30 同情写作指导-中考英语书面表达（全国版）

①As thosekidsare in poor condition,they maybe shortof clothes,shoes orbooks.Thus,I planto providethem withsome ofmybooks andclothes.I believethey canlearn moreknowledge fromthe books,and theclothes cankeep themwarm.During mystay there,I willalso playwith themand talkto themto letthem feelhappier.

②Whats more,I wouldliketo takesome photosfor themso thatI cancall onmore peopleto help them onthe InternetIm reallylooking forwardtothe trip.和两个短语用得好

①be inpoor conditionbe shortof

②长短句的交替使用，使得文章的句式较为丰富多变点评本文思路清晰，内容完整，句意连贯，语言规范该生通过仔细审题，把握住了题目的重点内容和关键信息，用较为扎实的语言功底，流畅地将习作内容呈现出来这篇习作的时态运用得当，且文中出现了定的好词好句，比如等，值得借鉴be shortof,inpoorcondition相关话题满分作文必背

（一）题目」...（以“当我看到老人Write at least60words onthe topicWhen Isee anold personfall downin thestreet在街上摔倒，.…为题，写一篇不少于个词的短文，标点符号不占格）60（）Reference wordsUse atleast twoof them:（美德）；a traditional virtue infavor of/against;calm;get alongwith;care for范文Helping othersis atraditionalvirtue.When Isee anold personfall downin thestreet,I willrun towardshimat onceto helphim withouthesitation.First ofII,I willkeep calmand checkwhether heis injuredor not.Then,ifnecessary,I willdial120so thathe canbetaken tothe hospitalimmediately.Besides,I willalso helphim tocall hisfamilymember tocome andaccompany him.I decideto helphim,because I was taughtto helpothers withmy effortssinceIwasa littleboy.When anold personfalls down,he mustbe veryscared andfeel helpless.Therefore,helpinghim issomething Imust do.二题目假设你参加了一个志愿者项目，暑假去偏远地区和小朋友们生活一段时间出发之前，你a remotearea希望得到更多关于项目的信息你列了张表，请确定你最希望了解的个关键问题，然后写-封信给组织者1-2巳请求他的帮助信件格式已给，标点符号不占格，至少个字Mr.Prine60My listThingsI cando withthe childrenWeatherThings Ineed toprepare MedicalcareBasic information ofthe children thereFood范文Dear Mr.Prince,It ismy greathonor tobe amember ofthe volunteerprogram.I willappreciate ita lotif youcan provideme withmoredetailed information.First,I wantto havea clearpicture ofthe basicinformationofthechildrenthere,such astheirhobbies,their ageand theirliving conditions.The moreI knowabout thechildren,the betterI cando.Second,theinformation ofthe weathercondition thereis ofgreat importanceto me,as Iwanttoprepare properclothes toavoidgetting ill.I amlooking forwardto hearingfrom yousoon andI willtry mybest tohelpthechildren.Yours Sincerely,Allen

（三）题目.（根据所给情景,写一封不少于个词的Write a letter withatleast60words accordingtothegiven situation60信，标点符号不占格）Situation:Your friendTom hasbroken hisleg recently.He hasto stayat homein bed for atleast onemonth.He feelsveryupset andworries abouthis studiesa lot.Please writealetterto himto expressyour sympathyand cheerhimup.范文Dear Tom,Im reallysorry tohear thatyou havebroken yourleg.It mustbe verypainful.Now inorder toget wellsoon,youhave tostay inbedforsome time.It mustbe veryboring butyoud bettertake thedoctors advice.I knowyou areworriedabout yourstudies,but takeit easy,l willhelp youwith yourstudies assoon asyou getwell.So youdont havetoworry toomuch.The mostimportant thingfor youis tostay inbed andtry torecover.I believeyou willbe bettersoon!Yours Sincerely,Allen。