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最新中考英语热门话题满分作文(附优秀范文)专题02劳动实践【命题探索】为了切实落实教育改革要求学生“德智体美劳”全面发展,近几年全国中高考试题都不同程度增加了五育的考查如“结合自身体会谈论如何培养劳动精神,分析全国中考真题可知,此话题有以下命题角度1树立劳动观念进行实践活动如云南省卷“Doing HouseworkMakes me”;南充“我劳动,我快乐”;重庆A卷“Some Adviceon DevelopingLabor Educationin OurSchool;烟台邀请好友参加劳动实践周活动”;2019湘潭“Help withSome Housework”等;),2参加体育运动,倡导健康理念如怀化“申请当亚运会的志愿者“;娄底以Sports为题的征文比赛;襄阳“谈一谈你对中考体育考试的改革方案的态度和观点”;)3渗透美育知识,引导审美情趣如衡阳”介绍中国的文化特色”;杭州“接受朋友的邀请去发表关于中国民族音乐的演讲并询问相关事宜”;连云港“邀请外籍教师参加学校举办的我是美猴王’在线才艺展示活动”;荆门“向笔友介绍学校的戏曲进校园展演活动”等
一、写作指导假定你是李华,近日你校开展了以“热爰劳动,珍爰粮食为主题的实践活动请你结合以下图示,用英语给笔友John写一封信,分享活动过程和感受词数80左右注意事项
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名第一步细审题定要点(五审法审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点))1审主题热爰劳动,珍爰粮食2)审时态以一般过去时为主)3审人称以第一人称为主4)审文体应用文第二步分段落列要点首段(Beginning):开门见山,引出话题自己在田间劳动一日的经历中间段(Body):详细介绍活动的时间、地点、内容以及自己的感受结尾(Ending):用疑问句来呼应首段(已给出)第三步扩句子精加工首段引出话题田间劳动[一般句]Im gladto tellyou myexperience in rice fields.[高分句]Im gladto tellyou myone-day experienceinrice fields./My one-dayexperience inricefieldsis wellworth sharingwith you.中间段活动的时间、地点、内容及感受【要点一】活动时间和地点[—9殳句]On June18,my classmatesand Iwent tothe communityfarm.[高分句]On June18,my classmatesand Iwent tothe communityfarm,laughing()and jumping.v.-ing形式作伴随状语【要点二】活动内容[一般句]Some learned to harvestrice.Some helpedto carryrice,and others pickedears of rice.【要点三】活动感受[—8殳句]After one-day work,we weretired,but wefelt happy.And Ihave cometorealize thatwe shouldsave foodfrom nowon.第四步连句子成短文Dear John/How iseverything goingFm gladto tellyou myone-day experiencein ricefields.On June18,my classmatesand Iwent tothe communityfarm.When wearrived,we visitedthe farmand watchedvideos onfarming.Then weworked togetherwithfarmers.Some learnedto harvestrice.Some helpedto carryrice whileotherspicked earsofricefrom thefields.Through theactivities,Ive gotthe pleasureofhard work and learnedto valueeach grain.Have youhad anyexperience ofthis kindYours,Li Hua第五步查全文得高分首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确,要点是否齐全;然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确素材积累劳动教育做家务do chores整理房间tidy theroom叠衣服fold theclothes做饭cook meals种权寸和种菜plant treesand growvegetables做志愿服务工作do volunteerwork拜访养老院visit theold peoplehome组织游学organize thestudy tour建立实践俱乐部set uppractice clubs开设劳动教育课offer/run alabor educationcourse学习更多的生活技能和变得更加独立learn morelife skillsand becomemoreindependent培养责任感和好习惯develop asense ofresponsibility andgood habits理解劳动的意义understand themeaning oflabor培养我们的独立性develop ourindependence美育知识寻找生活中更多的幸福与美find morehappiness andbeauty inlife课外活动after-class activities上培训课attend trainingcourses充分利用课外时间make thebest useof timeafter school培养兴趣爰好take uphobbies增强学生的身心健康improve students5physical andmental health实战演练假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课labor class上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等,观察并记录它们的生长变化你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受词数100左右提示
1.What doyou grow
2.How doyou look after itwatch,record
3.Feelings:a feeling of satisfaction,fun,learn,...注意事项
1.必须包含所有信息,可适当发挥,开头和格式已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名参考答案【高分句】
1.Some learnedto harvestrice.Some helpedto carryrice whileotherspickedearsof ricefrom thefields.
2.Through theactivities,Ive gotthe pleasureof hardwork andlearnedtovalueeach grain./Thanks tothese valuableactivities,Ive gota strongsense ofresponsibility.More importantly,I knewthe pleasureof hardworkand the valueoflabor.【实战演练】时态以一般过去时为主人称以第一人称为主要点:the nameof theplant;how tolookafterit,feelingsHi Tom,Hows itgoing rdlike toshare theinteresting experienceof mylaborhomework withyou.This term,my teacherasked usto growa plantand recordits changes.I choseasunflower andnamed itSunny.I putthe seedinto anice containerand carefullyrecordedits changes.Each day,I wateredand lookedafter Sunnywith care.It wasfascinatingto seehow itslowly grewtaller andstronger.When Isaw thesunflowergrow well,I gota strongfeelingofsatisfaction.And thefunny shapeof thesunflowermade medeeply interestedin it.The interesting experience taughtme patienceandthebeauty ofnature.I hopeyoutry thistoo!Can youshare yourinterestingexperiencewith meLooking forwardto yourreply.Yours,Li Bin。
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