33 幸福写作指导-中考英语书面表达（全国版）

幸福33相关话题解读幸福，是-种心理感受，一种满足的心态它可以是父母无微不至的关爱，也可以是假日里悠闲地品茶读书的惬意不同的人对幸福也有着不同的理解此话题的写作内容比较广泛，既可以让学生谈谈什么是幸福，什么让人感到幸福，也可以具体记叙■一个幸福的瞬间，一件让人感到幸福的小事等此话题的写作体裁多为记叙文和说明文时态以现在时和过去时为主相关话题写作示例指导实践案例题目（请以使我快乐”为题，写Write atleast60words aboutthe topicmakes me happy.篇不少于个词的短文）60Questions forreference:

1.hat makesyou happy

2.Why doesit makeyou happy审题这是篇半命题作文想要写好半命题作文，首先要报一个恰当、新颖的感目做米说，半命题作文中所需补充的内容往往是作的中心内容学生在将题目补充完整的同时，其实也确定了写作的素材明确了写作的中心在拟题时，首先耍在选材上认真思考，题目宜〃大题小作〃，即选取一个小的切人点，以便写深写透，写出特点这篇作文的重点在于，要突出题目中所填信息与幸福之间的关系一为什么这件事能让我开心这-点必须在文中有清晰的呈现本文应以一般现在时为主，需避免出现大量过去时的句子，或以较大的篇幅来叙述过去的事件段落结构本文可采用〃总一分总〃的写作结构第一段:文章的总起，抛出主题让我快乐，横线上所填部分，可以是一个爱好、一项运动等第二段:分层叙述，对主题展开说明，尤其要说明横线部分和快乐之间的联系第三段:概括文章内容，首尾呼应核心语汇,给某人带来幸福bring happinessto sbbesatisfied/pleasedwith.・・对・・・•感至U高兴…把快乐…联系起来link happinessto..enable meto dosth.......使我能・・・・受益于….benefit fromsth.值得做.…be worthdoing缓解…的压力relieve thepressure of塑造性格shape onescharacter参考句型.我很乐意做某事It ismy pleasureto dosth那就是我…的原因Thats whyI…not only..butalso...不仅・・・・・而且・・・・.An advantageof itisthat.・・•的一个好处.・・・.被强调部分+句子的其他成分正是..…强调句It is+that+习作1Travelling makesme happyTllike travelling.It makesme happy.During thewinter andsummer holidays,my parentsoften takeme tomanyplaces athome andabroad.I canenjoy a lot ofamazing landscapesand historicalinterests,delicious food,exciting experiencesand soon duringmy journey.Furthermore,travelling isalso aprocess ofdiscovery,which Ienjoyalot.More importantly,travelling canhelp toreduce mystudy pressure,tell mehow bigand beautifultheworld is,and letme knowmore abouthistory andculture.Thats whyit makesme sohappy.注

①这两句话可以合并成travelling makesme happy点评本文围绕〃旅游使我俞快〃这一主题展开写作，条理分明，结构合理，甸式多样文中从几个层面阐述了旅游给作者带来的愉悦，内容充实，表达清晰，总的来说是一篇佳作个别语句可以合并为-句，比如第

一、第二句话，可以改成显得更为简洁travelling makesme happy,习作2Reading makesme happyl*ve formedthe habitof readingbooks sinceI was a littlegirl Forme.2530reading hasbeen anenduring pleasure,in my life.

①I enjoythe companyof themagic worldin HarryPotter,of evilcriminals andthrilling casesin SherlockHolmes,of thousandsof interestingpeople I would havenever metin reallife.Reading notonly providesme withknowledge,but alsoenables meto understandthe worldaround me.It isan educationin aclassroomthat hasno walls.It isreading thatalways bringsme funand joy.注

①这句话体现了学生的写作功底点评:本文清晰明了地阐述了〃阅读使我愉快〃的理由文章的时态、语态以及人称的使用都非常娴熟，其中这句句子的表述，不仅增加了说服力,也体现了作者很强“I enjoythe companyof themagic world..in reallife”的语言表达能力文章以一句强调句收尾，既增添了文采，也起到了点题的作用相关话题满分作文必背题目.（以〃我的快乐秘诀〃为题，写一篇不少于个Write atleast60words on the topicMySecrets ofHappiness60词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分短文开头已给，所给部分不计人字数）Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness,so doI.Outline forreference:

1.Tell yoursecrets of happiness.

2.Give thesupporting details.优秀范文My secretsof happinessEveryonehashisorherownsecretofhappiness,so doI.One of my secretofhappinessto dosports regularly.Iusually doyoga withmy sisteron Saturdaymorning.1enjoy yogavery muchand atthe sametime,I canrelax myselfandbecome healthier.Another secreteis thatI make an everydaylist ofall thethings andpeople amthankful to,so thatI can be contentwithwhat Ialready have.1would enjoymyliferather thancomplain abouteverything Theseare mysecrets ofhappiness,and Ihope itcanbehelpful toothers.

（三）题目Write apassage onA happymemory inmy juniorhigh schoolin atleast60words accordingto thegiven.（似〃我初中时期的一次快乐的回忆〃为题，写不少于个词的文章）situation60（以下短语仅供参考）Phrases forreferencea springoutinga classmeetinga partytakepart inplaywithbe happy优秀范文A happymemory inmy juniorhigh schoolThehappy memoriesI havehad inmy juniorhigh schoolare countless.The mostimpressive oneis thecelebrationofmyfourteenth birthday.Our schoolheld aparty ina hallfor thestudents ofour grade.On thatday,Isang anddanced withmy classmatesonthestage.Our performancewasabig success,which mademehappy andexcited.After that,we hadabigdinner togetherin theschool canteen.The foodwas deliciousand weliked itverymuch.I hada goodtime.It wasreally ahappyandunforgettable memoryfor me.。