15 自然风光写作指导-中考英语书面表达（全国版）

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（一）The YellowMountainThe YellowMountain is located in the southof AnhuiProvince.It isone of the mostwell-known mountainsinChina.Every year,thousands oftourists at home and abroad cometo visitit.Its alittle farfrom the city.It takesyou aboutthree hoursto getthere bybus.Climbing themountain maymakeyou alittle tired.However,on theway tothe topof themountain,you can enjoy thesea ofclouds,wondrouspines andunique rocksaround you.In theearly morning,when thesun rises,the skylooks verybeautiful.You wouldbe amazedby thewonderful scenerythere.It isreally worthvisiting.参考译文黄山黄山位于安徽省的南部它是中国的名山之一每年，成千上万的中外游客去那里游览它离市区有点远坐汽车的话，大概要个小时才能到达那里爬山可能会使你有点累然而，在向山顶前进的过程中，你可以3欣赏环绕着你的云海、奇松和怪石清晨，当太阳升起来时，天空看起来非常美丽你会惊讶于那里的美丽景色它真的很值得去游玩亮点词汇成千上万的

1.thousands of海内外;中外

2.athomeandabroad疲倦的;劳累的

3.tired独特的;独一无二的

4.unique使惊讶;感到惊讶

5.amaze出彩句型

1....islocatedin......位于・・・・・

2.It isone of the mostwell-known...它是最著名,・…之・.

3.It takesyo...to dosth,这会花费.......（时间等）去做某事在…的路上,你可以…

4.On theway t....you can...值得做某事

5.It isworth doingsth.高分点评本文围绕中国的一座名山一黄山展开，介绍了它的概况、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等，呈现出绝美的山上奇景作者的文笔非常出色，等表达惟妙惟肖地展现了黄山之景文中的句式多“sea ofclouds”“unique rocks”变，如〃〃引导的形式主语句、动词的形式作主语等，都是文章的加分点it-ing

（二）Beihai BeachBeihaiBeach isvery famousin mycity.The beachlies in the northof thecity,about8kilometres away.Its oneofthe bestbeaches in thecity.The sandon thebeach isfine,soft andclean.And the water is clear with small waves.Therefore,its verysuitablefor swimmingand playingbeach volleyball.Many peoplecome hereto spendtheir holidays.Everyone saysit isabeautiful placeto travel.Moreover,the peoplehere arevery friendly.I thinkyou allcan enjoyyourselves here.参考译文北海滩北海滩在我的城市非常出名这个沙滩位于城市的北部，距离城市大约公里它是城中最好的沙滩之一8沙滩上的沙质很好，又柔软，又干净海水很清澈，带有小小的浪花因此，这里非常适合游泳和打沙滩排球很多人来这里度假每个人都说这是一个适合游览的美丽的地方而且，这里的人非常友好我觉得你们都会在这里玩得很开心亮点词汇柔软的l.soft波浪

2.wave适合的

3.suitable沙滩排球

4.beach volleyball

5.enjoy oneself玩得开心出彩句型

2.The wateris clearwith smallwaves非常适宜做..…

3.Its verysuitable for..很多人来这里度假

4.Many peoplecome hereto spendtheir holidays..你们都会在这里玩得很开心

5.You allcanenjoyyourselves here高分点评本文将北海滩的美丽景色呈现在我们面前，充满了作者对这一片沙滩的热爱之情文章中的句子均简单明了，如表示位置的＞描述海水的表，都清楚地描述了海滩的朴素之美，lie n..hewaterisclearwithsmallwaves”展示了作者扎实的语言功底相关话题满分作文必背

（二）Beautiful springspring withlight footstepscoining towardus,in thisseason forrevival,everything aroundbecome fullof vitality,lets findtogether followedinthefootsteps ofspring,the beautyof spring!Spring thunderrumbled withcontinuous rain,rain moistenthe wholeof the earth.Felinewinter inthe landof grassafter thebaptism ofthe springrains arescrambling todrillout oftheearth.Although small,although verythin,although verysoft butthegrassisvery strong,they willstill standtall,spring backto preventthe growthofthe grass.The earthcovered witha layerof green.Spring isa colourfulflowers bloomingseason,look atthe shopsopened,yellow primrose,blow thetrumpet,as ifto say:spring iscoming!”Yellow peach blossom zhankaismilingfaces,this beautifulpeach blossomfor parkadded alot ofvitality,peach blossomhas alotof color,have aplenty ofmei red,or pink,and white.The peach blossom is so delicate,mei redand pinkpeachblossomissoshy likea sensitiveplant,not allofthepeach blossomistemperamental.Look atthat whitepeachblossomis thatrace tothe openatmosphere,tomeet thebaptism ofthe rain.More leta personlike rape,far looklike theboundless yellowcarpetontheshop.Spring isso beautiful!Look atthat,inthefield aview ofjubilation,farmers arepermeated withsmile onherface,trying to sow together.The distanceof childrenput thekite,they releasetheirdreams.It wasa happymoment.It wasa beautifulspring,the springof hope,joy ofspring.In thespring,we alsowanttosow,planted theseeds ofhope withhard sweatin itto makeit alittle bitof growingup,fly ourdreams!参考译文美丽的春天春天迈着轻盈的脚步向我们走来了，在这万物复苏的季节，周围的一切都变得生机勃勃，让我们跟随着春的脚步一起寻找春天的美丽吧！轰隆隆的春雷带来了绵绵的春雨，春雨滋润了整个大地在土地里猫冬的小草经过春雨的洗礼后个个争先恐后的钻出了大地虽然很小，虽然很细，虽然很柔软但小草非常的坚强，它们仍会挺直腰板，春寒又袭都阻止不了小草的生长给大地披上了一层新绿春天是一个五颜六色、百花盛开的季节，看那迎春花开了，黄黄的迎春花吹起了小喇叭，好像在说“春天来了！〃一朵朵桃花绽开了笑脸，这美丽的桃花给公园增添了许多生机，桃花有很多颜色，有的是玫红的，有的是粉红的，还有雪白的玫红色的桃花是那么娇滴滴的，而粉红色的桃花呢却是那么的羞涩像含羞草一样，可不是所有的桃花都是那么的娇气看那白色的桃花是那样的大气都竞相开放，迎接春雨的洗礼更让人喜欢的是油菜花，远看就像铺上了无边无际的黄地毯春天好美丽呀！看那田野里，一片欢腾的景色，农民脸上都洋溢着微笑，一起来努力地播种远处小朋友放着风筝，他们放飞了自己的梦想那真是快乐的时刻这真是一个美丽的春天、希望的春天、快乐的春天在这春天里我们也要播种，种下希望的种子用辛勤的汗水浇灌它让它一点点的长大，放飞我们的梦想吧！

（三）A SpringMorningIt wasearly inthe morning.The sunwas justcreeping01^）out ofthe easternhorizon（地平线）and goldenred waspenetrating（穿透）through thewhite cloudsand acrossthesky.The lakes,the treesand thebamboos lookedas ifthey wereall gilded.The groundwascovered withtender grass,on whoseblades somedew dropswere glistening（晶莹易ij透）under thesunshine.Birds flewaround thewoods singingcheerfully andrestlessly.Some boyswere quietlyjoggingalong thepath,while acouple ofgirls werereading aloudunder thetrees liningthebank ofthelake.A gentlebreeze cameup,wrinkling（使・••起皱）the surfaceofthelake.It wasreallya beautifuland livelymorning.参考译文春晨清晨时分，太阳从东边的地平线慢慢爬起，一片金黄透过白色的云彩，划过天空湖泊、树木和竹林都似乎染上了金边地面上长满了绿油油的小草，小草的叶片上，几滴露珠在阳光的照耀下晶莹剔透鸟儿在树林里飞翔，不停地欢唱一些男孩子沿着小路安静地慢跑，而一些女生则坐在湖边成排的树下大声朗读一阵清风吹来，湖面掀起了涟漪真是一个美丽动人而又意气盎然的清晨。