01 写人 素材储备与写作指导-中考英语书面表达（全国版）

1..你为什么特别喜欢他（她）注意:内容可以适当扩充2思路导航第妙例文审题题目要求说说你最喜欢的明星，故主体人称应为第三人称〃或主体人称he”she%主体时态由于文章主要介绍最喜欢的明星的一般情况，放主体时态用般现在时题目要求中包含的要点主要为三点，故可以将文章分为三部分进行损写写作贴士要点要求写的是外貌和个性特征两方面内容，注意不要遗漏1第❷步冽提纲简单介绍明星的基本概况，如外貌等；1详细描写明星的个性特征；2你最喜欢他她的原因3第❸步:参考词句1singer;be bornon;beautiful...2voice;attract;full of energy andconfidence stage:charity:feel proudof3favorite;excellent..第❹步:连句成篇My FavoriteStarMy favorite star isa singercalled Sun Yanzi,who iswell receivedby manypeople fromall overthe word.She wasbornon July,23rd,

1978.She is162cm highwith abeautiful face.SunYanzihas agreat voice.And thesongs shesings canalways attractme.Besides,she canbe fullofenergyandconfidence allthe time,whether onthe stageor inher reallife.What sheimpresses memost isthat sheoften takespartin thecharity work.We allthink highlyof whatshe hasdone tohelp peoplein need.She helpspoor childrengo toschooland theblind seethe worldagain.This iswhy Ichoose heras my favoritestar.I feelvery proudof her.This ismyfavoritestar,an excellentsinger.参考译文我最喜欢的明星我最喜欢的明星是一个叫孙燕姿的歌手，她受到全世界很多人的热爱她出生于年月日1978723她身高，有着漂亮的脸蛋162cm孙燕姿的声音很好听她唱的歌总能吸引我除此以外，不管是在舞台上，还是在现实生活中，她总是充满能量和自信最让我印象深刻的是，她经常做慈善活动我们都对她帮助生活困难的人这一一行为评价很高她帮助穷苦孩子上学，帮助盲人重见光明这也是我法她作为我最喜爱的明星的原因我为她感到很自豪这就是我最喜欢的明星，一位卓越的歌手相关话题满分作文必背FatherFather isnostalgic.He alwaysis.Nothing annoyshim morethan thequick changesin life:streets gettingcrowdedday by day,hideous newbuildings ofglass andsteel,cheats,dishonesty andrumor thatteem thesocial columnofnewspapers,and oddshaped piecesof modernart.Father isforever talkingabout thepast,the goodold daysof hischildhood,when rainwater wasfit fordrink,stars wereclear inthe nightsky.hare andsquirrels dartedacross emptystreets andpeople livedupright upontheirhonor.These arehis favoritetopics overdinner tableand henever getstired ofget tiredof them.Things wereso muchbetter/he wouldbegin witha sign,and weMother andI knowthat thismarks theprelude toa twohours monologue.Yet Ilike thepassionate obstinacyhe carries,mixed withwistfulness andregret.I leftmy familywhen Iwent tocollege.Father keepsthings whatthey wereafter Ileft;he evendoes notbotherto rearrangemy bookshelf.Every timeI return,I amgreeted withthat familiarsmell ofhome onthe doorsteps,thevery smellthat neverseem tohave changedsince theearliest daysof myremembrance,and myeyes gowetimmediately.To me,home iswhere Fatheris Nothingever changesthere,so iti thesafest placeintheworld AdaptedfromFather byPierre Leloup赏析:开篇前两句话开门见山地点明了人物描写的主题:父亲是一一个怀旧的人从那些容易让父亲生气的社会变化，到父亲爱回忆的过去美好时光，最后到我远离家乡上大学，但父亲一直把我的房间维持原状，无-不表现出父亲是一一个非常怀旧的人全文句型变化多样，语言地道，比如节选第一段中用了很多并列结构，把生活中改变的东西一样样列了出来:streets gettingcrowded daybyday,hideous newbuildings ofglass andsteel,cheats,dishonesty andrumor thatteem thesocial columnof newspapers,and oddshaped piecesof modernart.。