读后续写--从沮丧到成长：小男孩的赛道心路 讲义--高考英语复习写作专项

读后续写一从沮丧到成长小男孩的赛道心路讲义读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文The crowdroared as I tookoff fromthe startingline inThe BigRace.Through thecheers,Iheard Momshouting Run,Sammy,run!”I knewwithout lookingthat she was smilingfrom eartoear andclapping herhands for me.I keptmy eyesstraight aheadrunning asfast asI could.Run,run,run/I chantedtomyself in my mindasIpassed myfriend Justin.I sawJustins redface out of thecorner ofmyeye andwondered ifmy ownface wasthat redtoo“Run,run,run.I wason fire,passing Sarah,leaving herin mydust.The coachwas waitingformeat the finish line,holding themedal forthe fastestrunner inkindergarten.I wouldwear thatblue andwhite ribbonaround myneck whenwe goout foricecream tocelebrate and then hangit in my room.Last nightI tookthe collectionof capsoff thehookon mywall leavingit readyfor myshiny newmedal.I couldntwait tosee itevery daywhenI wokeup.Dad wasthere inthe crowdalso andwould pickme upand put me onhis shoulderstoa ncarryaround.My son!”He wouldtell theother fathers,My sonwon therace!I wasgoing towin!Faster thanSarah,I cameup behindMikey,giving mylegs thatextraburst ofenergy topass himby.The winner,Sammy!All thatrunning inthe parkwas worthit!Just asI heardthe roarof the crowd welcoming me to thefinish line,I sawa bluroutofthecorner ofmy eye.What Therewas Justinwith histomato cheeksrunning asfast ashumanlypossible,huffing andpuffing likehe wasgoing toblow thehouse down.And thenhewasinfront ofme.I wasb；ehind tomatoface Justin.Crossing thefinishline,I heardthe voiceover theloudspeakerboom Congratulations tothewinner,Justin!CongratulationstoJustinCongratulations toJustin.注意续写词数应为左右；

1..请按如下格式1在5答0题卡的相应位置作答2Paragraph1:I stood there frozen as Justin was handed his medal.Paragraph2:Suddenly,strong handslifted meonto Dadsshoulders.解题思路分析整体情感走向

1.开头是“我站在那里发愣”，情绪是震惊+失落+委屈；最后一段以“爸爸将我高高举起”收尾，要有一个情感升华尽管没赢比赛，我依然得到了爱和认可.情节安排建议2第一段写心理变化+身体反应+爸爸出现的安慰；第二段写爸爸鼓励、观众反应，的内心完成“从羡慕别人-接纳自己-获得温暖”的成长Sammy写作结构第一段描写失落与转折，情感由低谷到第一波缓解段首给定句Paragraph1:1stoodthere frozenas Justinwas handedhis medal.句序类型内容示例固定句

①A waveof disappointmentwashed over me,heavier（情感描写）1than anything I had ever felt before.自拟句；（细节描写）I clenchedmy fistsand staredat the ground trying2hard to swallow the lump rising in my固定句

②throat.I turnedslowly,shuffled towardthe sideline,and（动作链）3blinked away the tears that threatened to fall.自拟句Around me,the crowdcheered forJustin,but tome,（冲突铺垫）4everything soundeddistant andmuffled.固定句

③No soonerhad I lowered my head than I felt a pair（情节转折）5第二of strong arms liftin段gmeinto theair.:情绪升华，完成成长性总结段首给定句句P序aragraph2:Sudden类ly型,strong handslifted meonto Dadssho内u容lde示rs例.固定句

④（情感转变）A strangewarmth roseinmychest asDad carried6me highabove thecrowd likeI wasthe truewinner.自拟句（背景渲染）I sawthe coachsmiling at me,and Momwiping her17eyes whilemouthing,You didamazing7From above,I spottedJustin wavingat mewith his自拟句（细节描写）medal swingingfrom hisneck—I wavedback,8smiling.固定句

⑤（结局升华）By thetime Dadput medown,I realizedthat9sometimes,not winningteaches you even more.固定句

⑥（主题点睛）That day,I learnedthat truevictory liesin effort,10courage,and thelove thatlifts you when you fall.范文01Paragraph1I stoodtherefrozenasJustinwashandedhismedal.A waveof disappointmentwashedoverme,heavier thananythingIhadeverfeltbefore.I clenchedmy fistsandstared attheground,trying hardtoswallowthelumprisinginmy throat.I turnedslowly,shuffled towardthe sideline,and blinkedawaythetearsthatthreatenedtofall.Around me,thecrowdcheered forJustin,but tome,everything soundeddistant andmuffled.Nosooner hadIloweredmyheadthanIfeltapair ofstrongarmslifting meinto theair.Paragraph2Suddenly,strong handslifted meonto Dadsshoulders.A strangewarmth roseinmychest asDad carriedme highabove thecrowd likeI wasthetrue winner.I sawthe coachsmiling atme,and Momwiping hereyes whilemouthing,“You didamazing/From above,I spottedJustin wavingatmewith hismedal swingingfrom hisneck—Iwaved back,smiling.By thetime Dadputmedown,I realizedthat sometimes,not winningteachesyouevenmore.That day,I learnedthat truevictory liesin effort,courage,andthelovethat liftsyouwhenyoufall.。