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七年级英语下册Un it2话题作文写作讲解练习【话题分析】谈论规则本单元话题为“规则”,要求我们介绍某个处所的规则,如学校、家、教室、图书馆等我们可采用“总一分一总”的结构进行写作首先要点明是哪个处所的规则;其次具体介绍该处所的规则;最后发表自己对这些规则的看法(是否喜欢它们)写作时我们主要用第一人称I或we,介绍规则时应用一般现在时态【常用句型】We can/must/have todo...We can,t do...or...We have too many rules.【写作实例】孟子日“不以规矩,不能成方圆J这告诉我们做任何事情都要有一定的规矩或规则你们学校都有哪些规则呢?假设你是李明,下面是你们学校的一些规则,请你写一封电子邮件,向你的笔友Tom作一下介绍词数不少于
601.上课不能迟到;
2.课堂上保持安静;
3.见到老师要问好;
4.不许在教室里吃东西;
5.不许在课堂上听音乐、玩游戏Dear Tom,Yours,Li Ming【思路点拨】开篇点题,引出校规-want to know the rules in our schooltell youabout...具体介绍校规-we can^/mustn t/have to/must..”be late for class,arrive on time,keepquietsay helloto・・“listen to musicplay games发表看法—think wehave too many rules,what about...【教材典句】...I can t be late forschool.SB,lbIn thelibrary,we mustkeep quiet.SA,3bAnd I have to wear theuniform.SB,lb【经典范文】Dear Tom,Thanks foryour laste-mail.You wantto knowthe rules inourschool,right Nowlet metellyou aboutthem.We can,t be late for class.We must arrive on time.We cant talk loudlyin class.We mustkeepquiet in class.When wemeet our teachers onour way,we shouldsay helloto them.We can,t eat inthe classroom,and wehave toeatin the dininghall.We mustnt listen to music orplay gamesinclass.Yours,Li Ming【亮点点评】
①用Thanks for.”表示感谢
②用You wanttoknowthe rules…”及..let metellyou.表明写作的主题是校规
③用“We can...”“We must...”“We have to...及“We mustn,t...”具体介绍校规的内容【同步检测】
1.假如你是Alice,请你根据下面的提示介绍一下你们班的班规,并说明你对这些班规的看法不少于60词,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数要点提示
①before class:don t belate forclass;be ontime
②in class:don t talk loudly;don t eat or drink in class;don tplay gamesor listen tomusic【答案】My nameis Alice.There aretoo manyrulesinour class.We cantbelateforclass.We mustgetto schoolontime.In class,we canttalkloudly.We cant eatordrinkin class.We cantplay gamesor listen tomusicinclass.Some ofthe rulesare strict,but Ithink theyare useful.So we must followthem.【详解】[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点题;第二步,具体介绍班规;第三步,表达自己的看法[亮点词汇]
①too many太多
②belatefor迟到
③listen tomusic听音乐[高分句型]Some oftherulesare strict,but Ithink theyare useful.(并歹U句)
2.下面是你父母为你制定的一些规则,请你用自己的话写一篇60词左右的英语短文,并说说你的感受提示词》匚have to;must;canMy Rules
3.Get up at6:30a.m.
4.Go to school at7:15a.m.3・Don t eat outside.4・Don tlistentomusic on school days.5・Don t watch TVon schoolnights.
6.Be back home before11:30in themorning andbefore6:00in theafternoon.【答案】I mnot happybecause I have toomanyrules at home.I haveto get up at6:30every morning,because I must go toschoolat7:
15.I can,teatoutside.I cantlistentomusicon schooldaysand I cant watch TVonschoolnights.I mustbe back home before11:30in themorning andbefore6:00in theafternoon.I dont havea goodtime athome.【详解】
1.题干解读题目要求写一篇有关规则的短文;要求包含所有内容提示
2.写作指导此作文时态用一般现在时;采用第一人称口吻;阐述清楚父母制定的规则,并阐述自己的感受保证无语法和拼写错误3Jack,.无论在家里还是在学校里,刘刚总要遵守许多规则,他很苦恼于是,他写信给他的好朋友向他倾诉他内心的不快Jack60请你根据以下内容提示帮他写信给词数不少于开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总内容提示
1.6:30起床
2.在校穿校服;
3.上课不准迟到;
4.上课时不能戴帽子;
5.在家不能看电视,每晚练习弹钢琴;
6.9:00上床睡觉;
7.周末打扫房间,洗衣服Dear Jack,I mnot happyeveryday.______________________________________________________________________________What canI doYours,Liu Gang【答案】Dear Jack,Imnot happyevery day.I havetoomanyrulesat school andin myhouse.I haveto get upat6:30inthemorning.I havetoweara uniformat school.I cantarrivelateforclass.I can,twear ahat inclass,either.At homeI cantwatchTV.Ihaveto practiceplaying thepiano everyevening.Ihaveto goto bedat9:
00.On theweekend Ihavetoclean myroom andwash myclothes.Although myparents andteachers makerules tohelp me,I dont haveany funevery day.What can1doYours,Liu Gang【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇书信作文要求根据内容提示给好朋友Jack写信,倾诉内心的不快
2.写作指导本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称根据要点提示,紧扣主题,力求语句通顺,条理清晰,注意语意连贯,无语法单词错误
4.学生应当遵守学校的规章制度请根据以下要点提示,以“School Rules”为题,叙述中学生应遵守60的一些规章制度,并谈谈你的看法词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)要点提示L在课堂上不乱讲话,要认真听老师讲课,不带食物进教室,保持教室安静、整洁;
5.课后要按时完成作业;
6.在学校,要穿校服;
7.保护学校的一草一木;
8.与老师和同学们友好相处School RulesEveryschool hasrules forstudents.As students,we mustobey them.【答案】School RulesEveryschool hasrules forstudents.As students,wemustobey them.First ofall,we shouldn,ttalkinclass.We mustlistentothe teacherscarefully.We arenot supposedto takefood ordrinksinto theclassroom.We shouldkeep ourclassroom quietand clean.After class,we shouldfinish ourhomeworkontime.One morething,we shouldwear ourschool uniformsatschool.Besides,we shouldprotecttrees,grass andflowers therebecause theymake ourschool morebeautiful.At last,we shouldbegood withourteachersand classmates.【详解】
1.题干解读本文是一篇材料作文围绕“学校制度”写一篇短文
2.写作指导本文采用第一人称,时态采用一般现在时在写作时,多运用first ofall,besides,at last等词,让整篇文章看起来更有层次感内容要涵盖所给的每个提示要点,写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误
5.没有规矩不成方O每个人的生活都离不开规矩的约束你的家里有什么规矩呢?你是Tina,“My family rules如何看待这些规矩的呢?假如你叫请根据内容提示以为题写一篇60英文短文要求词以上内容提示
1.不能晚回家;
2.必须早睡早起;
3.周一到周五不能看电视,玩电脑游戏;
4.不能吃太多垃圾食品junk foodoMy familyrules【答案】My familyrulesEvery familyhas its own rules.Myfamilyalso hasrules.Now,let meshow yousome ofmy familyrules.Firstly,I cant come backhome late,because it s dangerous for young girls to come backhomelate.Secondly,I mustgotobed andgetupearly before6:30every day,because IhavetoreadEnglish beforegoing toschool.Thirdly,I cantwatchTV orplay computergames from Monday toFriday.It snot goodfor mystudy.Fourthly,Ican,teattoo muchjunk food.It snot goodformy health.The rulesare veryboring,but Iknow theyare goodfor me.【详解】题干解读该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要把给出的规矩具体写出,最后做出总结例文点评例文采用一段式,用第一人称来叙述规矩的内容,时态采用一般现在时为主,描述规矩时,详细具体,逻辑性强,条理清晰高分亮点短语itsown rules;comebackhomelate;getupearly;fromMondayto Friday句型:Every familyhas itsownrules;itsdangerousforyounggirlstocomebackhomelate。
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