读后续写之父爱如山：排除万难参加女儿婚礼 讲义--高考英语备考写作专项

读后续写之父爱如山排除万难参加女儿婚礼讲义读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文（飓风）Despite theterrible influencesof HurricaneHelene,David Jones set foodon（婚礼）.a hardjourney tomake surethat hecould arriveon timeand forhis daughtersweddingWhathad beensupposed tobe atwo-hour drivefrom SouthCarolina toJohnsonCity,Tennessee,turned intoa tiring

12.5-hour suffering,full ofdangerous roads,milesof walking,and near-death experiences.Jones lefthome,expecting astraight andsimple driveto his daughter ElizabethMarquezswedding.However,fallen treesblocked manyroads alongInterstate26,forcing Jonesto changehis roadsmany times.By2A.M.,he finallycrossed intoTennessee,only tobe toldby astate policemanthat allroads aheadwere closed.Despite thediscouraging news,Jones refusedto giveup hisjourney.You haveto（通道）understand.My daughtersgetting marriedat11:00tomorrow morning,and Imgoingto bethere towalk herdown thepassage/he explained.With nothingbut hiscellphone lightto guidehim,Jones setoff onfoot throughdeep darkfields,leaving hiscarbehind.His longan（d残ri骸sk）y pathwas filledwith greatchallenges,i；ncluding climbingoverpiles ofdebris sixto sevenfeet tall,and atone pointbecoming stuckin dirtywateras adigging machineworked dangerouslyclose by.Jones rememberedencouraging himselfall thetime ashe struggledto freehimself/I wasup to my kneesin deepwater andcouldnt move.I hadto restin thewaterfor awhile andgathered strengthto getmyself outof terriblesituation.However,whatever thedifficulty,I neverconsidered givingup.”After freeinghimself andgetting backhis lostshoe fromthe water,Jones struggledthroughmore debrisuntil awonder appearedin theform ofa truck.注意.续写词数应为左右

1150.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答2Para.lJones managed to stop the truck and found the driver was an old friend,Mark.Para.2When theyfinally arrived,the weddingwas aboutto begin.

一、文本分析本文讲述了在飓风的影响下，为了按时参加女儿的婚礼，经历了一段艰难而危险的旅程原本计划的两小时车程变成了长达小时的艰难跋涉,充满了危David JonesHelene险的道路、步行和近乎死亡的经历尽管遭遇重重困难，始终没有放弃，展现了他对

12.5家庭的责任感和坚定的决心Jones

二、情节梳理出发前往女儿婚礼，预计两小时车程

1.Jones.遇到飓风导致的树木倒伏，多次改道

2.凌晨点抵达田纳西州，被告知前方道路封闭

32.在黑暗中步行穿过田野，途中经历诸多危险，如攀爬高堆残骸、陷入泥水等

4.最终遇到一辆卡车，发现司机是他的老朋友5Mark

三、情绪变化初始满怀期待（认为旅程会顺利Jones hopefuland expectant],遇阻面对道路封锁和危险，感到沮丧但未放弃odisappointed坚定在困境中不断鼓励自己，决心克服一切困难odetermined希望遇到卡车时，情绪转为欣喜发现司机是老朋友后更加欣慰Odelighted,relieved

四、续写情节分析Para.l Jones managedto stopthe truckand foundthe driverwas anold friend,Mark.情节衔接前文提到遇到了一辆卡车，揭示卡车司机是的老朋友这一情节可以增加故事的情感Jo深n度es和惊喜元素Jones Mark,衔接描述与的互动，包括对的援助以及两人之间的对话，展现的急切和的善良1Jones MarkMark JonesJones Mark如可写重逢的惊喜认出两人短暂交流，决定帮助完成旅程Mark Jones,Mark Jones衔接可描述车上主动提出载前往婚礼现场，两人在车上可以分享一些回忆或对2女儿婚礼的M期ar待kJonesJones衔接结合所给句，可知段一尾句可写他们快马加鞭赶往婚礼现场，不管遇到什么阻碍3para.2Para.2When theyfinally arrived,the weddingwas aboutto begin.衔接结合所给句，可知和终于抵达婚礼现场，婚礼即将开始，因此可描述婚礼的场面，如宾客们已经就座等1Jones Mark衔接参加的是女儿的婚礼，因此重要人物的女儿也该闪亮登场可2描述Jones看到父亲赶到，感到惊喜和感动；Jones在众人的E注liz视ab下et走h向女儿，完成他作为父亲的Eli使za命beth Jones衔接结局升华通过的坚持和的帮助，故事以温馨和感人的场景结束，强调父爱可3以排除万难Jones Mark

五、句子翻译，完成续写一一先试着翻译，再参考译文设法拦下了卡车，发现司机是他的老朋友（首句已给出）ljones Mark满心宽慰地走向车窗，看到了熟悉的面孔

2.JonesMark是你吗惊讶地喊道3/David Mark点了点头，声音因激动而颤抖

4.Jones我得去参加我女儿的婚礼道路封锁了，我已经走了好几个小时”

5.“Mark,立刻打开车门，把拉进了驾驶室

6.Mark Jones.“你运气真好我正好往那边去我们这就过去”

7.当他们最终到达时，婚礼即将开始（首句已给出）8看到宾客们正在聚集，仪式即将开始

9.Jones.他急匆匆地走向入口，心跳加速10看到了他，跑过来紧紧拥抱他，脸上满是喜悦的泪水

11.Elizabeth.爸爸，我就知道你会来的！”她哽咽着说道12紧紧抱住她，心中涌起一股深深的感激

13.Jones.他做到了，没有什么能阻止他在这个特别的日子里陪伴女儿14

六、参考译文

1.Jonesmanagedto stopthe truckand foundthe driverwas anold friend,Mark.

2.Overwhelmed withrelief,Jones approachedthe windowand sawMarks familiarface.

3.“David Isthat you”Mark exclaimed,clearly surprised.

4.Jones nodded,his voicetrembling withemotion.「r5Mark,I needto getto mydaughters wedding.The roadsare closed,and Ivebeen walkingfor hours//

6.Mark immediatelyopened thedoor andhelped Jonesinto thetruck.・r17Youre inluck.Tm headingthat way.Let sget there/

8.When theyfinally arrived,the weddingwas aboutto begin.

9.Jones couldsee theguests gatheringand theceremony aboutto start.

10.His heartraced ashe hurriedtowards the entrance.

11.Elizabeth spottedhim andran toembrace him,tears ofjoy streamingdown herface.

12.“Dad,I knewyoud makeit!”she said,her voicechoked withemotion.

13.Jones heldher tightly,feeling awave ofgratitude washover him.

14.He had made it,and nothingcould havestopped himfrom beingthere forhisdaughter on this specialday.

七、参考范文Para.lJones managedtostopthetruckandfoundthedriverwasanoldfriend,Mark.Asfthe truckcame toa halt,Jonessheart leapedwith hope.The doorswung open,andthere stoodMark,a childhoodfriend he hadnt seenin years.David Isthat youMarkexclaimed,his eyeswide withsurprise.Jones nodded,his voicethick withemotion.fMark,its me.I needto gettomydaughters wedding.The roadsare closed,and IveHbeen walkingfor hours/Marks facesoftened.Get in.Ill getyou there.As theydrovethrough thedebris-covered streets,Mark listenedintently asJones recountedhisjourney.The twoold friendsshared storiesof thepast,their bondrekindling inthe faceofadversity.Para.2When theyfinally arrived,the weddingwas aboutto begin.Jones couldsee theguestsgathering,and theceremony wasmoments away.His heartraced ashe hurriedtowardstheentrance.Elizabeth spottedhim andran toembrace him,tears ofjoystreaming downher face,Dad,I knewyoud makeit!”she said,her voicechoked withemotion.Jones heldher tightly,feeling awave ofgratitude washover him.He hadmadeit,and nothingcould havestopped himfrom beingthere forhisdaughteronthisspecialrday.With Marks help,hehadfulfilled hispromise.As hewalked herdown theaisle,Jones knewthat thelove ofa fatherand thekindness ofa friendhadmadeall thedifference.。