小女孩“Jessie” 追梦路上的一次“低谷转折”讲义--高考英语复习写作专项

固定句•动作链推进

3.I staredat theceiling,turned to the wall,and pulledthe blanketover myhead.动作连贯，情绪封闭非固定句•冲突铺垫

4.I kneweveryone wouldbe talkingabout howI fellagain andagain.植入内心独白，为下段转折埋伏笔固定句•情节转折

5.No soonerhad Idecided toskip practicethan Iheard Dadknocking onmy door,his voicesoftbut firm.引出父亲开导，推进下段情感转变Paragraph2Daddys wordsconvinced methis waswhat Itruly loved.固定句•情感转变

6.His wordsdidnt erasemy failure,but theyreminded mewhy Istarted skatingin the firstplace.从失败中找回初心非固定句背景渲染♦

7.父亲回忆唤醒H情e感talked about thefirst time Istepped onice,and howmy eyeslit uplike stars.非固定句具体行动描写♦

8.aY\\1H父e亲pl的ac体ed贴m行y s为ka是te“s n推ex力tt”othe bed andwhispered,be downstairs when youre ready/固定句•结局升华

9.完成情绪B转y折no和on行,I为fo转un变dmyself lacingup my skates again—not fora medal,but for myself.固定句•主题点睛

10.点题I升tt华ur，ns呼ou应t,标lo题sing isntthe end—its justanother partof the journey to something I love.范文Paragraph1:The nextmorning,I didntget upat5:30formyskating practice.A waveof frustrationandshame sweptover meas Iburied myface intothe pillow.My sparklydress stilllay crumpledonthe floor,a silentreminder oflast nightsdisaster.I staredat theceiling,turned tothe wall,and pulledthe blanketover myhead.I kneweveryone wouldbe talkingabout howI fellagainand again.No soonerhad Idecided toskip practicethan Iheard Dadknocking onmy door,hisvoice softbut firm.Paragraph2:Daddys wordsconvinced methis waswhat Itruly loved.His wordsdidnt erasemy failure,but theyreminded mewhy Istarted skatingin thefirst place.He talkedabout thefirst timeIstepped onice,and howmy eyeslit uplike stars.He placedmyskatesnext tothebedandwhispered,TH bedownstairswhenyoureready/By noon,I foundmyself lacingup myskatesagain—not fora medal,but formyself.It turnsout,losing isntthe end—its justanother partofthejourneytosomethingIlove.。