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检测读后续写解析读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文（哀号）（嘎吱响）A wailcut throughthe freezingwinter air,overpowering thesound of icecrunching beneathmy snowboots.This scarysound couldonly havecomefrom ananimal inpain.I stoppedto scanthe frozenlake Iwas hikingaround,and（番羽腾）spotted afurry headwildly movingup anddown througha holein the ice aboutthirtyfeet fromthe shoreline.It wasa largebrown dog.His shoulderschurnedviolently inthe bitterwater ashis pawssplashed his face withicy water.Without asecond thought,I tookoff mygloves quicklyand tappedout9-1-1onmy phone,my fingernumb withurgency.A secondwail filledthe air.Thats whenI sawa smallboy aheadof meon thepath,（拽）his facea pictureof anxiety.“Please,Daddy,save our dog!”he screamed,tugging on the sleeveof amanbeside him.His fatherleft hisside andcautiously steppedonto theedge of the lake,testing theice beneath his bootsas heinched acrossthe frozensurface towardthestruggling dog.Stop!”I yelledout tothe man,trying tostop hisrisky action.The icewas toothinto supporthis weight.My heartraced asI watchedthe fathersfeet sinkslightly intotheice witheach step.The boyscries grewlouder,a mixof fearand desperation.I hurriedover tothe littleboy,dropping tomy kneesbeside him,Its okay,I said,trying tocomfort himand makesure hedidnt attemptto followhis father.Meanwhile,aI kepta watchfuleye onthe father.We needto staysafe.The rescueteam ison theway.”开裂，As Ispoke,theicebehind the father letout aloud crackand whitelinesshot outfrom beneathhis feet.My shoulderstightened.I knewhe hadto turnaround注意and comeback.续写词数应为个左右；1请按如下格式在15答0题卡的相应位置作答2However,nothing seemedto holdthe fatherback.Overjoyed,the littleboy launchedhimself over his fatherand the shaking dog.主旨大意文章通过描述父亲在危险的冰面上营救自家狗的过程，展现了人与动物之间深厚的情感，以及父亲为拯救宠物所表现出的勇敢和坚定情节线开端“我”在湖边徒步时听到狗的哀号，发现一只棕色的狗在冰窟中挣扎发展“我”立即拨打同时看到一个小男孩央求父亲去救狗，父亲不顾“我”的劝阻，小心翼翼地踏上冰面朝狗走去，冰面开始出现裂缝911,高潮尽管冰面危险，父亲仍不为所动，继续前进，“我”担心父亲的安危，一边安慰小男孩，一边密切关注着父亲情感线紧张担忧文章开篇通过对狗在冰水中挣扎的描写，以及“我”看到父亲冒险踏上冰面，营造出一种紧张的氛围，让读者感受至『‘我”对狗和父亲安危的担忧急切焦虑小男孩的尖叫和哭泣，凸显出他对狗的担心和对父亲冒险行为的恐惧，进一步强化了这种紧张焦虑的情感主题句文章通过整个事件的描述，传达出“爱能让人勇敢面对危险”这一主题可以用以下句子来概括主题爱赋予人们面对危险的勇气范文一Love givespeople thecourage toface danger.However,nothing seemedto holdthe fatherback.With determinationwritten alloverhis face,he pressedon,his eyesfixed firmlyon his beloved pet.The icecontinuedto groanand crackbeneathhisfeet,but hepaid noheed.Inch byinch,he gotcloser tothe dog.Finally,he reachedout hisarm andgrabbed thedog byits collar.With allhismighOt,vheerjsotyaerdt,etdhteolipttullel bthoeyslahuivnecrhiendg hcrimeasteulfreovoeurthoifstfhaethiceyrawnadtetrh.eshaking dog.Tearsof reliefstreamed downhisfaceas hehugged themboth tightly.Thank you,Daddy!You savedourdog!”he sobbed.The father,exhausted butsmiling,ruffled his sons hair.At thatmoment,the rescueteam arrived.They checkedonthedog and the fathertoensure theywere okay.As theymade theirway backto safety,the bondbetween thefamily and their dog seemed even stronger,a reminderthat lovecan conquereven themost dangerous situations.生词注意；留心注意，留心呻吟；抱怨；发出嘎吱声呻吟；l.h叹ee息d；[h嘎ird吱]声n.v.弄乱；使2烦.g恼ro；an触[g怒raun皱]褶v.；生气；昆舌n.高级句式
3.ruffle[rAfl]v.n.7L（复合结构,独立主格结构）l.With determinationwritten alloverhisface,he pressedon,his eyesfixed firmlyonhisbelovedpet.with
2.As theymade theirway backto（引导时间状语从句，safety,the bondbetween thefamilyand theirdogseemedevenstronger,a reminder引导同位语从句）that lovecan conquereven themostdangeroussituations.as that范文二However,nothing seemedto holdthe fatherback.He ignoredthe crackingice andthedanger lurkingbeneath him.His onlythought wasto savehis dog.The dog,sensinghelp wasnear,struggled evenharder.Just asthefatherwas aboutto reachthedog,alarge sectionoficegave way.He plungedinto thefrigid water,but hedidnt letgo ofthedog.He foughtagainst thecold,using allhis strengthto keephimself andthe dogafloat.Overjoyed,the littleboy launchedhimself overhis fatherandtheshakingdog.Hewas sohappy tosee themsafe.The father,with thehelp ofthe rescueteam,managedto climb out ofthe water.The dog,still shivering,was wrappedin awarm blanket.Theboy huggedhis fatherandthedog,not wantingto letgo.The fatherlooked athis sonand said,“No matterwhat,I willalways protectour family,including ourdog.It wasamoment ofpure loveand couragethat noneof themwould everforget.生词潜伏；潜藏；暗藏
1.1urk[13k]v.使突然前冲（或下落）；猛插；骤降突然跌落；（价格、数量3等）骤2降.pl；un投ge入[plAnd]v.n.漂浮的；在船上的；经济上周转得开的；能维持下去的
3.afloat adj.adv.漂浮地；在船上；经济上周转得开地高级句式（动词不定式作表语）
1.His onlyth；ought wasto savehis dog.（
2.Th复e合fa结th构er）with thehelp ofthe rescueteam,managed toclimboutofthewater,witha（引导让步状语从句）
3.The fatherlooked athissonandsaid,No matterwhat,I willalways protectourfamily,including ourdog.no matterwhat。
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