2024届高考英语一轮复习读后续写脱险类续写讲义

读后续写专题脱险类（讲义）1读后续写中会遇到描写森林迷路、地震、水灾、火灾等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成一定威胁的情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型在近年高考真题中，如2023年浙江卷1月蜂鸟脱困；2020年浙江卷1月遇到北极熊；2018年浙江卷6月森林遇险如何续写好此类文章呢？清代袁枚《随园诗话》中说过，“文似看山不喜平”，就提出过写文章好比观赏山峰那样，不喜欢平坦，喜欢起伏而读后续写中，情节的跌宕起伏就是一种极好的提升文章整体水平的手法这种转折即由“负变正；或由“正,，变“负”最终体现正能量的结局,就是由“正”变“负”【写作步骤】一恶劣环境来铺垫

1.The waterwas deepand runningfast from a bigrainstorm thenight before.前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急

2.Thewatertwistedandturned him,scrapinghimagainsttherocksashewascarriedalong.Water gushedinto hismouth andup hisnose.水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子

3.Whats worse,he didnthave anyfood orwater withhim,let alonehis cellphone orothersupplies.更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品

4.The skyis overcast,darkened withgloomy clouds.天空阴沉，乌云密布

5.The icywind startedhowling,stinging myface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸

6.The windwas howlingand thewaves smackedrepeatedly againsther face.风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸

7.But then,as Ilooked inthe distance,I discovereda seriesof threeor fourbig wavesheadingtowards theshore.但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸

8.It swayedviolently in a strongwind.Its roadwaywas damagedby vehicles.Its accesswasblocked bymany people.它在强风中剧烈摇晃车辆损坏了道路许多人堵住了通道

9.The angrywaves crashedagainst theside of the boat,with watersplashing hereandthere.愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅二心理感受来烘托

1.An ominousthought crossedhis mind:Im goingto dieup here.一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海我要死在这了

2.Looking at the vastsea,I felta senseof fearsurging throughmy wholebody.看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身

3.Salt stingingmy eyes,I couldhardly tellhow longI couldhold on.盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久

4.Grief comesin waves.悲伤如潮水一般涌来

5.With apounding heartand cold,moist palms,I feltfaint.最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心

6.Afraid andmerely desperate,she rushedtowards him.她害怕而绝望，向他冲去三外貌神态来烘托

1.Hearing thebad news,Mary frozewith shock,as ifrooted on the ground.听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上Z.Tears blurredher eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼

3.1sobbed bitterly,tasting thesalt fromthe tearsthat streameddown myface.我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道

4.She calmeddownto keepthe rhymeof breathingso thatshe couldbreathe evenly.她平静下来，保持呼吸的韵律，以便能够均匀地呼吸

5.1glanced backover myshoulder to make surethat noone wasfollowing me.我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我四谋篇布局有起伏

1.Ultimately,we wereback,safe andsound.最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙

2.We jumpedinto thewarm vehicleand theforester droveus to the rangerstation,where weweregiven clothesand wereable tocall ourparents.我们跳上了温暖的车，森林管理员开车把我们送到护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并可以打电话给我们的父母

1.（2020年浙江卷6月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成•个完整的故事One fall,my wifeEHiand Ihad asinglegoal:to photographpolar bears.Wewere stayingata researchcamp outside“the polarbear capitalof theworld^-the townof Churchillin Manitoba,Canada.Taking picturesof polarbears isamazing butalso dangerous.Polar bears-like allwildanimals shouldbe photographedfromasafe distance.When Imface toface witha polarbear,Ilike itto bethrough acamera witha telephotolens.But sometimes,that iseasier saidthan done.This wasone ofthose limes.As Elli andIcooked dinner,a youngmale polarbear whowas playinginanearby lakesniffed,and smelledour garlic bread.The hungrybearfollowed hisnosetoour camp,whichwas surroundedbyahigh wirefence.He pulledand bitthe wire.He stoodon hisback legsand pushedatthewooden fenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactions wcknew.Wcyelled atthe bear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Not thispolarbearthough-he justkept tryingto teardown the fence withhis massivepaws（爪子）.I radioedthe campmanager forhelp.He toldmea helicopterwasonits way,but itwould be30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇），Itooksomepicturesof the bear.ElliandI fearedthe fencewouldnt lastthrough30more minutesofthe bears punishment.Thecampmanager suggestedIusepepperspray.Thespraybums thebearseyes,butdoesnt hurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.With anangry roar（吼叫），thebearran tothe laketo washhis eyes.注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1:A fewminutes later,thebearheaded backto ourcamp._____________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:At thatvery moment,the helicopterarrived._____________________________【答案】A fewminutes later,thebearheaded backto ourcamp,then werealized thespray hadonlyangered himeven more,fbr heseemed muchfiercer this time and violently pushed the fence likemad.My heartraced wildly,not knowingwhat todo.At thiscritical moment,Elli grabbedseveralpieces ofgarlicbread and threwthem overthefence.It worked!The bearstopped theattackand rantothebread.But itwasnt longbefore heeat upall thebreadandcame backagain.At thatvery moment,the helicopterarrived.Thank goodnesswearesaved!”Elli criedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wcgotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthe helicopterup inthe air,I wasamazed tothe spotthat thebear hadfinally toredown thefenceand rantowards thefoodwe leftbehind.Iquickly tookout thecamera andphotographed therarescene-we wererobbed bya polarbear.【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味,靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事【详解】

1.段落续写由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地“可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情

2.续写线索熊返回营地一紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面

3.词汇激活行为类

①激怒angcr/provokc/enrage

②抓起grab/snatch up

③拿出take out/fetch out情绪类

①疯狂的mad/crazy

②兴奋的:excited/thrilled【点睛】[高分句型1]thenwerealizedthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuch fiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.My heartraced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句）[高分句型2]My heartraced wildly,not knowingwhat todo.（现在分词作状语）[高分句型3]Once thehelicopter landed,we gotonto itin notime,excited andrelieved.（once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语）脱险类读后续写素材积累思路求助帮助感激升华自救I tooka deep breath and stayed calm,thinking howto savemyself outof thedanger.Later,I call an emergency phone.At thesame time,I sparedno efforts toyell soas to attract othersattention tooffer help.包扎伤口dress/bind upa woundStaycalm.Shout fbrhelp.Call an emergency number.Place bumsunder coolrunningwater.Dry theburnt areagently witha clean cloth.Cover theburnt areawitha loosecleancloth.他救He immediatelychecked thesituation whereshe wastomakesure whethershewas safe.Later,he calledanemergencyphone.While waitingfor the ambulanceto arrive,he performed/carried outfirst aidontheinjured.溺水脱险Just atthe moment,Henry happenedto bepassing by.Hearing thecry,Henry rantotheriverside,threw offhis clothesand jumpedinto thewater quickly.He swamto Robertas fastas possibleand helpedR obertout.With aneffort,he savedRobert atlast.包扎伤口:dress/bind upa wound:The poorchild nevercried orprotested whenIwas dressingher wounds.施救者和被救者Rescuers foundvictims trappedseveral feetunderground.营救人员发现有受难者被困在地下几英尺处施救人员The army,soldiers,doctors,nurses,workers,rescuers,rescue team,pass er-by,firefighters,lifeguard施救措施自救take adeepbreathandstaycalm深呼吸和保持冷静spare noeffortstoyell竭底全力叫喊他救carry sb.toasafe place带某人去安全的地方callanemergencyphone打急救电话wait fortheambulanceto arrive等救护车到来perform/carry outfirst aidon...对...进行急救do mouth-to-mouth breathing做人工呼吸press thechest按压胸口挖地道通向tunnel theirway into向.....靠拢work theirway towards救援工具担架stretcher绷带bandage救护车ambulance睡袋:sleeping bag急救箱first-aid kit训练有素的狗trained dogs涂抹药apply medicine/cream灾难中人物动作描述扭腿/腰/踝关节twist/sprain legs/waist/ankle摔跤fall流血bleed滑倒slip抓住hold onto sth爬进crawl in蹲伏crouch情绪类A floodof fearwelled upin him.With hisheart beatingviolently,Tom burstout crying.A senseof strengthimmediately replacedthe increasingfear andanxiety inJanesmind.。