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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文Maxreachedaworkplaceforhisinauguralinterview.Hehadpreviouslyresidedwithhisparents.Hewasexasperatedbyhisparentsreproachesforeveryminoractionhetookathome.Whileawaitingtheinterview,hepondered,OnlyifIachievesuccessintodaysinterviewwillIbidfarewelltomyparentsabodeandestablishmyselfinthesprawlingmetropolis,whichwillenablemetoevadetheconstantbarrageofmyparentscomplaintsabouttrivialmatters.Hebegantoreminisceabouttheminorissueshisparentsusedtoberatehimfor-Howhismotherwouldrequesthimtomakehisbedafterheawoke.Ifheleftthebathroomdoorajar,his motherwoulddemand thathe closethe doorand,prior tothat,ensure thatthe faucetwas properlyturnedoff.Howhisfatherwouldinsistthatheswitchoffthefanorlightswitchbeforehedeparted.Howhismotherwouldperpetuallyblamehimfornotplacingitemsintheirdesignatedspots.While contemplatingall thesematters,he questioned,Why shouldI heedtheir utteiancesWhy shouldIcomply withall thesedemands IfI secureemployment,I shallassuredly departfrom theirdomicile.As heglancedaround.Maxobservedthatnumerouscandidateswereseatedintheoffice.Henoticedthatthelightintheoffice wasstill illuminatedanditwastenoclockinthemorning.Recallinghis fathersadmonitions,he roseandswitchedoffthelight.Whenheespiedwaterdrippingfromthewatercoolersituatedintheoffice,heproceededtoproperlyturnoffthetap.It wasthe momentto ascendto the second floorfor theinterview,and everyoneproceeded upstairsinsequence.Onthewayupthestaircase,achairwaspositionedinthepath,andtheothercandidatescircumventedit,but Maxremoved it,placed itaside,and continuedon tothesecondfloor.Now,as Maxwaited outside,heobserved thecandidates precedinghim enteringand exitingswiftly.After conversingwith theseindividuals,hediscoveredthattheinterviewershadnotposedanyquestionstothem.注意1续写词数应为150个左右;2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答ItwasMaxsturntobeinterviewed.Aftertheinterview,Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparents._续写中需要回答的问题WhathappenedduringMaxsinterviewAnswer:WhenMaxenteredtheinterviewroom,theinterviewerstoldhimhathisactionsbeforetheinterviewwereactuallypartofthetest.Theypraisedhisgoodhabitsandresponsibleattitude,andthenofferedhimthejob.WhydidMaxhughisparentsaftertheinterviewAnswer:Maxrealizedthatthehabitshisparentshadtaughthim,liketurningofflightsandfaucets,werevaluable.Hewasgratefuliohisparentsforinstillingthesegoodqualitiesinhim,sohehuggedthemtoshowhisloveandgratitude.HowdidMaxfeelduringtheinteniewAnswer:Atfirst,Maxmighthavebeenabitnervousasheenteredtheinterviewroom.Butafterunderstandingthesituation,hefeltrelievedandproudofhimselfforfollowinghisparentsteachings.WhatdidMaxleamfromthisexperienceAnswer:Maxlearned(hatthesmall,seeminglyannoyingthingshisparentstaughthimwereactuallyimportantlifeskillsandqualities.Healsolearnedtoappreciatehisparentseffortsinraisinghim.HowdidMaxsviewofhisparentschangeAnswer:Maxsviewchangedfrombeingexasperatedbyhisparentsreproachestobeinggratefulfortheirguidance.Henowunderstoodthattheirconstantreminderswereforhisowngood.故事主旨通过Max的面试经历,展现父母日常教导的价值,以及孩子对父母态度从厌烦到理解、感恩的转变,强调家庭教育对个人成长的重要性故事山开端Max去参加工作面试,他对父母因小事的责备感到厌烦,渴望通过面试离开家发展在等待面试时,Max回忆父母的责备,并在办公室里自然地做出如关灯、关水龙头、挪开椅子等符合父母教导的行为前面的候选人面试时面试官没问问题就结束了高潮(续写部分)Max面试时得知之前的行为是面试的一部分,他因良好习惯和态度获得工作;面试后Max理解并感恩父母,态度发生转变结局Max和父母关系更加融洽,他意识到家庭教育的重要性故事发展线索Max对父母不满去面试一在面试场所回忆父母责备并做出相关行为一前面候选人面试奇怪-Max面试—Max理解父母并感恩情感线索厌烦父母(对父母责备感到恼怒)一期待改变(希望通过面试离开家)一疑惑(对前面候选人面试情况不解)-惊喜(因良好行为获得工作)一感恩(理解父母教导的意义).续写布局与框架第一段详细描述Max面试的过程,包括面试官的反应、对Max之前行为的评价以及最终的面试结果,突出Max的惊讶与喜悦第二段着重刻画Max回家后的场景,描述他与父母拥抱时的心情,通过内心独白或与父母的简短对话,展现他对父用态度的巨大转变以及对家庭教育的深刻理解续写注意事项承接原文紧密围绕Max面试前的经历和心理活动,延续他的行为习惯和情感变化例如,在描述面试场景时,提及他之前关灯、关水龙头等行为对面试官的影响整体设计确保两段续写内容连贯,从面试成功自然过渡到回家感恩父母,使故事完整且逻辑清晰巧妙设计通过面试官的话语揭示面试的特殊形式,巧妙呼应Max之前的行为,突出家庭教育对他成功的作用高分语句呼应原文Justashisfatherhadalwaysinsistedonturningoffthelights,Maxsthissimpleyethabitualactionintheofficehadcaughttheattentionoftheinterviewers.(呼应原文中父亲对Max关灯的教导)高级句型ItwasnotuntilMaxheardthewordsfromtheinterviewers(hathetrulyrealizedhowmuchhisparentsteachingshadinfluencedhim.(使用强调句,增强表达效果,突出Max的感悟)主题表达意义延伸宜接引语点明主旨Your parentshave taughtyou well.Thesesmall habitsarethekeys toyourfuturesuccess,saidtheinterviewer.Maxthenunderstoodthesignificanceofhisparentsnagging.促成转变,引发感悟TheinterviewexperiencecompletelychangedMaxsattitudetowardshisparents.Henowsawtheirconstantremindersaspreciousgiftsthathadshapedhimintoaresponsibleperson.借象征物点明主旨ThechairthatMaxmovedasideduringtheinterviewsymbolizedtheobstaclesinlife.Hisparentsteachingswerelikehisguidinglight,helpinghimovercometheseobstacles.学生写作示范学生示范一It wasMaxs turnto beinterviewed.As heentered theroom,the interviewerssmiled athim.Weve beenobservingyou sinceyou arrived,one ofthem said.Your actions,like turningoff thelight andthe faucet,andmovingthechair,showyourgoodqualities.Wedontneedtoaskyouanyquestions.Youvepassedtheinterviewbecause ofyour dailyhabits.Max wasstunned atfirst,and thena bigsmile spreadacross hisface.He couldntbelievehisears.Aftertheinterview.Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparents.Igotthejob,anditsallbecauseofyou,hesaidwithtearsinhiseyes.Iusedtobeannoyedbyyourreminders,buttodayIrealizedtheyaresoimportant.Youtaught methe rightway tolive,andthats whyIsucceeded.Thankyou somuch.His parentswere surprisedbutextremelyhappy.Fromthatdayon,Maxnevercomplainedabouthisparentsteachingsagain.学生示范二ItwasMaxsturntobeinterviewed.Whenhewalkedin.theinterviewersimmediatelysaid,Wevebeenwatchingyou.Yoursmallactsofkindnessandresponsibilityareexactlywhatwearelookingforinanemployee.Youvepassedthetestwithoutusaskingasinglequestion.Maxwasoveijoyed.Herealizedthatthosethingshisparentsalwaystoldhimtodowereactuallyhelpinghim.Aftertheinterview.Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparentstightly.VIwaswrong,hesaid.Ithoughtyouwerejustnagging,butyourteachingsgotmethejob.Imsogratefulforeverythingyouvedoneforme.Iwontbeimpatientwithyourwordsanymore.Hisparentsweretouched.Maxfinallyunderstoodthevalueoftheirguidance.参考答案第一段ItwasMaxsturntobeinterviewed.Heenteredtheroomwithamixofnervousnessandexcitement.Tohissurprise,theinterviewersdidntaskhimanyquestionsabouthisqualificationsorexperience.Instead,theysimplysaid,Max,thankyouforcoming.Wehaveobservedyouthroughouttheday,andyouractionshavespokenlouderthananywordscould.Youturnedoffthelight,closedthetap,andmovedthechair.Thesesmallgesturesshowagreatsenseofresponsibilityandrespectforothers.Webelieveyouwillbeavaluableadditiontoourteam.Congratulations,youvegotthejob!Maxwastakenabackforamoment,butthenawidesmilespreadacrosshisface.Thankyousomuch,hereplied,feelingawaveofreliefandpridewashoverhim.Ireallyappreciatethisopportunity,andIpromiseIwilldomybest.1第二段Aftertheinterview,Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparentstightly.Herealizedthatheirconstantremindersandseeminglytrivialcomplaintswerenotmeanttocriticizehim,buttoguidehimtowardsbecomingaresponsibleandconsiderateperson.Thankyou.MomandDad.hesaidsincerely.Iunderstandnowthatthesesmallactionsareimportant.Iwillalwaysrememberyourteachingsandstrivetobeabetterperson,notjustinmycareer,butineveryaspectofmylife.Hisparentssmiledwarmly,theireyesfilledwithloveandpride.Weknewyouhaditinyou,Max,hisfathersaid,pattinghimontheback.Weresoproudofyou.andweknowyoulldogreatthings.Maxfeltadeepsenseofgratitudeanddetermination.Heknewthathisjourneywasjustbeginning,andhewasreadytofacewhateverchallengeslayaheadwiththevalueshisparentshadinstilledinhim.。
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