9分烤鸭-雅思写作G类作文解析及范文（汇编）

9分烤鸭G雅思写作2018版类写作解题方法及范文G Taskl主体段落2将题目要求及设定的情景进行扩展和具体化回答并扩展下列问题1What isthe nameof yourteacher2What course/subject doeshe/she teach3Whydo youenjoy thissubject4Why areyou goingback to your country根据你的回答，完成段落；结尾段31表达自己的期望2结束语根据你的回答，完成段落Step3检查文章参考范文Dear MrBrown,I have been takingyour grammarcourse atNew Englishfor thepast monthand havebeenextremely happywith it.I am writing this letter to express mysincere gratitudeto you.Grammar isa particularlydifficult topicto getstudents interestedin,in myopinion,yetyou manageit withease.I especiallyenjoy thegrammar games.I thinkmost of thestudents likethis partof yourclasses most.Unfortunately,I willnot be able tocomplete the course,which I understand willcontinuefor anotherfortnight.I havebeen offereda verygood jobin myhome country.It isreally agreatopportunity forme,so Ifeel that I shouldtake it.The jobis thatof Headof IT,aposition I havebeentrying toget for a verylong time.If I do nottake thisjob now,there isnoknowing howlong itwill bebefore asimilar chancepresents itself.Thank youfor yourexcellent classes.Yours sincerely,William CranWordcount:175本节要点抱怨信道歉•Complaint信咨询信息•Apology信感谢信•Information•Thanks第二节书信作文分类范文•Request/Advice请求/建议抱怨信/投诉信

1.Complaint LetterYou should spend about20minutes onthis task.Write to your travelagency andmake acomplaint regarding a holidayyou bookedthroughthem.State what the problemswere andsuggest anappropriate solution.Write at least150words.Model answer:Dear Sir/Madam,I recentlywent onholiday toQingdao with my familyand webooked arental carandaccommodation throughyour company.We pickedup thecar inBeijing at

10.AM;however,we foundthat thecar hadnot beencleanedafter itsprevious use.Unfortunately,we wereleft nosufficient timeto waitwhile itwascleaned becausewe wouldhave sixhours ofdriving beforereaching ourhotel inQingdao.The firsthotel wasof anacceptable standard,while the second lefta lotto bedesired,whichdid notprovide thebreakfast asexpected andelevators in the hotelwere stoppedformaintenance.Ever worse,it tookus ten-minute driveto thebeach ratherthan aone hundredmeterswalk as we hadbeen toldby youragent.Our bookingincluded entryto threelocal sceneryspots butthe staffsthere didnot recognizethetickets that we heldand wewere forcedto payfor ourentry.We areextremely disappointedwith the service wereceived andrequest compensationforthe inconvenienceand additionalcosts incurred.I haveenclosed receiptsfor breakfastsand invoicesof thetickets.I amlooking forward toyour fullcompensation aswell asyour earliestreply.Your faithfully,Steven BrookWord Count212参考译文亲爱的先生/女士最近我和家人去青岛度假，我们通过你们的公司预订了租车和住宿服务我们早上10点在北京领取了租车，但是却发现租车在上次使用过后并未进行过清洁可惜的是，我们没时间等到它清洁干净再使用，因为我们将有6个小时的车程前往青岛的旅馆第一家旅馆符合要求，而第二家旅馆却差强人意，不仅没按照预定的提供早餐，而且旅馆的电梯也因为维修而停止使用更糟糕的是，该旅馆到海边的距离是10分钟的车程，而并非你们的代理员所说的100米的步程我们的预定行程包括三个观光景点，然而当地的工作人员并不接受我们持有的门票，以至于我们不得不付现金进入我们对于这次的服务十分失望，并要求对我们所经受的不便和额外花费进行赔偿本连同信件一起的包括了早餐的收据以及门票的发票我希望获得全额的赔偿以及你们的尽快回复此致Steven Brook道歉信

2.Apology LetterYou should spend about20minutes onthis task.You had a partyat your house lastweekend.Unfortunatelyy someof yourneighbourswere disturbedby the noise.Write a letter ofapology.Write at least150words.Model answer:Dear Neighbors,As youknow,I had a partywith my friends lastSaturday nightand I am terriblysorry ifwedisturbed youby keepingthe musictoo loud.We hireda bandand theywere doingsuch agoodjob thatmade usso indulgedin singingand dancingwithout anynotice of the noiseitmade.The partywent onmuch laterthan we had expected,otherwise,I wouldprobably havewarnedyou in advance andinvited you to cometoo!We werecelebrating mybirthday andmorepeople showedup thanour expectation.It wasvery unfortunatethat thepolice officercame to take awayour CDplayer.Until then,we realizedthatwe had madea hugemistake todisrupt yourpeaceful weekendnight.I apologize for theinconvenience to you and I assureyou thatwe wonthold anymoreparties likethis in the nearfuture.Yours sincerely,WordCount155参考译文亲爱的邻居:如你所知，我上周六晚上和朋友在家搞了一次聚会，如果我们的音乐太大声有打扰到你们的话，我在此深表歉意我们邀请了一支乐队，他们的演奏十分出色，以至于我们都沉浸在歌舞之中，而忽略了所造成的噪音聚会比我们想象中结束得更晚，否则，我一定会提前通知你们，并邀请你们一起参加！我们是在庆祝我的生日，来得人数也超过我们的预期很遗憾后来警察到我们家里搬走了播放机直到那时，我们才意识到自己犯CD下了多么严重的错误，打扰了你们平静的周末夜晚我诚恳的为我们所引起的不便道歉，并保证将来不会再有类似的聚会发生此致咨询信息信

3.Information LetterYou should spend about20minutes onthis task.You mustwrite toan Englishspeaking collegeregardingacourse youintend to do.You need to askquestions about thecourseand course fees.You willbe stayingat thecollegehostel-confirm thefee quotestoyouis correct.Write atleast150words.Model answer:Dear Sir/Madam,I amexpecting to start atBrooklyn Collegein nextautumn.Iunderstandthat thecourseinformation bookletis notyet readyfor distribution;however I wonder if you couldanswersome questionsthat I have atthis time.I haveheard thatevery studentmajoring inEnglish andEducation isrequired tofinish4papers for the firstyear of study.I wonderwhat I should preparefor thepapers dedicatedtothese subjectsand willI be able tolearn someother subjectsat the same timeInaddition,could youinform meof thecoursefeesIdohave ascholarship butdont intendtocover mytuition andaccommodation feesby it.Whaf smore,I amenrolled tostay atBrooklynCollege Hostel.The costper weekhas beenquoted at$

200.

00.Could youpossiblyconfirm thisinformationThank youfor takingthe timeto answerthese questions.I reallyappreciate yourhelp!Yours faithfully,参考译文亲爱的先生/女士:我正计划明年秋季进入布鲁克林学院我明白，或许课程信息手册现在还未开始发放；但是我想咨询一些我遇到的问题我听说每位主修英语和教育的学生在第一年需要完成4篇论文我想知道，我应该为这些科目的论文做哪些准备，以及我是否还能同时选修其他科目？此外，您能否告诉我课程的相应费用？我获得了奖学金，但我并未打算使用奖学金来支付我的学费和住宿费用止匕外，我被获准住在布鲁克林学院宿舍费用据说是每周200美元您能确认一下这个信息是否属实吗？谢谢您花时间回答我的问题非常感谢您的帮助！此致感谢信

4.Thanks LetterYou should spend about20minutes onthis task.You area studentwho hasreturned to your home country.Write athank-you letter toyour homestayfamily statingwhat youparticularly enjoyedabout yourstay.Write atleast150words.Model answer:Dear Mr.and Mrs.Kruger,I would like to express mygratitude for your hospitalityduring mystay with you and yourfamily.I amdeeply impressedwith thebeauty ofSydney and the enthusiasmsof theSydneypeople whichmake mefeel solucky tohave visitedso manyplaces ofinterest andmade quiteafew friendswhile I was there.I reallymiss youand yourchildren,Libby andTom.To spendthe wholeday withthem mademefeel athome andhelped mea lotwithmyspoken English.Also,I cannotforget yourcuisine andwarm conversationwith you.After Igot back to China,Icould nothelp sharingthe storiesabout mylife inSydney withmy parentsand friends.I wouldlove tovisit youinayear ortwo andhope tosee youall then.Wish youall thebest!Yours forever,Jimmy Brown参考译文亲爱的克鲁格夫妇,我衷心的感谢你们在我借宿期间表现的热情好客悉尼的美景和热情的人们给我留下了深刻的印象，能在短时间内参观众多的景点并结交到一些朋友，我觉得非常幸运我非常想念你们和你们的孩子们，Libby和Tom和他们相处让我拥有了家的感觉，也对我的口语有了很大帮助此外，我也对你们的美食和热情的交谈难以忘怀在我回到中国之后，我禁不住想把我在悉尼的生活和经历与家人和朋友分享我希望在近一两年内，还能再次拜访你们，与你们再次相会祝你们一切顺利！你们的，Jimmy Brown请求/建议

5.Request/AdviceYou shouldspend about20minutes onthis task.You aretrying tochange anotheruniversity.Write andrequest atransfer.Write atleast150words.Model answer:Dear Sir/Madam,I amcurrently a student atWoodbridge Universitybut dueto changingsituations withmyfamily,we willbe soonmoving toMadison.Is itpossible totransfer mycurrent paperstoMadison UniversityI have completedthe firsttwo yearsof myEnglish Literaturedegree and have oneyearremaining.I need to continuewith sixstage twopapers inEnglish andEducation andtake uptwonew stageone papers.Iwonderthe duedate forenrollment andcould youpossibly sendme theenrollmentdocumentation andmail backor doI needto enrollin personAlso,are thecourse requirementsin Madisonthesameas thosein Woodbridgeor are thereother requirementsthatIneedtomeetI would like tostart mynew courseofstudynext yearin Madison,so anyuseful informationwouldbe mostappreciated.Thank youfor yourhelp!Yours Sincerely,XXX第一节G类书信作文简介General Training（移民类）的Task1考试形式为书信作文通常要求考生就某一问题写信来咨询信息或者解释说明情况，主要考查考生实际生活中的语言交际能力按照书信的目的和功能可以把G类Task1分为五类:•Complaint抱怨信道歉•Apology信咨询信息•Information信感谢信•Thanks•Request/Advice请求/建议

一、书信作文介绍按照书信的对象可以把书信作文分为两大类一类是给个人写信，信件主要是日常个人交流、邀请、建议、感谢等，简称私人书信；另一类是给机构（包括其负责人）写信，信件主要是问询、申请求职、建议推荐、抱怨、感谢等，简称机构书信私人书信一般比较随意，可以使用半正式或非正式的语言；而机构书信会比较正式一些Sample1You shouldspend about20minutes onthis task.You arestudying asecond languagein anothercountry.You needto writea letter to theteacherand tellhim/her thatyou cannotfinish thecourse becauseyou needto goback toyourhomecountry.In yourletter,•thank theteacher•say howyou enjoyedthe subject•explain whyyou needto goback to your countryWrite atleast150words.•从功能上看，此书信为感谢信；写信的对象为自己的老师，需要注意语气和措辞应符合自己的学生身份参考译文亲爱的先生/女士:我正计划明年秋季进入布鲁克林学院我明白，或许课程信息手册现在还未开始发放；但是我想咨询一些我遇到的问题我听说每位主修英语和教育的学生在第一年需要完成4篇论文我想知道，我应该为这些科目的论文做哪些准备，以及我是否还能同时选修其他科目？此外，您能否告诉我课程的相应费用？我获得了奖学金，但我并未打算使用奖学金来支付我的学费和住宿费用此外，我被获准住在布鲁克林学院宿舍费用据说是每周200美元您能确认一下这个信息是否属实吗？谢谢您花时间回答我的问题非常感谢您的帮助！真诚地，XXX第三节Taskl模考测试综合练习仔细阅读题目，完成作文You shouldspend about20minutes onthis task.There are plans tomake your local airportbigger andincrease the number of flights.You livenear theairport.Writea letter toyourlocalcouncil.In yourletter•Say whereyou live;•Describe theproblem;•Say whyyou donot wantthe developmentto take place;Write atleast150words.【参考范文】Dear Siror Madam,I havejust readin thelocal newspaper,The EveningTimes,that thereareplansto expand the localairporthere inNanyuan andto increasethenumberofflightsto andfrom it.I liveon RiversideRoad,which isvery closeto theairport andwouldlike totake this opportunity toexpress my dismay at theseplans.There aretwo mainproblems withthe proposedexpansion.First,there willbealot morenoise fromarrivingand departingaircrafts.Second,there willbeamassive surgein theamount oftraffic usingthenearby roads.Much ofthis trafficwill consistof heavygoods vehiclesthat arenot suitedto theroadshere.The newspaperarticle saidthat oneof theaims ofdeveloping theairport isto provideemployment inthelocality,but thisis clearlynot requiredaswealready havefull employmenthere.I sincerelyhope thatyou willtake intoconsideration theenormous problemsthat thisdevelopment willcausefor localresidents andnot allowit totakeplace.Yours faithfully,David Wang9分烤鸭（J）雅思写作勾仿版类写作必备功能句G寒喧问候1How haveyou beendoing thesedays2I have to saysorry fornot writing toyoufor thislong time3Thank youfor yourletter.4Thank youfor yourrecent letter.I hopeeverything isgoing wellwith yougirlfriend.andyour5Its beena long time sinceI wrotetoyoulast timein May.6I hopewell meetsoon!7Hope everythingsgoing wellwith you.引入话题1About twoweeks ago,I receivedaletterfrom youinforming methat...2I havejust readinthelocal newspaper,The EveningTimes,that...3I amwriting toyou to...4Ive gotbig news to tell you5By theway,I haveanother pieceof bignewsto tell you,that is,抱怨问题1I recentlybought apair oftrousers at your shop.Unfortunately,..2I wouldlike totake this opportunity toexpress mydismayat...3I amwriting totell/inform youthat...has stoppedworfeng/functioning4Ihaveenclosed theoriginal receiptand kepta copyfor myself.道歉1I amsorry tohavetotellyouthat...2Unfortunately,I willnot beable tocomplete thecourse.上旦〜--〜〜〜IL且且且J-I〜且〜匕，且--..感谢与期望1Thank youonce againfor...2Ihavebeen takingyour grammarcourse atNew Englishforthepast monthandhavebeenextremely happywith it.3It isforyourwarm hospitalityand comprehensiveguide thatIve enjoyeda mostwonderful journey,without which,Ishouldsay,it wouldnever havebeen possible.4Its sokind andconsiderate ofyou to...5I look forward to...6I willbe reallyappreciating yourkindness ifyou...7Thank youin advancefor dealingwith thisproblem.8I sincerelyhope thatyou willtake intoconsideration theenormous problems求职咨询st1I noticedinthe21March editionofBeijing Today*that yourcompany iscurrently lookingfor tourguidesand I wouldliketo apply.2I amavailable forinterview andlookforward to hearing from you soon.3What opportunitiesfor promotionaretherewithin yourcompany4From myenclosed CV,you cansee thatIhavethree yearsworking experiencein thisline ofwork5If you needto contact me,please doso bytelephone.My mobilenumber isxxx.6Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoask a few questionsabout thejob.7I amwritingtoask forsome informationabout/details of...给与帮助或邀请1You mentionedthat hewas planningtodoa littletraveling beforegoing theretostarthis studies.Perhaps Icould takethisopportunityto invitehim herefor ashort visit.2So writetotellme about your planor schedule,and letme knowifyouhave anyquestions ordifficulties.3Dont hesitatetocontactme..Sample2Youshouldspendabout20minutes onthis task.You andyour friendshad adinner ina restaurant a few days ago.The service at the restaurantwas terribleand the food wasbad andoverpriced.Write to the managerof the restaurant andexplain theseproblems.Ask themanger todosomething about the situation.Write atleast150words.•从功能上看，此书信为抱怨信；写信对象为餐馆经理，需要注意语气和措辞应有理有利，不宜过于极端

二、书信作文组织格式

1.书信作文的基本结构introduction称呼语写信人自我介绍写信目的将题目设定的大概情节general situation细节化，main body完成题目提出的所有要求conclusion表达自己的期望，结束语

2.书信作文的基本用语:

1.Introduction1-1称呼语:不知对方的姓名性别，敬称Dear Siror Madam,Dear Sir,知道对方的性别，敬称Dear Madam,Dear Mr.Smith,较为正式Dear Mrs.Smith,Dear Miss使用对方的姓氏family name，敬称Smith,Dear Ms.Lee,Dear Michael,直接使用对方名字given name,用于非正式亲密好友Dear Sue,1-2写信人自我介绍:较为正式根据题目情用I amastudentof yourcollege.My nameis________・I amstudying_________.进行细化I wasa guestof your restaurant onthesecondof May.Iwasa customerat yoursupermarket....A...非正式用于亲密好友Hi,how areyou Hello,I hopeeverything isgoing wellwithyou.1-3写信目的:apologizefor+名词/动I amwritingdamaging yourhouse,the damageof yourhouse.名this letter to词用于道歉thank youfor+名词/动inviting metoyourbirthday party,invitation toyour名birthday party.词用于感谢inquire about+名词/动名renting yourapartment,airfares toLondon.词用于咨询信息requestask you to+动词fix theair-conditioner inyourhouse,stop playingthe用于请求piano atnight.report that+从句my carhas beenstolen.advise youabout+名词/I amwriting thisletter toadvise youaboutyourvisit动名词to Beijingthis weekend.advise youto+动词用于I amwriting thislettertoadvise youto payyour rentcomplain about+名词/I amwriting thislettertocomplainaboutthe service动名at yourhotel.express myconcern about+I amwriting thislettertoexpressmyconcern about名词/动名词thenoisefrom yourfactory.express myI amwriting thislettertoexpressmy dissatisfactionwiththe foodyourrestaurantserved.dissatisfaction with+名词/动名词

2.Main body主体段落的写作用语根据书信的不同类型有所差别，请参考本章第二节五大题型分类范文

3.ConclusionI lookforward toyour prompt reply.I lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon/urgently/as soonas possible.表达期望Yours faithfully,正式Yours sincerely,结束语Best wishes,非正式Best regards,

三、书信作文解题方法

1.书信作文写作步骤书信作文正确的写作步骤如下:Step1读懂题目，明确题目要求Step2将题中情景进行具体化，按照书信基本结构与作文章Step3检查文章

2.实战例题Youshouldspendabout20minutes onthis task.You andyour friendshadadinner ina restaurant a few days ago.The service at therestaurantwas terribleand the food wasbad andoverpriced.Write tothe managerof therestaurant andexplain theseproblems.Ask themanger todosomething aboutthe situation.Write atleast150words.例题解析Stepl读懂题目，明确题目要求请在原题中标注下列信息:写信对象餐馆经理1题中要求2a经理对问题作出解释，具体问题为•terrible service•bad food•overpriced foodb要求经理采取一些措施题中场景3“你”和你的朋友去餐馆吃饭，对其不满，写信进行投诉关键信息Youshouldspendabout20minutes onthis task.You andyour friendshadadinner ina restaurantafewdays ago.The serviceattherestaurantwas terribleand thefood wasbad andoverpriced.Write tothe manageroftherestaurant andexplain theseproblems.Ask themanger todosomething aboutthe situation.Write atleast150words.Step2按照书信基本结构写作文章1开头段1称呼对象为the manageroftherestaurant,所以称呼应该为Dear Sir/Madam,2写信人自我介绍几天前在此餐馆吃饭的顾客；3写信目的餐馆的服务和食物有问题，进行投诉参考段落Dear Siror Madam,My friendand Iwere customersat yourrestaurantafewdaysago.I amwriting thisletter tocomplainaboutthe services andfood.2主体段落将题目要求及设定的情景进行扩展和具体化例如1The serviceis terrible.比如服务员态度差，或上菜速度太慢；2The foodis bad.比如饭菜fried fish变质，朋友吃了呕吐；3The foodis overpriced.比如其他餐馆同样的菜肴可能只需要25元,但是在你们餐厅我付了两倍的价格参考段落Firstly,theservicewas differentfrom ourexpectation.We hadto waitfor along timefor ourfood.So,wehadto leavetherestaurantwithout finishingour meal.Secondly,thefoodwas poor.The maindish,a friedfish,was overcookedandthesalad was notfresh atall.Furthermore,my friendsand Isuffered frombad stomachachesthe nextday.Lastly,the pricewas notsuitable forthe dishesand service.I thinkI canhave thesame,if notbetter,food and serviceathalf the price atanother restaurant.

（3）结尾段1）表达自己的期望比如针对刚才的投诉情况，要求退还餐费，请尽快答复2）结束语参考段落Therefore,I askyoutorefund thecost forour meal.Iam enclosing the bills.I lookforwardtoyour promptreply.Yours sincerely,M.Jackson完整范文Dear Siror Madam,My friendand Iwere customersatyourrestaurantafewdaysago.Iamwritingthisletter tocomplainabouttheservice andfood.Firstly,theservicewas differentfrom ourexpectation.We hadto waitforalongtimefor ourfood.So,wehadto leavetherestaurantwithout finishingour meaLSecondly,thefoodwas poor.The maindish,a friedfish,was overcookedandthesalad wasnotfresh atall.Furthermore,myfriendsand Isuffered frombad stomachachesthe nextday.Lastly,thepricewasnotsuitable forthe dishesandservice.I thinkI canhave thesame,if notbetter,food andserviceathalf theprice atanother restaurant.Therefore,I askyoutorefund thecost forour mealandIamenclosingthebills.I lookforwardtoyourpromptreply.Yours sincerely,M.Jackson

2.练习:Youshouldspendabout20minutes onthis task.You arestudying asecond languagein anothercountry.You needto writealettertotheteacherand tellhim/her thatyou cannotfinish thecourse becauseyou needto goback toyour homecountry.In yourletter,•thank theteacher•say howyou enjoyedthe subject•explain whyyouneedto gobacktoyour countryWriteatleast150words.Stepl读懂题目，明确题目要求请仔细阅读原题，回答下列问题（）写信对象_________________________1（）题中要求2（）题目情景3第一节,写信目的为o Step2按照书信基本结构写作文章（）开头段11）称呼对象为,所以称呼应该为2）写信人自我介绍3）写信目的根据你的回答，完成段落;。