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中考英语热门话题写作优秀范文(精选3篇)专题01经历与感受【考情分析】考查角度及考查频率参加万动实践的经历及感受日常生活或学习中有意义的一次经历及个人感受•全国考查角度发生的T牛好人好事以及个人感受等•【素材积累】Para1引出话题
1.没有人不努力就能成功,我也不例外No onecan succeedwithout hardwork,and Imnot anexception.
2.俗话说有志者,事竟成The sayinggoes,“Where there is a will,there isway.”
3.生活充满了挑战,我们都必须在某些时候勇敢地面对困难就我而言,我总是在困难面前克服障碍,成为更好的自己Life isfull ofchallenges,and weall haveto facedifficulties bravelyat somepoint.In mycase,I have always managedto overcomeobstacles andbecome abetterself whenfacing difficulties.据下列提示,用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿,分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化,并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化,谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发注意1)开头已给,不计入总词数;)2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等【优秀范文】How Fve Changed!In thepast fewyears,r vechanged a lot bothphysically andmentally.I used to bethin andshort.But nowI mtall andstrong.T ma brave andoutgoing student.However,I wasa littlebit shybefore.My hobbyhas changed,too.I usedto playcomputer gameson weekends.But nowI spendmuch timeplayingbasketball withmy friends.Besides,my Englishhas improveda lot.I usedto beafraidof speakingEnglish.Later Itried tolisten moreand speakmore.Now Ievendare tomake speechesin publicin English.The most important changein mylifewas becominginterested inreading.Last summer,my bestfriend gaveme aninterestingbook to read.I enjoyedit somuch thatI startedtoreadother books.Itwas the mostimportant change because I learned alot from reading.What smore,reading makesme happyand relaxed.What greatchanges!I hopeI canbecome betterand better.[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态时态为〃一般现在时〃和〃一般过去时〃穿插;
③提示写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当拓展[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图用〃在过去的几年里,我的身体和精神都发生了很大的变化〃引出下文;第二步,具体阐述写作内容描述外貌、个性、爰好和能力这四个方面的变化,具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化以及启发;第三步,总结全文,表明〃我希望我能变得越来越好〃,进行情感升华[亮点词汇]
①usedto do sth.过去常常做某事
②spend timedoing sth.花时间做某事
③be afraidof害怕[高分句型]It wasthemostimportantchangebecauseI learnedalotfromreading.because引导的原因状语从句)【实战演练3]在我们的成长中总会面对各种各样的麻烦,压力与担忧,良好地处理问题方式能够帮助我们解决问题某英文网站正在开展以Problem-solving”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述一次你成功解决问题的经历,并谈谈你的收获和感悟要求
1.条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整
2.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校
3.不少于80词【优秀范文】Problem-solvingIn ourgrowth,we alwaysface allkinds oftroubles,pressures andworries.Here rd liketo sharean experienceof solvinga problemsuccessfully.Last term,I hada bigproblem withmy math.I failedseveral testsand feltreallystressed.But Ididn tgive up.I decidedto changethe situation.I spentmoretime doingmath exercisesand askedmy teacherand classmatesfor help.I alsoreviewedthe knowledgeI hadlearned before.Finally,my effortspaid off.I madegreat progressin mathand passedthefinal exam.Through thisexperience,I learnedthat whenfacing problems,we shouldbe braveand take positive actions.As longas wekeep trying,we canovercome anydifficulties.[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇记叙文
②时态以一般过去时为主
③主题讲述作者成功解决数学学习问题的经历[写作步骤]第一步,开篇指出在成长中会面临各种问题,引出分享成功解决问题的经历第二步,详细叙述数学学习遇到的问题及解决措施,如花费更多时间做练习、向老师同学求助、复习旧知识第三步,结尾总结通过这次经历的收获,即面对问题要勇敢并采取积极行动,只要坚持就能克服困难[亮点词汇]
①stress压力;使紧张
②pay off取得成功;得到回报
③positive积极的;正面的[高分句型]Through thisexperience,I learnedthat whenfacing problems,we shouldbebrave(andtakepositiveactions.that弓I导宾语从句)
4.生活就像爬山,在爬山的过程中,我们会遇到许多挑战让我分享一个我在成长过程中曾经克服过的困难Life islike mountainclimbing,during whichthere aremany challengesgetting inourway.Let meshare oneof thedifficulties thatI everovercame onthe journeyofgrowth.
5.我去年的一次英语考试不及格,今天我仍然记忆犹新An Englishexam thatI failedlast yearremains freshin mymemory today.
6.当我成长的时候,我所经历的一切都像钻石一样在我的脑海里闪闪发光Everything Ihave experiencedshines likediamonds inmy mindwhen Iam growingup.
7.我仍然记得我为运动会做准备的日子I stillremember thedays whenI waspreparing forthe sportsmeeting.
8.清晰的记忆不知不觉涌进了我的脑海The clear memory crowdedinto mymind unconsciously.
9.去年发生在我身上的事完全证明了这一点What happenedto melast yeardefinitely provedthis.Para3总结+表态In short/In conclusion/To sumup/In aword/All inall/In general/Generally speaking/Taking myexperience intoconclusionL回顾那些日子,我可以自豪地说,这些努力是值得的因此,我们所有人都应该记住,有痛苦就有收获Looking backon thosedays,I canproudly saythat itsworth theeffort.As aresult,allof usare supposedto rememberthere isgain whenthere ispain.
2.总结我的经验,只有当我们下定决心去实现我们的梦想,坚持战斗,我们才能赢得战斗所以毫无疑问,有志者,事竟成Taking myexperience intoconclusion,only whenwe makeup ourmind toachieveour dreamsand insiston fightingcan wewin thebattle.So there is nodoubt thatwherethereisawill,thereisa way.
3.如上所述,老师和朋友的鼓励给了我很多灵感和动力,我深深地感谢他们As Iveshown above,encouragement frommy teachersand friendshas givenme alotof inspirationand motivation,and Iam gratefulto themdeeply.
4.可见,鼓励的话使人充满活力和信心虽然一年过去了,但正是他们温暖有力的话语给了我继续奋斗的动力It canbe seenthat encouragingwords makepeople energeticand confidence.Although oneyear passed,ids theirwarm andpowerful wordsthat brinqme enerqvtokeep onfighting.5我从这次经历中学到的是,只有以积极的态度面对困难,我们才能成功地应对生活中面•临的所有挑战What Ihave learnedfrom thisexperience isthat onlywith a positive attitudetowardsdifficulties canwe succeedin dealingwith allthe challengeswe facein life.【写作指导】假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣请你结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想词数80左右注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名第一步细审题定要点(五审法审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点))1审人称以第一人称为主2)审时态以一般过去时为主3)审文体应用文)4审主题介绍实践活动的经历和感受5)审要点(要点1:了解长征learn about the Long March长征)要点2:听红军故事listen to the storiesof the Red Army要点3:欣赏剪纸艺术enjoy p叩er cuttingart第二步分段落列要点首段(Beginning):引出本次实践活动(部分开头已给出)中间段(Body):按时间顺序,用一般过去时描述一天的实践活动结尾(Ending):升华感受概述这次经历的感受第三步扩句子精加工首段[过渡句]引出经历[一般句]Let metell yousomething aboutit.[高分句]I mglad to share withyou myactivities./If smy pleasuretoshare with youmypractical experience.F mglad to do.../It smy pleasureto do...中间段【经历一与历史博物馆有关的经历】[一般句]In themorning,we visitedthe HistoryMuseum andthen welistened to thestories of theRed Army.They wereso wonderful.[高分句]In themorning,we visitedthe HistoryMuseum.We learnedabout thehistoryof theLong March.Then welistened tothe storiesof theRed Army.Theytouched usgreatly.(具体描述)【经历二与民俗文化中心有关的经历】[-6殳句]In theafternoon,we wenttotheFolk CultureCenter andenjoyed papercutting art.[高分句](具体描述)结尾升华感受[一般句]The tourreminds me to loveour countryand knowmore abouttraditionalChinese art.[高分句]Thanks tothis tour,we not only deepenour lovefor ourcountry but also()haveabetter understandingof traditionalChinese art!not only...but also...第四步连句子成短文Dear Henry,rmglad thatyou reinterested inour schoolstudy tourlast Friday.It smypleasure tosharewithyou myexperience.In themorning,we visitedthe HistoryMuseum.We learnedaboutthehistory oftheLongMarch.Then welistened tothe storiesoftheRedArmy.They touchedusgreatly.After lunch,we wenttotheFolk CultureCenter andwe enjoyedpapercuttingart.We alsowatched localopera performances.They areeducational.Thanks tothis tour,we notonly deepenour lovefor ourcountry butalso haveabetter understandingof traditionalChinese art!第五步直全文得高分首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确【实战演练1]初三的学习生活宛如紧张刺激的马拉松比赛,总是充满挑战,在一些艰难时刻,是谁帮助了你?请以MyInspiring Story为标题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,让我们一同分享在困境中汲取力量、砥砺奋进的故事,传递向上的青春正能量要求
1.讲述一个自己的故事;
2.你的感悟;
3.适当增加细节,行文连贯;【优秀范文】My InspiringStoryThe journeyof studyingin thethird yearof juniorhigh islike athrilling marathon.In sometough moments,it wasmy Englishteacher whohelped me.She notonlytaught meEnglish butalso taughtme howto faceadversity.I will never forget thetime whenI wasstruggling withmy Englishgrades.She encouragedmetokeeppracticing andnever give up.With herhelp,I finallyimproved my English andgainedconfidence.Ilearnedthat perseveranceis thekey tosuccess.No matterhow difficultthe situation is,we shouldnever giveup andalways move on.This experiencehasinspired meto facechallenges inlife withapositiveattitude.[总体分析]
①题材本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主;
③提示写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号[写作步骤]第一步,介绍在一些艰难时刻,帮助自己的人是谁;第二步,讲述一个自己的故事;第三步,介绍自己的感悟[亮点词汇]
①notonly...butalso不仅.......而且
③encourage sb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事
④giveup放弃
⑤moveon继续前进©inspire sb.todosth.激励某人做某事[高分句型]
①In sometough moments,it wasmy Englishteacher whohelped me.(弓虽调句)()21willneverforgetthetime whenI wasstruggling withmyEnglishgrades,(when引导定语从句)
③No matterhow difficultthesituationis,we shouldnever giveup andalways move(on.no matterhow引导让步状语从句)【实战演练2】青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢?学校英文报〃Teens栏目正在以How Yve Changed!”为题开展征文活动请你根。
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