This...this ismore thana mailbox/

10.主题点睛（定句）Having usedhis handsto createhope,he knewhed donesomething that truly mattered.This experiencereminded himthat kindness,when craftedwith care,could rebuildnot justobjects,but lives.范文Paragraph1Then heremembered theold objectshe hadrecently collected.A waveof purposeandexcitement surgedthrough himas heglanced atthe scatteredpieces.He placedthe antiquelamp,milkbox,and bikewheel ontothe table,tapping eachthoughtfully.Upon sketchingaquick blueprint,he rolledup hissleeves,polished themetal,and beganassembling.His handstrembledwith theeffort,and twicehehadto restart,but hepressed on.No soonerhad hescrewedinthefinalboltthanherealizedthejunkhadbecome somethingtruly beautiful.Paragraph2The nextday,he showedup atHelens housewith ashiny newmailbox.Seeing Helensstunnedexpression,Duane felta warmthrise fromhis chest.Birds chirpedas morninglightshimmered acrossthered-painted surface.Helen gentlytouched theside andsaid softly,This…this ismore thana mailbox//Having usedhis handsto createhope,he knewhed donesomethingthattrulymattered.This experiencereminded himthat kindness,when craftedwithcare,could rebuildnot justobjects,but lives.。