七年级下册 Unit 5作文指导（教师版）

七年级下册写作课学案（教师版）Unit5Here andNow”

一、写作指导（-）写作话题主题描述你或他人正在进行的活动（如家庭、学校、公园等场景）时态要求现在进行时（）am/is/are+V-ing常用句型•I am.../He/She is.../We/They are...•Look!...is V-ing...•Right now,...are V-ing...

（二）写作素材家庭场景

1.•活动做饭、看电视、打扫、玩游戏等•例句Its Sundayevening.My motheris cookingdinner in the kitchen.My fatheris watchingthe newson thesofa.I amdoing myhomework,and mylittle sisteris playingwith hertoys.学校场景

2.•活动上课、运动、午餐时间等•例句Its10a.m.We are having an English class.The teacheris writingon theblackboard.Some students aretaking notes,and othersare askingquestions.户外场景（公园/操场）

3.•活动散步、运动、野餐等•例句The sunis shining.Many peopleare joggingin thepark.A groupof children are flying kites,and twooldmen are playing chessunder atree.

（三）写作模板开头交代时间、地点、天气等背景中间分句描述不同人物/群体的活动（用现在进行时）结尾总结感受或场景氛围例文A BusyAfternoon inOur SchoolIts4:30p.m.,and ourschool isfull ofenergy!On the playground,some studentsare playingfootball.Others are running aroundthe track.In thelibrary,a fewquiet kidsare readingbooks.The musicroomis noisybecause theband ispracticing anew song.Everyone isenjoying theirtime here!

（四）易错点漏掉动词

1.beShe playing basketball.She isplaying basketball.动词未加

2.-ing□They areplay games.□They are playing games.混淆现在进行时和一般现在时

3.（一般现在时表习惯）□He usuallyis watching TV.□He is watchingTVnow.

二、综合训练（-）基础翻译练习（单句）将以下句子翻译成英语，注意现在进行时的结构（）am/is/are+V-ingo我妈妈正在厨房做饭

1.一My motheris cookingin thekitchen.看！那些男孩在操场上踢足球

2.一Look!Those boysareplayingfootball on theplayground.现在是晚上点，我爸爸在看电视

3.7—Ifs7p.m.now.My fatheriswatchingTV.不要吵，我的妹妹正在写作业

4.—Dont makenoise.My sisteris doingher homework.公园里，一些老人在下棋，孩子们在放风筝

5.—In thepark,some oldmen areplaying chess,and thechildrenareflyingkites.

（二）进阶翻译练习（复合句）翻译时需注意时间状语、地点状语和并列动作现在是周末，我和朋友们在商场购物，我的弟弟在家打游戏

1.—Its theweekend.My friendsand I are shoppingat themall,and mybrother isplaying gamesathome.教室里，老师正在黑板上写字，学生们在记笔记

2.一In theclassroom,the teacheris writingon theblackboard,and thestudentsare taking notes.天气很好，许多人在海滩上晒太阳，还有一些人在游泳

3.一The weatheris nice.Many peopleare sunbathingonthebeach,and someare swimming.午餐时间到了，同学们在食堂排队，有的在聊天，有的在看手机

4.一Its lunchtime.The studentsare liningup in the canteen.Some arechatting,and othersare lookingattheir phones.

（三）纠错与解析以下翻译有错误，请改正并说明原因

1.She islisten tomusic now.She islistening tomusic now.一动词必须加（规则:去加）listen-ing eing

2.They areplay basketballafter school.They areplayingbasketballafter school.一现在进行时需用（直接加）playing-ingo

3.□Look!The birdsing in the tree.Look!The birdis singingin thetree.一缺少动词，且需变be singsingingo

（四）场景速写翻译（小段落）根据中文提示，用现在进行时写一段话（词左右）50场景周末的动物园，游客们正在观看动物，有的拍照，有的喂食参考范文Its Sundaymorning.Many visitorsare atthe zoo.Some are taking photosof thelions,and othersarefeeding themonkeys.The childrenare laughinghappily.Everyone ishaving agreat time!

（五）作文题目（三选一）《》（描述家人早晨的活动）

1.A BusyMorning inMy Home《》（描写课堂上同学们正在做的事情）

2.What AreWe Doingin theClassroom《》（描述公园里人们的活动）

3.A Happy Afternoon inthe Park要求•使用现在进行时（）am/is/are+V-ing•包含时间、地点、天气等背景信息•至少个句子，词左右5-860-80范文《》1A BusyMorning inMy Home（描述家人早晨的活动）It is7:30a.m.on asunny Mondaymorning.My familyis verybusy.My motheris cookingbreakfast inthekitchen.My fatheris readingthe newspaperand drinkingcoffee.My littlebrother is brushing histeethinthebathroom.I am packing myschoolbag becauseI dontwant tobe late.Everyone isin ahurry,but weare happy!亮点分析•时间、天气背景清晰（）7:30a.m.,sunny Monday•使用等现在进行时is cooking/is reading/isbrushing/ampacking•结尾表达感受（）happy范文《》2What AreWe DoingintheClassroom（描写课堂上同学们的活动）Its9:00a.m.,and wearehavinganEnglishclass.Our teacher,Ms.Li,is writingnew wordson theblackboard.Some studentsaretaking notes carefully.Two boysare whispering,but the teacher asksthemto stop.I am listening totheteacherand tryingto understandeverything.Learning Englishis fun!亮点分析•课堂场景生动（）whispering,takingnotes•使用等现在进行时is writing/aretaking/are whispering/amlistening•结尾表达观点（）Learning Englishis fun!范文《叩》3A HpyAfternooninthePark（描述公园里人们的活动）Its awarm Sundayafternoon,and thepark isfull ofpeople.Some childrenare runningand laughing.Afew oldmen areplaying chessunder abig tree.A youngcouple is taking photosnear theflowers.Myfriends andIare sitting onthe grassand eatingice cream.Everyone isenjoying thesunshine!亮点分析•天气、地点明确warm Sundayafternoon,park•使用等现在进行时arerunning/areplaying/istaking/aresitting•结尾总结氛围enjoying thesunshine写作技巧总结开头交代时间、地点、天气

1.If s.../Today is...中间用现在进行时描述不同人物/群体的活动

2.结尾表达感受或总结场景

3.happy/fun/enjoying注意

4.不要漏掉动词♦be am/is/are动词记得加如♦-ing playing,eatingo。