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我的爱好My hobby英语作文请以My hobby为题写一篇英语作文,供英语课上交流
1.What i s your hobby
2.When andhow di dyou becomei nterestedi nth i s hobby
3.Why doyou enjoyyour hobby
4.How doesyourhobbyi nfIuenceyou写作要求
1.根据所提供的问题,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范(词数80左右)My hobbyEveryonehas hisown hobby,i tmay givehim alot ofhapp i ness.My hobbyisread i ng.Two yearsago,I didntIi keread i ng verymuch.I hadpIenty of time,but Ispent Iotsof timeon playingwith computers.When Iwas veryyoung,I didntth ink read i ngbook wasi nterest i ng,because I found nothing morei nteresting than the computer games.I1ve changednow.I enjoyread ing noveIs,because there1re Iotsof interestingstor ies.When Iam in troubIe,reading can make mecaImdown.When Iam verytired,i tcan make me comfortabIe.When Iam angrywithsometh ing,it aI socanmakeme happyaga in.Read ing keepsmeina goodmood andit1s goodfor myheaI th.Enjoy yourhobby,enjoyyour Iife.试题分析这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文要求介绍你的爱好是什么,什么时间和怎样产生这一爱好的,为什么你喜欢你的爱好,你的爱好怎样影响了你【亮点说明】这篇短文条理清晰语句通顺不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实.如but Ispent Iotsoftimeon playingwithcomputers,When Iwas veryyoug becauseIfoundnoth ing morei nterestingthanthecomputergames,makemecalm down.等,使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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