湖南省衡南县第一中学高二下学期入学考试读后续写学案圣诞节的礼物导学案

高二入学考试读后续写圣诞节送礼物微情节语料整理阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Christmas Daywas ing.I wasjust a kid then,and mybig sistertold methere wasno Santa Claus.I fledtomy Grandmabecause shewould bestraight withme.I knewGrandma alwaystold methe truth.Grandma washome,and I told hereverything.She wasready forme.No Santa Claus!She shouted.Ridiculous!Dontbelieve it.That rumorhas beengoing aroundfor years,and itmakes memad,plain mad.”“Now,put onyour coat,and lets go.“Go where,Grandma Iasked.Where turnedout tobe KerbysGeneral Store,the onestore intown thathada littlebit ofjust abouteverything.As wewalked throughits doors,Grandma handedme tendollars.Takethis money,“she said,and buysomething forsomeone whoneeds it.Ill wait for youin the car.Then sheturnedand walkedout ofKerbys.I wasonly eightyears old.Id oftengone shoppingwith mymother,but neverhad Ishopped foranything allbymyself.The storeseemed bigand crowded,full ofpeople petingto finishtheir Christmasshopping.For afewmoments Ijust stoodthere,confused,holding thattendollar bill,wondering whatto buyand whoto buyitfor.Isuddenly thoughtof Bobby Decker,who wasakidwith badbreath andmessy hair.He satright behindme inMrs.Pollocks gradetwoclass.（休息、）Bobby Deckerdidnt havea coat.I knewthat becausehe neverwent out for recessduring thewinter.His motheralways wrotea note,telling theteacher thathe hada cough,but wekids knewthat Bobby Deckerdidnt havea cough,and hedidnt havea coat.I fingeredthe tendollar billwith growingexcitement.I wouldbuyBobby Deckera coat!I settledon ared one,which lookedreally warm,and hewould likethat.“Is thisa Christmaspresent forsomeone”the ladybehind thecounter askedkindly,as Ilaid myten dollarsdown.Yes.注意续写词数应The nicelady smiledat me,put the coat ina bagand wishedme aMerry Christmas.

1.为左右；

150.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2Paragraph l:That evening,Grandma helpedme wrapthecoatin Christmaspaper.Paragraph2:Grandma andI waitedbreathlessly in the bushfor Bobby Decker sfront door to open.Step1:Analyze thereasons whyyou aremarked with an undesirablylow grade.本次读后续写的主要问题在于没看懂或忽略了第二段首句中的重要信息，如（气喘吁吁地）breathlessly以及（灌木丛），导致第二段的情节设置出现了较为严重的方向性的错误其他问题bushStep2:Accumulate thechunks orsentences forcertain plots.其中挖空部分为通用词块，请重点掌握Para1:Thal evening,Grandma helpedme wrapIhe coalin Chrislmaspaper.微情节准备工作（包装礼物+告诉奶奶礼物是送给）1Bobby Decker

1.While she was packingthe present,I toldthe storyof Bobby Decker toher indetail andshe washappy toknowmy decisionto helpsuch anunlucky boy.（仔用土也附上——张圣诞节贺卡）（上面写着）（

2.She even2on the box,“To Bobby,Merry）Christmas!/Have awarm winterFrom Santa（留下线索为第二段埋下伏笔）Claus”chie/note,微情节出发去送礼物

23.（所有东西都准备就绪）,Grandma suggested,Let5sgoto BobbyDecker5s houseand gavehim aChristmassurprise!”（没有任彳可延误）,

4.we setoutforBobbys homethe special gift.微情节放下礼物并快速离开3（——至）

5.Ij/RIL,Grandma andI gotoff thecar quietlyand placedthe presentgently infront of the door.（冲至）（躲藏）Then,I ranghis door bell and then weU thecar and hid ourselves behind the bush.

6.A whilelater,we arrivedwhere Bobbylived.I tooka deepbreath,dashed forhis frontdoor,threw the（用力敲门）present downon hisstep,and flew back to the safety ofthe bushes and Grandma.Paia2Giandma andI waitedbreathlessly in thebushfbr BobbyDeckers frontdoortoopen.微情节观察收到礼物时的情绪和动作描写4Bobby（出来了）或者

7.Immediately,BobbyDeckerAt thegate stoodBobbyDecker.

8.As henoticed/spotted thebeautiful boxon theground,he wassurprised atfirst.But soonhe_unfolded/unwrapped/opened the present/package and tried on the warm coat,yelling,Its thefirstcoat in my life!Thank you,Santa Claus.”lO.Having knownthe presentwas givento himspecifically,Debby jumpedwith joy,Santa Clausknew my我和奶奶的情绪和动作描写（此句讲义上没desire/My prayergot answeredI heardhis loudvoice clearly.有）

10.A warmcurrent floodedin myheart when I saw him wear the bright red coat.

11.Seeing this,Grandma andI smiledwith satisfaction.

12.Joy mingledwith gratitudewas writtenon Bobbysface.Seeing this,Grandma andI casta satisfiedsmile at（此句讲义上没有）each other.感悟主题

14.On theway backhome,Grandma saidwith asmile,“Now,you seethe essence/true meaningof Santa Claus或者what Santa Claus isall about.Of course,Grandma wasright.Santa Clausdoes existand itcan beanyonetrying tofort andwarm otherswith akind andwarm heart.或者

15.1know fromthe bottomof myheart thatNot untilthe momentdid Ie torealize thatwhere thereexistskindness andlove,there isSanta Claus.（高兴地尖叫起来）“Mom,SantaClaussent/delivered mea gift!”（好奇的）

9.Seeing nothingbut thegift box,Debby wascurious and picked up the card.Its a gift from Santa（打开礼物Claus!”Bobby shoutedexcitedly with hands waving inthe air.Grateful anddelighted,Bobby盒）（大叫）,飞andtriedon thewarmcoat,yelling“It thefirst coatinmylife!Thank you,SantaClaus.”微情节我和奶奶的情绪和动作描写一5（一股暖流流淌在我心房）

10.whenIsawhimwearthebrightredcoat.（满意地笑了）.

11.Seeing this,Grandma andI微情节感悟主题

612.On theway backhome,Grandma saidwith asmile,“Now,you see（圣诞老人的真帝）（存在）i Ofcourse,Grandma wasright.SantaClausdoes existand itcan beanyonetrying tofort andwarm otherswithakind andwarm heart.或者（哪里有爱，哪里就

13.It suddenlydawned onme thatNot untilthe momentdid Ie torealize that有圣诞老人）.参考答案

1.While she was packingthe present,Itoldthe storyof BobbyDecker toher andshewashappy toknow mydecisionto helpsuch anunlucky boy.（

2.She evencarefully attacheda Christmascard onthebox,saying/reading ToBobby,Merry Christmas!/Havea nicewinter）From SantaClaus*11（留下线索clue/note）出发去送礼物

3.Having allstuff prepared,Grandma suggested,“Lets goto BobbyDeckers houseand gavehim aChristmassurprise!

4.Without anydelay,we setout fbrBobbys homewith thespecialgift.

5.Upon arrival,Grandma andI gotoff thecar quietlyand placedthepresentgently infront ofthe door.Then,Irang hisdoorbellandthenwe dashed/zoomed towardsthecarandhidourselvesbehindthebush.

6.A whilelater,we arrivedwhere Bobbylived.I tooka deepbreath,dashed forhis frontdoor,threw thepresent downon hisstep,.观察收到礼物时的情绪和pounded hisdoor andflewbacktothesafetyofthe bushesandGrandmaBobby动作描写.或者

7.1mmediately,out wentBobbyDeckerat thegate/inthehallway stoodBobbyDecker.

8.As henoticed/spotted thedelicate boxontheground,hewassurprised atfirst.But soonhe erupteda joyfulyell:Mom,SantaClaussent/delivered mea gift!”

9.Seeing nothingbut thegift box,Debby crouchedandpickedupthecard.If sagiftfromSantaClaus!”Bobbyshouted excitedlywithhandswavingintheair.Grateful anddelighted,Bobby。