23 地方介绍写作指导-中考英语书面表达（全国版）

地方介绍23相关话题解读与写作指导【话题解读】地点介绍类的写作对象涉及公园、博物馆等具体的场所，也包括城市、国家等对一般性的场所进行介绍，首先要注意安排好介绍顺序空间顺序使用居多，常用的有从外到内，从左到右，由远及近，由高到低，从整体到局部等也可以以参观者的行踪为顺序进行介绍而对于城市、国家等，介绍层面通常包括位置、历史、名胜古迹、今昔变化等不论是哪种类型,最后在结尾处通常都需要作者发表一下个人观点或意见【实例讲解】假如下图是你学校的平面建筑示意图请你根据所给提示，以〃My School”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你学校的建筑布局情况并谈谈你对学校的看法讨人喜欢的favorable.沙漠desert凤景名胜places of interest出彩句型,它有.…的面积It covers an area of它有…的人口It hasa populationof...那些地方的天气更加适宜和舒服The weather in those places is more favorableand comfortable.在澳大利亚的中部，有..…In thecenter of Australia,there is.悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市之一Sydney sone of the biggestcities inAustralia.高分点评本交选取了澳大利亚作为介绍的主体，其中采取了由面到点的叙述手法，将澳大利亚的位置、面积、气候、人文风情一呈现在了我们面前值得提的是，作者的写作语言非常地道，原汁原味，如面积的表达，又如人口的表达”等“coversan area of..“It hasa populationof over10million注意短文中不能出现真实的学校名称和考生姓名;

1..短文开头己给出，不计入总词数2IVIy SchoolThisis amap ofmy school.【分析】该写作任务要求介绍学校的建筑布局，属于地点介绍类的说明文写作前先确定介绍顺序,可以从校门开始，按照从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍谈谈对学校的看法是写作任务中明确要求的，可以表达自己的喜爱之情，也可以表达不满或意见等My SchoolThisis amap ofmy school.Walking into the school gate,you can see abig playgroundin the middleof theschool.Behind itis the teaching building.On theleft side of theplayground,you cansee theoffice building.A stadium is tothe north of it.In thenorthwestcorner is the dining hall.On the right side of the playground,there isthe sciencebuilding.And thelibrary islocated in the northeastcorner.I lovemy school.Its thebest schoolI haveever seen.高分突破:My SchoolThisis amap ofmy school.The school gate facesthe south.Two linesof bigtall treesstandon eachsideofthe gate,welcoming everystudent.Right in front ofthe gateis abigplayground.It is a centerfor fun.Behind theplayground istheteachingbuilding whereIstudy.On theleft sideoftheplayground,you cansee theoffice building.And astadiumistothenorthofit.In thenorthwest cornerstands thedininghall.Now letsturn totherightsideoftheplayground.As you cansee,there aretwo buildings.The sciencebuilding isnear theschoolgateand thelibrary islocated in the northeastcorner.I lovemy school.It isnot onlya placefor learning,but alsoa placefor fun.【高分揭秘】

1.习作按照从前到后、从左到右的顺序依次介绍了学校的建筑布局，结构紧凑，层次合理

2.习作中用了不同的词语来描写位置关系，避免了单调和重复，如in frontof,behind,tothe north,in thenorthwest corner,near theschoolgate等

3.习作不仅介绍了建筑布局，也穿插了一些个性化的、情感化的表达，使习作生动有趣，如welcoming everystudent,a centerfor fun等【素材积累】

1.词汇位置on theright/left,infrontof,behind,at thefoot of,on thetop of,near,next to,close to,inside,outside,across,through存在be,lie,stand,locate特征large,small,huge,deep,long,modern,ancient,popular,attractive

2.句子★I likemy schoolvery muchand I am proudthat Ibelong toit.★My favoritething aboutmy cityisthefact thatit hasso manywonderful parks.★The museumis justlike ahuge bookto tell you thehistory ofChina.★My hometownhas leftmany softand sweetmemories inmy heart.★Its beautyis beyondwords.I reallyhope youcould geta chanceto comeand experienceitfor yourself.相关话题写作模拟练习

（一）每年的六一儿童节都会有很多孩子前往上海迪斯尼乐园游玩假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园上海东部.地钛可达由6t左题公园组成叁加活动•欣赏我演购买礼物•观看烟火不扔垃圾.保持整洁文明游园号生n拟（至少2点）注意

1.词数90左右短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息参考词汇theme n.主题；firework n.烟火Good morning,children!As avolunteer fromShanghai Disneyland,F dlike to say something about the park andtell you how to behave well in it.The parkis worthyour visit.I hopeyou willhave fun.习作范文Good morning,children!As avolunteer fromShanghai Disneyland.Id liketosaysomething about the parkandtellyouhowto behavewell in it.The Disneylandis in the east of Shanghai.You canget thereby underground.Its madeupof sixtheme parks.You canjoin indifferent kinds of activitiesthere,such asenjoyingwonderful musicalsor plays.Also,there relots ofnice presentsin theshopping areaforyou tochoose.At night,you canwatch fireworks.However,its importanttobehavewellin the park.Littering isn，t allowed.You shouldkeeptheparkclean.Remember towait foryour turnanytime.Moreover,its impoliteto shoutloudlyin public.The parkis worthyour visit.I hopeyou willhave fun.

（二）假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸边的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行请用英语给China Daily山东荷泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议

（一）参考词汇destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施

（二）其他要求100字左右，开头和结尾己给出，不计入总字数Dear Editor,rina highschool student.Li Qiang习作范文Dear Editor,r ma highschool student.Im writingto tellyou somethingbad aboutZhaogonghe Park.One day,on myway toschool,I foundthat theroad alongthe bankof ZhaogonghePark wasdestroyedbadly.Some colorbricks disappeared.It issaid thatsome brickswere thrownintothe riverand somewere takenhome byvillagers nearby.The roadhas hada badinfluence onpeoplescoming andgoing.I thinkit shouldbe repairedas soonas possible.We shouldtakemeasure toprotect theroad.It isimportant andnecessary totake goodcare ofthe publicfacilitiesinthepark.I hopeChina Dailycan careaboutthematter andgive ussome adviceon howto protectthepark.Li Qiang相关话题满分作文解析Dear Laura,Thanks foryour letter.Now CHtellyou somethingaboutour schooland ourschoollife.Our schoolis verybig,with over2,500students andabout200teachers.There aremany highbuildings init.On thecampus,youcansee manygreen treesand beautifulflowers.In ourschool,there aremany clubs.Every afternoon,we cantake part in all kindsof activities,such asbasketball,table tennis,and painting.We canread newspapersand booksinthe schoollibrary.And wecan alsogo onlineintheschool computerlabs.Ive beenintheschool formore thantwoyears.I amdeeply attractedby everythingintheschool.Yours,Vera参考译文亲爱的劳拉谢谢你的来信现在我将跟你说说我们的学校和校园生活我们的学校很大，有超过名学生和大约位老师学2500200校里有很多高的建筑物在校园里，你可以看到很多绿树和美丽的花朵在我们的学校，有很多社团每天下午，我们可以参加各种各样的活动，比如说篮球、乒乓球和画面我们可以在学校图书馆里看报纸和书我们还可以在学校的电脑房上网我已经在这个学校超过两年了我被学校里的一切深深地吸引着你的，薇拉亮点词汇建筑物building.校园campus参力口take partin上网go online出彩句型.我要告诉你一些关..…Ill tellyousomethingabout.校园里有很多高的建筑物There aremany buildingsinit.我们可以参加各种各样的活动We cantakepartinallkindsofactivities.…我被…深深地吸引着Iamdeeply attractedby高分点评本文采取动静结合的描述手法，向读者展现了〃我〃的校园的美丽风光以及丰富多彩的校园生活，条理清晰，清楚具体此外，句式、短语的多样运用，也是一大成功之处

（二）AustraliaAustralia lieson thewest ofthe Pacific Ocean.It coversanareaof

7.6million squarekilometers.And ithas apopulationof over10million.Most ofthem liveintheeastofthe countryby thesea,because theweather inthoseplacesismorefavorable andcomfortable.In thecenter ofAustralia,there isa largeareaofdesert,Canberra,the capitalofAustralia,isabeautifulcity.Sydney isone ofthe biggestcities inAustralia.It hasmany placesofinterest.The SydneyOpera Houseis famousallover theworld.If youever visitAustralia,you willbe fascinatedby it.参考译文澳大利亚澳大利亚位于太平洋的西边它有着万平方公里的面积它还有着超过一千万的人口760很多人住在澳大利亚东面的海边，因为那些地方的天（更加适宜和舒服在澳大利亚的中部，有很大面积的沙漠堪培拉，澳大利亚的首都，是一个漂亮的城市悉尼是澳大利亚最大的城市之、它有很多风景名胜悉尼歌剧院就闻名于全世界如果你游览过澳大利亚，你就会被它吸引亮点词汇太平洋PacificOcean覆盖cover。