2025届高考英语复习 高中英语作文写作技巧点拨（素材）

高中英语作文写作技巧点拨写作的“七项基本原则〃

一、长短句原则老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题As acreature,I eat;as aman,I read.Although oneaction is to meetthe primaryneed ofmybody andthe otheristosatisfy theintellectual needof mind,they are in away quitesimilar.强烈建议.在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短；

1.在文章主体部分，先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句2群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！.文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了3

二、主题句原则议论性的文章一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然!（主题To beginwith,you mustwork hardat yourlessons andbe fullyprepared beforethe exam句）,Without sufficientpreparation,you canhardly expectto answerall thequestions correctly.

三、一二三原则考官们看文章必然要通过关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了）（不推荐）1first,second,third,last）（不推荐）2firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally）（不推荐）3the first,the second,the third,the last）（不推荐）4in thefirst place,in the second place,in thethird place,lastly）（推荐）5to beginwith,then,furthermore,finally）（推荐）6to startwith,next,finally）（首要）（强烈推荐）7first andforemost,besides,in addition,last butnot least）（强烈推荐）8most importantof all,moreover,finally）（适用于两点的情9on theone hand,on theother hand况））（适用于两点的情况）10for onething,for anotherthing

四、短语优先原则考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点其

二、凑字数比如可以用短语表达可以用短语表达I cannot bear it.I cannotput up with it.I wantit.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确I amlooking forwardto it.

五、多实少虚原则多用实词，少用虚词我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词比如我们说某人很好〃的时候，不应该之说这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如nice generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,之类的形象词再比如走出房间，虚的词是但warm-hearted walkout of the room是小偷走出房间应该说小孩走出房间应该说老人走出slip out of the room danceoutof theroom房间应该说:stagger outof theroom

六、多变句式原则）加法（串联）1都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加但最好是前后的句子有先后关系或者并列关系and,比如说如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个高级句I enjoymusic andhe isfond ofplaying guitar.式其它的短语可以用Not onlythe furcoat issoft,but it is alsowarm.besides,furthermore,likewise（同样地），moreover）转折（拐弯抹角）2批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个转折就够了The carwas quiteold,yet itwas inexcellent condition.The coatwas thin,but itwas warm.更多的短语（然而），despite that,however,nevertheless inspite of,despite,）因果3故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后〃这个词就变得很常见了其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！The snowbegan tofall,so wewent home.更多短语（因此）（因此）,（因此）,then,therefore,consequently,accordingly henceas aresult,for thisreason,so that）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）4文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形举彳列This iswhat I can do.Whether he can gowith usor notis notsure.）附加5运用定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语The manwhom youmet yesterdayis afriend ofmine.Idont enjoythat bookyou arereading.Mr liu,our oralEnglish teacher,is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语从句要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中

七、挑战极限原则在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然比如The weatherbeing fine,a largenumber ofpeople wentto climbthe WesternHills.Africa isthesecondlargest continent,its sizebeing aboutthree timesthat ofChina.绝对高分！文章主体段落三大杀手铜

一、举实例举实例是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二H一,举例子！In orderto attractmore customers,advertisers haveadopted everypossible stimulativefactor inmakingads,such assound,light,colors,cartoon filmsand humanperformance.For instance,to（吞）advertise acertain food,advertisers willask anactor oractress tosit ata tableand devourtheseemingly deliciousfood whilethey filmhim orher.更多句型

二、做比To take...as anexample,One exampleis...,Another exampleis...,for example较方法写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（）和不同点（）下面是一些短语through comparisonthrough contrast相彳以的比较in comparison,likewise,similarly,in thesame manner相反的比较:（相反）,（反之）,on theother hand,conversely whereaswhile,instead,nevertheless,（相反）,（相反）in contraston thecontrary,compared with...

三、换言之没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让读者更充分的理解你的观点实际就是重复重复再重复！可以用短语表达I cannotbear it.I cannotput upwith it.因此可以这样说（）I cannotbear it.That isto say,I cannotput upwith itor Iam fedupwithit.更多短语in simplerwords,put itmore simply开头方法一名人名言经典句型（适用于已记住的名言）A proverbsays,You areonly youngonce.（适用于自编名言）It goeswithout sayingthat we cannotbeyoung forever.更多经典句型As everyoneknows,No onecan denythat...开头方法二数字统计要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明所以不妨试用下面的句型According toa recentsurvey,about70%of thecollege studentswanted tofurther theirstudy aftertheirgraduation.A recentstatistics showsthat...作文题根据最近一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中都是假的Honesty50%作文题根据最近一项统计调查显示，在某大学，学生课余时间都是在休闲娱乐Youth70%结尾方法一结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样,你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子（此为过渡短语）,Obviously we can drawthe conclusionthat good更多过渡短语manners arisefrom politenessand respectfor others.in conclusion,in brief,thus,it can，be concludedthat...,Therefore,wecanfind that...to sumup,结尾方法二建议经典的虚拟语气的句Obviously,it ishigh timethat wetook some measures to solve the problem.型！更多句型（因止匕）（因Accordingly,I recommendthat somemeasures betaken.Consequently止匕）,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshould betaken.排比（排山倒海句）引用一个个排比句，一个个对偶句，一个个的不定式，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!Whether yourtastes aremodern ortraditional,sophisticated orsimple,there isplenty inNanjingfor you.Nowadays,energy canbe obtainedthrough varioussources suchas oil,coal,natural gas,solarheat,the windand oceantides.We havegot tostudy hard,to enlargeour scopeof knowledge,to气势,恢宏！realize ourpotentials andto payfor ourlife.范文（关于主题句）1Report onthe Surveyabout ourSchool UniformRecentlyI dida surveyabout our school uniform.I interviewedgroups ofstudents whattheythought aboutour schooluniform.The resultis asfollowing.60%ofthe students interviewedexpressed theirsatisfaction withit.Wearing thefashionableuniform ofa goodcolour,they canprove themselvesstudents andfeel verytidy.The uniformalsoshows theyare equaland thereis noneed forthemselves tofollow thefashion.Most ofthemconsidered itto bea symbolfor students.On thecontrary,about30%ofthestudents helddifferent opinions.They thoughtit hadan uglycolourand woreuncomfortably.Besides,they thoughtit unfashionableand hada dullstyle.10%had noidea aboutit.In general,ourschooluniform ispopular withmost ofthestudents,but itstill needssomeimprovement.范文关于失学（表原因）2Now moreand morechildren in the countrysideare outof school.One ofthe reasonsis thattheirparents haventmuch moneyto affordtheir school.They haveto stayat hometo earnmoney tosupporttheir families.What apity!And anotherreason isthat manyparents thinkitisuseless forgirlsto studyand theywould notlike themto go to school.On theother hand,some childrenare notinterestedin theirlessons andwould notlike togotoschool.I thinkall thechildren,including girls,should havethe rightto receiveeducation.We havetheduty tolend thema handwhen theyareintrouble.All thepeople shouldpay attentionto theeducationof childrenwho willplay avery importantpart inthe futureof ourcountry.范文关于3health（短问句开头）Which is more important,health orwealth Itis ahot topicamong people.I canhardlyanswer thisquestion.I didntrealize thathealth ismore importantuntil Isaw abusinessmansreal life.A successfulbusinessman,one ofmy fathersfriends,devoted himselfto hisbusiness.He worksfrommorning tonight everyday.There isno weekendsin hismind.He oftensays,zzl mustearn muchmoneyso thatIcanget whatI want.Lately,he isill.Though hehas alot ofmoney,hecando nothing（举例）but lieinthehospitals bed.So Ithink healthismoreimportant thanwealth.People cando nothingif theyare alwaysin poorhealth,let alonehappiness.No matterwe arerich ornot,wecannot ignorethe importanceof health.。