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读后续写高分必备结构
一、动作链
1.动作的逻辑主语一致时动作由同一个人发出动作三连结构主语+谓语A,谓语B and谓语C非谓语结构主要动作作谓语,次要动作作非谓语多个动作同时且主动发生主+谓,doing sth.或doing sth.,主+谓老人坐在夕阳下+看报纸+听广播The oldman satunder thesunset,reading thenewspaperandlistening tothe radio.多个动作有先后关系先发生的动作非谓语用完成态Having donesth,主+谓排了很久队+他被告知票卖完了Having queuedfor3hours,he wastold that the tickethad beensold out.次要动作与主语为被动关系Done sth.,主+谓孩子们被感动+哭了Deeply movedby thestory,the childrenbegan tocry.
2.独立主格结构动作由不同主语发出时主语1+非谓语次要动作,主语2+谓语主要动作
二、描写人物的情绪
1.运用介词短语:介词with/without,in,to,out of+表示心情情绪的名词“with/without+宾语”表示“伴随着/有着……”或者没有……”1“Stop!”He shoutedwith anger=angrily.2Sorry.I haveno cash.I saidwith embarrassment=embarrassedly.“To ones+名词”表示“让某人……的是”1To ourgreat relief让我们如释重负的是2To herastonishment让她吃惊的是In+名词,表示“……地”1In astonishment/surprise=astonishedly/surprisedly,they kepttheir eyesopento readthe results.2In delight=delightedly高兴士也,they enteredthe room,singing anddancing.
2.表示情绪的adj作状语adj.and adj.并列情绪形容词,主+谓Speechlessand happy,she heldthe twinstightly intoher arms,with tearswelling upinher eyes.[adj.and adj.并列情绪形容词,主+谓,with复合结构】Excited andpleased,the boysrushed tothe lake,laughing anddancing.[adj.and adj.并列情绪形容词,主+谓,非谓语A andB]
三、人物对话
(一)掌握不同的效果的表示“说”的动词
(二)掌握不同的修饰“说”的状态
1.加人物描述(语言,标签词,描述定语从句/同位语/非谓语/.)・・a.I don t thinkthe soldierslike us,“said Samuel,who lookedas ifhe wasaboutto cry.b.”He turnedme outof theroom thismorning,〃said John,stamping hisfoot withexcitement.“今天早上他把我赶出了房间,”约翰激动得跺着脚说
2.加语气:in a/an+形容词+tonn即“用一种...的语气”“Iwould loveto,“said Emily,in apleasant tone.“我很乐意这样做J艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说
3.加嗓音in a/an+形容词+voice即用一种的声音”・・・“Ididn tmean to,she murmuredin alow voice.“我不是故意的,”她低声说
4.加情感(介词短语with/in+情感名词;表情感的adj.;非谓语动作链)a.I..I,.dontthink Im rightfor thepart,“I repliedwith embarrassment.・“我...我认为我不适合这个角色J我尴尬地回答・・b.I didntget anideal scorein themath exam,“said Tom,disappointed.“我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数,”汤姆失望地说
5.加副词uIwill neverdo that again,”I answeredfirmly.我再也不会那样做了,”我坚定地回答
四、润色句子
1.写好简单句(主谓宾、主系表)
2.运用名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句)和it(形主、形宾)主语从句What+情绪类动词+sb+was+名词/doing/that从句[What主语从句描述情绪,that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因】a.让我高兴的是放学之后和好友们一起打篮球What delightedme was playing basketball with my friends after school.b.让我惊讶的是Tom居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名What surprisedme was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.c.让Jane难过的是是时候和他们告别了What saddenedJane was that it was time to say goodbye to them.What+made+sb+情绪类形容词+was+名词/doing/that从句d.What mademe delightedwasplayingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.e.What mademe surprisedwasthatTomwonthefirstprizein theEnglishSpeechContest.f.What mademe heartbrokenwasthatitwastimetosaygoodbyetothem.定语从句Sb,who wasa adj身份,did sth
3.加修饰定语(adj./介短/描述性n./定从/非谓语)状语(adv./介短/状从)连接性副词however、nevertheless^therefore thusmoreover、furthermore^0besides等状语从句时间、地点、原因、条件、目的、结果、让步、方式和比较等从句补语(动宾宾补感官动词/使役动词+宾语+宾补(adj./介短/描述性n./非谓语)同位语(名词或从句)
五、高级句式
(一)独立主格主语1+谓语(主要动作),主语2(名词/代词)+adj/adv/介短/非谓语With/Without复合结构With/Without+宾语+宾补(adj/adv/介短/非谓语)
(二)无灵主语
1.情感状态类名词+谓语(a burst/wave/surge/rush/sense/feelingof+)表情感状态的名词十动词+sb,表“某人感到…”或“一阵/一种…向某人袭来”
2.身体部位/音容笑类名词+谓语【常见的部位外貌类名词】Face;laughter;smile;tear;words说的话等【常见的谓语动词】light up,brighten照亮linger继续存留well up涌出flash闪烁crumple弄皱fill...with“用……装满”等a.Her eyescloud overwith tears.b.My fingersshook withanger.c.A(bright,sweet)voice interruptedus,”一个(清亮甜美)的声音打断了我们,d.My heartwas thumping/pounding withexcitement.我激动得心砰砰跳
3.时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语【常见的时间、地点类名词】silence,hush安静沉默dusk黄昏dawn黎明破晓morningafternoonnight等【常见的谓语动词】see看见witness见证find发现fall降临进入等时间/地点witnessed/saw/found sbs+名词/doing stha.Beijing haswitnessed greatchanges inrecent years,b.Dusk foundthe littlegirlcrying inthe street.c.A suddensilence fell.突然一片鸦雀无声d.My birthdayfalls ona Mondaythis year.
4.自然现象类名词+谓语【常见的自然现象类名词】Sun;sunshine;moon;moonlight;fog雾,mist薄雾;rainearthquake地震等【常见的谓语动词】blanket覆盖;come;bring;prevent妨碍阻止;strike打击侵袭;threaten威胁/即将来临等a.In thesevere winter,another snowstormattacked thewhole world.b.A heavyrain visitedthe city.这个城市刚下过一场大雨c.An earthquakecomes likea thiefinthenight,without warning,d.The rainpreventedme fromcoming.因为下雨,我不能来
(四)倒装部分倒装
1.Never否定放句首
2.Only+状语(介词短语/副词/状语从句),位于句首
3.Hardly冈U冈had sb.heard/seen sthwhen sbdid sth某人刚听到/看到某事,就做了某事
4.Not only放句首(not only...but also不仅.....而且)完全倒装
1.表示时间、地点、方位的状语置于句首时
2.Adj作表语放句首So/Such+adj./n.was/were sbthat sbdid sth(so/such...that:如此以至于)・・・adj./n.+as/though+主谓,主+谓(as/though引导让步倒装句:表语或状语放句首)1。
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