高考英语书信写作学案

高考英语书信写作专项学案考纲解读高考英语写作以书信/邮件为核心题型（全国卷、新高考卷占比超）常考类型包括:70%,•正式书信申请信、推荐信、投诉信、建议信、邀请信（学术/商务场景）•半正式书信求助信、感谢信、告知信（师生/笔友交流）•非正式书信私人信件（朋友间沟通）分值分，评分核心维度25内容完整性覆盖所有提示要点，合理拓展细节

1.语言丰富性运用复杂句式、高级词汇、多样语法结构

2.逻辑连贯性恰当使用衔接词，段落层次分明

3.格式准确性正式/非正式书信格式规范

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一、书信写作高阶框架正式与非正式书信对比

1.维度正式书信非正式书信称呼语气礼貌、客Dear Sir/Madam,/Dear ProfessorSmith,Hi John,/Dear Tom,观、简洁亲切、随意、可使用缩写（如）句式复合句为主，避免口语化表达简单句+复合句结合，Wanna可使用感叹句结尾Yours sincerely,/Yours faithfully,Best wishes,/Love,签名全名（如）名（如）Li HuaHua三段式写作结构

2.开头段（句）1-2•直入主题I amwriting toapply for the scholarship/express myconcern about...•背景弓入I I am a senior studentfrom XHigh School,and Thave learnedfrom yourwebsite that...主体段（句）3-5•分点论述用或分层Firstly,Secondly,Finally Tobegin with,Furthermore,Lastly•细节支撑Each year,our schoolorganizes acharity event,during whichwe collectover1,000books forruralchildren.结尾段（句）1-2•礼貌请求I wouldappreciate itif youcould considermy application/provide feedback.•期待回复Looking forwardto yourprompt reply.

二、常考书信类型及高分模板类型申请信（大学/社团/职位）1:写作逻辑•资格证明学历/经历/技能（匹配申请要求）•动机说明为什么选择该机构/项目•附加优势独特经历或特长模板示例Dear Sir/Madam,I amLi Hua,aseniorstudent atHongxing HighSchool.I amwriting toapply forthe summervolunteer programadvertisedon yourwebsite.As thepresident of the schools EnvironmentalClub,I haveorganized severalcampus clean-up campaignsandsuccessfully reducedwaste by30%.Additionally,I holda certificatein first-aid training,which enablesme tohandleemergencies.What attractsme mostis yourorganization sfocus oncommunity service,as Ibelieve italignsperfectly withmy passionfor makinga positiveimpact.I wouldbe honoredto contributemy timeand skillsto yourteam.Please feelfree tocontact meat lihua@

163.comfor furtherinformation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua高级表达•替换I thinkFrom myperspective,/In myview,•强调匹酉己度My experienceshave uniquelyequipped meto...•突出热情I amdeeply passionateabout...and eagerto contribute.类型推荐信（推荐人/物）2写作逻辑•推荐人与被推荐人关系•具体事例证明能力/品质•结论性评价模板示例Dear ProfessorWang,I amwriting torecommend LiMing,one ofmy beststudents,fortheexchange programat youruniversity.As hisEnglish teacherfor threeyears,I havewitnessed hisexceptional academicperformance andleadershipqualities.Last year,he ledour schools debateteam towin thecity championship,demonstrating excellent一analytical thinkingand publicspeaking skills.What impressesme mostis hisdedication tolearning heoftenstays afterclass todiscuss complextopics andvolunteers totutor peers.I firmlybelieve LiMing scuriosity andprofessionalism makehim aperfect fitfor thisprogram.Please donothesitate tocontact meif you need furtherreferences.Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei高分技巧•用具体数据增强可信度scored95+in everyEnglish exam•引用评价:As hispeers oftensay,nLi Mingis thefirst tooffer helpand thelast toleave.n类型投诉信（产品/服务问题）3写作逻辑•礼貌开场，说明身份•清晰描述问题（时间、地点、细节）•提出合理诉求•表达期待模板示例Dear CustomerService Manager,（）I amwriting toexpress mydissatisfaction withthe laptoporder number:2024-03-15I purchasedfrom yourstorelast week.Unfortunately,the devicebegan overheatingand shuttingdown unexpectedlyafter justtwo daysof use.This hasseverelyaffected mywork,as Iam currentlypreparing mygraduation thesis.I havefollowed theuser manualfortroubleshooting butfound nosolution.I requesteither afull refundor areplacement unitas soonas possible.I trustyou willhandle thismatter promptly,asI havealways beena loyalcustomer of your brand.Looking forwardto yourreply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua语气把控•避免情绪化用…代替I wasdisappointed tofind Yousold mea brokenlaptop!•强调合理性Given thehigh priceoftheproduct,I expectit tomeet basicquality standards.

三、高考真题深度解析（年新高考卷）2023I题目假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友计划来中国留学，想了解中国大学的住宿情况请你写一封邮件回Jack复，内容包括,住宿类型（如宿舍、公寓）；

1.住宿费用；2周边设施（如食堂、图书馆）

3.审题分析•文体半正式邮件，语气友好且信息准确•时态一般现在时（介绍常规情况）•要点拓展宿舍双人间/四人间，价格区间元/学期，含公共浴室500-1500公寓单人间，价格元/月，独立卫浴+厨房2000-4000设施小时食堂、图书馆步行分钟、健身房免费开放2410高分范文Dear Jack,Glad tohear youre planningto studyin China!Let meshare somedetails aboutuniversity accommodationhere.Most universitiesoffer twomain types:dormitories andapartments.Dormitories arethe mostpopular choice,usually with2-4students perroom.The costranges from500to1,500yuan persemester,which isquite affordable.While bathroomsare shared,they rekept cleanand well-maintained.For moreprivacy,you canchoose anapartmentwith asingle room,priced between2,000and4,000yuan permonth.Apartments oftencome withaprivate bathroomand kitchenette.Around theaccommodation areas,you11find convenientfacilities.Most dormsarc withinwalking distanceofcampus canteensserving diverseChinese andWestern dishes.Libraries,gyms,and conveniencestores arealsonearby,making daily life easy.Many universitieseven haveshuttle busesconnecting differentparts ofthe campus.Hope thishelps!Let meknow ifyouneedmore tipson applyingfor housing.Best wishes,Li Hua亮点分析•句式多样（让步状语从句），（过去分词作定语）While bathroomsare shared...priced between…•数据支撑具体价格区间增强真实感•逻辑作『接Most universities...,For moreprivacy...,Around theaccommodation areas...

四、高级语言表达策略复杂句式升级

1.•名词性从句What impressedme mostwas hisability tosolve problemsunder pressure.•定语从句The project,which lastedthree months,successfully raisedfunds forchildren inrural areas.•非谓语动词Having gainedrelevant experience,Iamconfident inhandling theresponsibilities ofthis role.词汇升级表

2.普通表达高级表达例句thank appreciate,be gratefulfor1truly appreciateyour timelyhelp.good excellent,outstanding,remarkable Shehas maderemarkable progressin English.important crucial,vital,significant Timemanagement iscrucial forexam preparation.think maintain,hold the view thatI holdtheviewthat teamworkis essential.help assist,offer assistanceWe assistedthe elderlyin cleaningtheir apartments.逻辑连接词分类

3.•并列/递进besides,furthermore,in addition•转折however,nevertheless,on thecontrary•因果therefore,as aresult,consequently•总结in conclusion,to sumup,overall

五、写作误区与避坑指南常见错误错误示例修正版格式混乱称呼未顶格顶格书写Dear Sir,Dear Sir,时态错误I willvisit youwhen I will arrive in London.Iwillvisit youwhen IarriveinLondon.词性混淆Your patienthelped mea lot.Your patiencehelped mea lot.中式英语I verylike this book.I likethisbookvery much.标点误用I havethree hobbies,reading,painting andsinging.I havethree hobbies:reading,painting andsinging.

六、实战训练与范文题目你是李华，英国朋友来信说她正在学习中文，但不敢开口交流请你写一封回信，内容包括Alice鼓励她克服恐惧；

1.提供至少两条口语练习建议；

2.表达愿意帮助的意愿

3.写作提示•建议方向参加语言交换活动、观看中文影视剧、模仿发音•高级表达step outofyourcomfort zone,make gradualprogress参考范文Dear Alice,Iy msorry tohear youre hesitantto speakChinese,but pleaseknow its completelynormal tofeel nervousat first!Learning anew languagerequires courage,and everylearner startsfrom zero.To buildyour confidence,here aretwo practicaltips.First,join alanguage exchangegroup inyour cityor online.一Interacting withnative speakerswill helpyou getused toreal-life pronunciationand expressionsdont worryaboutmaking mistakes;everyone isthere tolearn!Second,watch ChineseTV showsor movieswith subtitles.Tryimitating thedialogues aloud,even fora fewminutes daily.This canimprove yoursense oflanguage rhythm.r dbe morethan happyto practicewith youvia videocalls.We canstart withsimple topicslike yourdailylifeandgradually moveto morecomplex conversations.Remember,every smallstep counts!Looking forwardto hearingyour progress.Best regards,Li Hua

七、评分细则与冲刺策略高考评分标准（分制）25档次分数核心要求第五档覆盖所有要点，句式丰富，语法错误处，逻辑严密21-25第四档要点齐全，有少量语法错误，衔接较合理16-20第三档覆盖主要要点，语法错误较多，内容基本连贯11-15冲刺提分技巧.模板默写每周背诵篇不同类型的范文，确保格式与结构烂熟于心

11.错题归类整理语法错误（如冠词、时态），制作“避错清单”2细节加分在申请信中加入具体奖项/数据，在建议信中引用研究结果

3.限时训练分钟内完成一篇书信，模拟考试节奏

4.40备考资源推荐•教材《高考英语写作专项突破》（涵盖近年真题范文）10•网站:（学习正式书信语气）BBC LearningEnglish•工具（检测语法错误，提升表达准确性）Grammarly通过“结构化框架+高级语言+细节打磨”三重训练，高考书信写作可实现从“完成任务”到“高分范文”的突破！。