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续写两篇续写一Take careof each otherI wasvisiting my sister andwatched asmy fifteen-year-old nephew,Ben,emptied thetrash withoutbeing;asked.Youre sucha greatkidI toldhim.He smiled.The trashis my job.Tm ATTaround here.”At myconfused look,mysisterMandy explainedthat ATTstood forAll ThingsTrash.Emptying thetrashhas alwaysbeen Ben9s job.If ithas anythingto dowith trash,no matterwhere itis,its Bensjob.Andsweeping thefloor isAnnas job;she isATS aroundhere.”I nodded.That makessense.”A fewdays later,I wasback home.I hada deadlinefor ahuge projectat work,and I was reallyfeeling thepressure.Before Ipicked upmy sonfrom schoolthat afternoon,I hadbought aroast chickenfor dinner.Thatwould buyme anextra hourto workon myproject.Now,it was6:00p.m.,and Iwas busywith myproject.My kidswere downstairswatching TV.Myeleven-year-old son,Nathan,came upstairs and said,“Mom,Im gettinghungry.Can youwarm upthe chickennow”“In alittle bitJ Ianswered withoutlooking upfrom thecomputer.;Ten minuteslater,my olderson,Jordan,came into tell me thesame thing.Til doit soonI said.Fifteen minutesafter that,my eighteen-year-old daughter,Julia,made thesame request.I gotangry.Every one of youis oldenough toput aroast chickenin themicrowave JI nearlyshouted.You guysare watchingTV whileIm workingon somethingimportant.Tm tiredof beingATFT“ATF”“AH ThingsFood.Ifs myresponsibility toplan themeals,shop fbrthe food,cook thefood,and thencleanup thedishes afterward.And sincewe eatthree timesa day,its ahuge job.I dontwant toyell at you guysagain,but Imbusy now,and Idefinitely coulduse somehelp.”Twenty minuteslater,my kidscame upstairswith a plate filledwith chickenand cheese.The nextday,when Juliacame homefrom herjob,she wascarrying severalbags offood.【原文大意】
1.在姐姐家的见闻“我”去看望姐姐时,看到15岁的外甥本主动倒垃圾本称倒垃圾是他的工作,他是家里的“ATT”(All ThingsTrash,负责所有与垃圾有关事务),而扫地是安娜的工作,她是“ATS”
2.回家后的状况几天后“我”回到家,工作上一个大项目临近截止日期,压力很大接儿子放学前“我”买了烤鸡当晚餐晚上6点,“我”忙于项目,孩子们在楼下看电视11岁的儿子内森、大儿子乔丹、18岁的女儿朱莉娅先后上楼让“我”热烤鸡“我”很生气,抱怨自己是“ATF”,每天三餐,工作量大,希望孩子们能帮忙【续写思路】根据上文和第一段首句Twenty minuteslater,my kidscame upstairswith aplate filledwith chickenand可知,第一段主要是通过我和孩子之间的交流,推动情节的发展具体可以写孩子们道歉,表cheese.达对“我”压力的理解,并邀请“我”吃饭;也可以写“我”为刚才的态度表示歉意,并解释压力大的原因,以及看到孩子变化后“我”的欣慰之情;另外由第二段首句而必皿融加口“TT/e/w”came homev可知第一段要写孩子们决定接下来要分工做家务from herjob,she wascarrying severalbags offood.或者“我”给他们分工做家务,以便让“我”全力完成临近截止日期的大项目ATF,ATT,ATS...,根据第二段首‘句The nextday,when Juliacame homefrom herjob,she wascarrying severalbags offood.可知,孩子们已经按照昨天的计划开始进入角色,可以是三个孩子一起也可以是孩子们按照ATF,ATF,等分工合作,合理即可之后要写“我”看到孩子们变化后的欣慰之情升华要紧扣题目ATTATW,家人之间相互关心、相互照顾才能让家庭更和睦,生活更幸福Take careof each other”【答案】Twenty minuteslater,my kidscame upstairswith aplate filledwith chickenand cheese.Mum yourfoodJ Nathansaid gently.I lookedup,saying withembarrassment Sorry,I yelledatyouguys.”“We understand,Mum.Whens yourdeadline”Jordan asked.In twodays,and Idont knowhow Imgoing tofinish.Tearsthreatened asI thoughtabout howmuch workI stillhad todo.Seeing this,Julia lookedat herbrothers andsaid.For thenext twodays,the threeof usare ATF.Lets leaveMom alone.77wordsThe nextday,when Juliacame homefrom herjob,she wascarrying severalbags offood.Seeing this,herbrothers ranto helpher quickly.An hourlater,Nathan cameupstairsandhanded meaplatecontaining aturkeysandwich,some chipsand appleslices.He smiled,whispering“I hopeyour workis goingwell.I laughed,tooka bite,and thankedhim witha smile.I hadalways feltit wasmyjobas amom totake careof myfamily,but theyshowedme thatits ourjob totake careof eachother.81words续写二伐木工Dad hadbeen alumberjack.As yearspassed on,he becameangry wheneverhe couldntdosomething hehad doneas ayounger man.Four daysafter hissixty-seventh birthday,Dad hada heart attack andwas rushedinto the hospital.Hesurvived.But hispassion forlife wasgone.My husband,Dick,and Iinvited Dadto livewith uson oursmall farm.We hopedthe freshcountryside airwouldhelp himadjust.Within aweek afterhe movedin,I regretted.He complainedat everythingI did.Soon Iwastaking myanger outon Dick.We beganto quarrel.The nextmonth I called eachof themental healthcenters around.I explainedmy problemto eachof them,but invain.Just whenIwasgiving up,oneof them said,u Ijust readan article,which describeda groupofpatients undertreatment fordepression.Their healthhad improvedgreatly whengiven responsibilityfor a dog.This mighthelp you.”I droveto the animal shelterthat afternoon.After Ifilled outa form,an officerled meto arow ofcages.As猎I nearedthe lastcage,adogin thecorner struggledto walkto thefront and sat down.It wasa pointer犬.The poorconditions putyears onhis face.But hiseyes,calm andclear,locked onmine.I pointedto the dog.Can youtellmeabout him”The officerlooked,then shookhis head.Hes appearedoutof nowhereandsatin frontofthegate.We callit Cheyenne.”I drovehome withthedog.Reaching thehouse,Icalledloudly,u Ta-da!Look whatI gotfor you!”Dadlooked,but thenignored me.Did youhear me”I shouted.We stoodglaring ateachother,when suddenlythepointer wobbledtoward mydad andsat down.Then slowly,he raisedhis paw.Dad remainedsilent Thepointerwaited patiently.Then Dadwas onhis kneespicking uptheanimal.349wordsPara
1.It wasthe beginningof awarm andlo vingfriendship.Para
2.Later onenight,my husbandand Iwoke upby thebarking ofCheyenne.【原文大意】父亲的变故父亲曾是伐木工,随着年龄增长,做不了年轻时能做的事就会生气岁生日后四天,L67父亲心脏病发作被送医,虽保住性命,但没了对生活的热情.接父亲同住及矛盾“我”和丈夫迪克邀请父亲到小农场同住,希望乡村新鲜空气能帮他调整状态2可父亲搬来一周内,对“我”做的一切都抱怨,“我”因此和迪克吵架.寻求解决办法第二个月,“我”联系周边心理健康中心求助无果就在打算放弃时,有中心工作3人员称,让抑郁症患者照顾狗可改善健康状况,这或许有用.领狗回家当天下午“我”去动物收容所,填完表格后,工作人员带“我”看笼子里的动物在最4后一个笼子旁,一只猎犬引起“我”注意,它来历不明“我”带它回家,向父亲展示,父亲起初无视,后猎犬走向父亲,父亲沉默,最终(跪下)抱起它kneel【续写思路】根据上文和第一段首句可知,第一段主要围绕父亲It wasthe beginningof awarm andloving friendship.和友谊发展过程展开在的陪伴下,父亲发生了很大变化抱怨减少,脾气变好,Cheyenne Cheyenne开始有自己的休闲活动,心情和身体情况改善,和“我”关系改善等均是合理内容根据第二段首句.可知,父亲出现Later onenight,my husbandand Iwoke upby thebarking ofCheyenne了突发情况,例如摔倒、生病等均可,在的帮助下,“我们”及时发现,及时就医,挽救Cheyenne了父亲的生命父亲和有了更深的感情升华部分的方向是人与动物的和谐关系Cheyenne【答案】It wasthe beginningof awarm andloving friendship.Dad namedthe pointerCheyenne.Every dayhewalked Cheyennetwo orthree timeson thefarm.At home,Cheyenne followedDad everywhereand wasalwayslying quietlyat hisfeet whenDad satthere.Several monthslater,they beganto spentlong hoursexploringthe neighborhoodand enjoybeing outdoorstogether.Gradually,Dad stoppedcomplaining atwhat Ididand eventook upnew hobbies,like fishingor gardening.I reallyappreciated Cheyenne,who helpedDad getoutof depressionand enjoylife again.85wordsLater onenight,my husbandand Iwoke upby thebarking ofCheyenne.We watchedthe anxiousdog andimmediatelyrealized somethingmight bewrong withDad.We raninto Dadsroom.He waslying inbed andhisface waspale——he wassuffering aheartattackagain.We rusheddad tothe hospitalat once.Fortunately,Dadreceived timelytreatment andwas outof danger.After leavingthehospital,Dad andCheyenne spentmore timewitheachother.With hisfurry friend,Dad spentthe restof hislife happily.78words。
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